写作专题复习教案

1、如何算是一篇好文章？1.覆盖了所有的要点2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3. Ending 小结；呼应主题一高考英语写作的五个基本步骤：1. 数要点：在读题干要求的时候，将要点逐一找出，用铅笔在试卷上勾画出来并标上序号，以免遗漏。2.列短语：根据要点内容列出一些可以运用到的词汇短语。3.想过渡：根据各要点之间，各段落间的关系在适当的位置加上过渡词，使文章紧凑，自然。4.再润色：在整篇文章中，努力避免只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种

2、句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等；改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序，可以把状语置于句首，或用分词等；尽量避免重复使用同一单词或词组。5.查语病：检查终稿有无语法，句子结构等方面的错误。例如一次考试中的这篇书面表达： 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。为何倾听：表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系谁来倾听：家长倾听孩子 理解孩子，消除代沟，老师倾听学生 了解学生，满足需求，同学相互倾听 增进友谊，互帮互学，怎样

3、倾听：（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举一至两点。）注意：对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。词数120左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”. Sample: Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship. Many people suggest that parent

4、s should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen mo

5、re to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Listen to others carefully with smile to show your respect and never stop others talk; be open-minded to different op

6、inions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. 学生习作1：In order to communicate better and get on well with each other, we should not only try to express but also learn to listen. Listening can show respect and promote understanding, w

7、hich will help set up better relationships. We should listen no matter who we are. As parents, we are supposed to listen to kids in order to understand them and get rid of the generation gap. As teachers, we ought to listen to students so as to know more about them and meet their needs. As classmate

8、s, we have to listen to each other so that friendship can be strengthened and we can help each other. How should we listen? In my opinion, a good listener should concentrate on what the speaker is saying. Only by understanding what hes saying can we improve relationships. Lets be good listeners!学生习作

9、2：As an increasing growth of importance of communication arises in the relationship between people, it is certain that people are in great need of being good listeners. Who are going to listen? Parents, of course play a paramount (very important) role in a childs life as listeners. It is listening t

10、hat enables parents to understand children and to tear down walls. The same goes for teachers, who are equally supposed to learn about their students and to meet their psychological needs. Friendship is also a source of listening. By listening to each other, friendship is gained and studying is prom

11、oted. As to the way of listening, it only takes affectionate and caring responses to those who are talking, which will make a considerable difference in a communication二增强书面表达效果的技巧1. 使用较高级的词汇：词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。2. 使用较丰富的句式：运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。3. 使用恰当的连接词：使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章

12、很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。（一）、怎样使用较高级的词汇：1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.We all think highly of him .3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly s

13、truck me.4.The students there neednt pay for their books.Books are free for the students there.5. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.7. She went to Austria

14、 in order to study music. She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.10.You can find my house easily.

15、Youll have no trouble finding my house. （二）.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was !2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.3、倒装句 e.g. On

16、ly in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.4省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.5with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.

17、6、定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.8、 各种状语从句 e.g. Ti

18、me passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily.

19、Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句)Weak

20、as I am, Ill make the effort.4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气） I couldnt have passed the physics ex

21、am but for your help. 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)Singing and laughing, they went back to school.8.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句）No ma

22、tter what he says, I wont believe. 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）Study hard and youll make rapid progress.10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (三).如何恰当的运用过渡词: (高考大纲中常用的连接词附

23、在后面）比如说：当我们在例举的时候，如果“第一”是用的First,那么在表达“第二” 的时候我们就不能用secondly.也就是说前后必须保持一致。再如常见的几个表示 “例如”的: namely, Such as, for example,学生经常用错，老师应该给予讲解。Such as常放在列举的事物和前面的名词之间，所列事物的数量不能等同于前面所提及事物的总数。而且后应该用一些单词或短语，可以和and so on & etc.连用；for example后面经常用一些完整的句子，一般只列举同类事物中的“一个”。 其位置灵活，可置于句首，句中或句末，用标点符号隔开。namely必须把所有的例子

24、都全部例出来，相当于that is的用法。此外在整篇文章的连贯性方面，也必须保持自然而不会让人觉得是在刻意的运用使文章显得格外生硬、呆板。 以下是我们考试当中的一篇例文的其中一段：First, you can take showers rather than baths and reduce your shower time. Its also essential to switch off all electric appliances when youre not using them, such as lights. Whats more, you should only buy the

25、 amount of food you need and if there are leftover food, get creative. For instance, make them into a soup. Remember to take your own lunch box to avoid using a disposable container. Last but not the least, carry your own reusable shopping bags when shopping. 在这一小段落中，First, Whats more和Last but not t

26、he least表示例举使文章很有层次；such as 和for instance都表举例但又不重复。这些都只是一些常见的例子，需要学生在写作过程中多加注意。 Practice 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west .3. It was not long _ the police came .4._he he

27、ard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.5. Do you agree with my arrangement ?_ , do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80.8. Eating sugar is

28、bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat. 常用的过渡词引导主题句或扩展句的常用语：At present, lately, now, recently, currently, generally speaking, generally, as a general rule, comparatively speaking, comparatively, in general, in a sense, in a way, to some extent, to a certain degree, as far as I am concerned, on a

29、personal level, personally, to ones point of view, immediately, directly, as soon as, for my part, at an individual level, it goes without saying, in some cases, in some respects, on a large scale, traditionally, unfortunately, obviously, undoubtedly, practically speaking, economically speaking, fin

30、ancially speaking, as is known to all / sb. , as a whole, to be honest, frankly speaking, as time goes on表示列举的常用语：First, second, in the first place, initially, first of all, to begin / start with, first and foremost, in the second place, next, also, besides, furthermore, moreover, in addition, whats

31、 more, beyond that, for one thing, for another, finally, eventually, for the time being, later on.表示比较的常用语：Similarly, in the same way, likewise, equally important, like, bothand, the same as, in common, be equal to, resemble.表示对比的常用语：On the one hand, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, un

32、like, in sharp contrast, whereas, rather than, conversely, instead, by contrast, while, contrary to表示递进的常用语：That is, in other words, or rather, exactly speaking, as it were, besides, in addition, moreover, whats more， whats worse表示原因的常用语：Because, because of, for, owing to, due to, as, since, as a re

33、sult of, thanks to, by reason of, for reasons of, on account of, The reason why is that ,表示举例的常用语：Such as, for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an example, as a case in point, as an illustration, namely, to name just a few, like, say, as follows, including 表示强调的常用语：Especially, particularly,

34、in particular，indeed, in fact, as a matter of fact, certainly, to be sure, above all, surely, most important of all, even worse, no doubt, more often than not, in any case, evidently, apparently, it goes without saying that, 表示结果的常用语：So, thus, hence, therefore, consequently, as a result, for this re

35、ason, as a consequence, on that account, accordingly表示总结的常用语：In a word, in conclusion, in short, in brief, in summary, on the whole, finally, to sum up, all in all, to conclude, therefore, consequently, in short, to summarize十一. 表示让步转折的常用语:but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, though, altho

36、ugh, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, otherwise, even if, after all, no matter how/ what/where/who，while.12种英语写作常用句型比较和对照关系的句型：1) A is to B what/ as C is to D(A之于B犹如C之于D).2) Just as., so.3) A and B have sth in common.4) A is similar to B.5) The same is true of，The same can be sai

37、d of(也是如此).6) The advantages of A are much greater than B.7) compared with B, A has many advantages.8) The advantages outweigh the disadvantages(利大于弊).9) Wonderful as A is, however, it has its own disadvantages too.10) Although A enjoys considerable advantage over., it can not compete with B in.11)

38、Contrary to widely accepted views, I believe that.12) What people fail to consider is that.13) It is one thing to insist that., it is quite another to show that.14) Nothing can rival(是无与伦比的).15) has drawbacks as well as merits.16) A is superior(inferior) to B.17) .varies from person to person(是因人而异的

39、)18) A is just the opposite (to B) 19) A differs from B in that(A不同于B在于)20) is not the same (as)过渡性句型： 1) this is true that.2) This is true, no doubt, but.3) .also.4) It is one thing to.; it is another to.描写图表和数据的句型1) . . rank first (both) in.2) . .in proportion to.3) A is by far the largest.4) As m

40、any as.5) The number is .times as much as that of .6) The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year.7) It accounts for 35% of.8) By comparison with ., it decreased/increased/fell from.to.9) .rise rapidly(slowly)10) .remain level.11) .reach .12)There is a slight/slow/steady/rapi

41、d rise/ increase /decrease/decline/reduction/fall/drop in demand /income. /population./prices. / production. 13) be on the increase/decrease/rise/decline (在不断的增加,减少,上升,下降)图表作文中的过渡、概括句型：1) As can be indicated in the table, .2) As we could find out later， .3) As is revealed in the table，.4) As the sur

42、vey results show，.5) This table provides several important points of comparison between，.6) The two graphs depict the same thing in .7) The key findings taken from the surveys are as follows:8) According to the figures given in the table, .9) This chart shows that .10) As is shown by the graph, .11)

43、 It can be seen from the statistics that .12) It is generally believed /accepted/thought/held .说明原因的句型:1) There are some/two/many good reasons for./to do.2) We have two good reasons for.3) The reason for . is that + 从句4) Among the most convincing reasons given by people for., one should be mentioned

44、.5) One may think of the trend as a result of.6) The change in. largely results from the fact that.7) There are several causes for this significant growth in. First.8) A number of factors could account for the .9) It is no simple task to give the reason for .10) The cause of /reason for higher price

45、s was an increase in demand.11) Because/As/Now that/Since the demand has increased, the prices are higher.12) An increase in demand causes/results in/leads to/produces higher prices.13) The demand has increased. 14) Therefore,/As a result,/For this reason,/Because of this,/Consequently, the prices a

46、re higher.15) If there is an increase in demand, then prices rise./go up. /boost./are higher.16) Different people look at.in different ways.表示不同看法的句型:1) Different people have/hold different opinions/views on the question/problem/matter. Some believe that .; Others argue that . :Still others maintain

47、 that .2) They are quite different from each other in their opinions.3) Some people hold the opinion that it is good to .4) They think quite differently on this question.5) Opinions vary from individual to individual, from culture to culture.表示必须,紧急,有困难做某事的句型:1) It is important (necessary, urgent, d

48、ifficult, easy, convenient, comfortable, expensive, desirable, advisable) for sb. to do sth.2) .have trouble/difficulty/a hard time/a difficult time (in) doing sth. (有困难做某事)用于文章开头的句型：1) Faced with.; quite a few people argue that.; But other people conceive differently.2) There is a general discussio

49、n today about the issue of.; Those who object to. argue that .;They believe that.; But people who favor ., on the other hand, argue that .3) Currently there is a widespread concern that.4) Now people in growing number are coming to realize that.5) Now it is commonly held that .; they think .; But I

50、doubt whether.6) Recently the issue of. has been brought to public attention.7) One of the great men once said that. Now more and more people share this belief.8) Until recently, . has been regarded as. But people are taking a fresh look at it.9) Sb. argues/maintains /holds/insists/believes that.10)

51、 More and more people are realizing /have come to realize.11) There is no denying/doubt that .用于文章结尾的句型：1) From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that .2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/speci

52、al emphasis on .3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of ., if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in.4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of., but. might be helpful/beneficia