上海中考英语作文专题指导

1、上 海 中 考 英 语 作 文 专 题 指 导 一、中考英语作文写作模式一一“四审四注意”写作法“四审”：一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基二审人称。如是以第一人称I或we为主还是以第二人称you或第三人称she, he, it或 they三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；四审内容。如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示来写，不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提开分解成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点，一般文章按who, when,where

2、, what, how, why等要素展开。“四注意”：一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，一定要写开头结尾。当然，开头和结尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结尾要点题，有所立意；二注意句式要富于变化，不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单调，否则即使无语言和内容错误也难得高分，如可适当运用if, when, although等状语从句，I think / Ihope / I believe that 等宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；三注意适当运用连接词，如 on one hand, on the other hand; what s more; however等，这样使文

3、章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题，做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿组织结构分。四注意善于运用有把握的词汇和句型，尽量运用课本所学词句，坚决避免不正确的“中国式英语，更不能乱“发明”，一般一篇文章能用8个左右的好短语或句式已 很不错。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分，词数不能太少也不能太多，笔者觉得，以80词左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析.时态错误.时间状语错误.名词单复数错误.动词误用.语态错误.词性误用.介词误用.某些搭配和惯用法误用中考英语总复习专项训练题写作专项训练A.中考英语热门写作话题1.关于学习W

4、rite a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ How to learn Englishwell ” . （ 以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考） When did you start learning English? （in . / . years ago） Howdo you learn English? （listen carefully, study with a group, read En

5、glish every day .） What is difficult to learn? （listening, grammar .）关于兴趣Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My interest ” . （以“我的兴趣”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考）What is your interest?Why do you like it so much?关于写事Write a passage of

6、 at least 60 words about the topic “ Unforgettable memories” （以“难忘的回忆”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考） What is your unforgettable memory?Why do you think it is unforgettable?关于计划Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My plan for summerholid

7、ay ” . （以“我的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考）What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday?Give at least two points.关于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My good friend ” . （以“我的好朋友”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the follo

8、wing points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考）Who is your good friend?What do you often do with him or her?Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?关于写人Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My English teacher（以“我的英语老师”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （

9、 以下内容供参考）Who is your English teacher?Do you like him or her?Why do you like him or her?关于英语Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ I changed my ways oflearning English ” . （以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于 60个词 的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考）How did you learn En

10、glish in the past?Why do you change your ways of learning English?How do you learn English now?关于旅行Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“An unforgettabletrip（ 以“一次难忘的旅行”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考）Where did you go?What did you do durin

11、g that trip?Why do you think it is unforgettable?关于动物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My favourite animal（以“我最喜欢的动物”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考）What s your favourite animal?Why do you like it so much?关于网上购物Write a passage of at le

12、ast 60 words about the topic“ Online shopping ischanging the way of our life ” . （以“网上购物正在改变我们的生活方式”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考）What s your view on online shopping?What are its advantages and dis-advantages?Please give one or two suggestions to your fr

13、iends if they love online shopping.关于学科Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “ Myfavourite subject（以“我最喜欢的学科”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （ 以下内容供参考）What s your favourite subject?Why do you like it best?关于变化Write a passage of at least 60 words abou

14、t the topic“ Changes in myself（以“我的变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 ）Use the following points as a reference. （以下问题可供参考）Have you had any changes in yourself since you came to the middle school?Which are the most important changes? （Give at least 2 examples）What do you think of the changes?关于节日Write a pas

15、sage of at least 60 words about the topic “ The Lantern Festival（以“元宵节”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 ）Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容供参考）Do you like the Lantern Festival and why do you like it?What do people usually do on the Lantern Festival?B. 提示性作文每个人都有自己的梦想，努力坚持终能实现。请根据下图及表格中所提供的信息写一篇文

16、章。【要求】所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥；介绍Tom谈谈你的梦想并自拟两点实现梦想的途径；文章不少于90 词；语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整。2015年中考英语总复习专项训练题（六）参考范文A.How to learn English wellknowEnglish is very important for us. Everyone wants to learn it well. Do you how to learn it well? Here are my ways:Firstly, I listen to the teacher and make note

17、s carefully in class. I review / go over my old lessons and prepare my new lessons after class.Secondly, I like speaking English with my classmates, not only in classroom, but also on the playground. It s important to improve my spoken English. Thirdly, I keep a diary every day to practise my writte

18、n English.Besides, I often read English newspapers and magazines in order to enrich my knowledge on English culture.My interestI have a wide range of interests and enjoy doing many things in my free time.I am a lover of reading. I often read in my spare time. I read many kinds of books and newspaper

19、. I like the stories and news in them very much. There are a lot of knowledge and interesting things as well. I am also a music lover.I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programmes on radio.Although I can t sing English songs well, I like them a lot. I like sports as well. I often

20、 play badminton after classes in the afternoon. I often run in the morning. When I am doing sports, I forget all my trouble and worry. Of course, sports can also help me in building my body.In short, I enjoy my life here in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful

21、to my health and my studies.Unforgettable memoriesHowtime flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure.Teachers are fr

22、iendly to us in life and always strict with us in study.Classmates and friends help meso much. With their help I ve madegreat progress. But I ma careless boy. And I always makemistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcom

23、ings. As it is said, “ It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice. ” The two-month holiday will also provide methe freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it. 4.My plan for summer holidayThe summer holiday is coming.

24、We will have plenty of time to enjoy ourselves. But I think we should plan the time carefully. We had better make a list of all the things we wish to do and try hard to keep a balance between work and play. In the holiday we can do many activities. For example, we can play with friends. We can do di

25、fferent sports. It is also meaningful for us to work as volunteers. Besides, we can do some reading. It can help get us prepared for the new term. I hope all of us will have a wonderful holiday.My good friendI have a good friend. Her nameis Susan. Sheis 14 years old. She s from America. She s a tall

26、 girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She s lovely and friendly. She gets o

27、n well with her friends. She s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I m lucky to have such a good friend.My English teacherOur English Teacher Ms Huang, came to our school two years ago. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years

28、. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years. She is kind and friendly to us after class, but she is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says, “ Practice makes perfect. ” She is good at teaching and tries her best to make

29、 every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us put on short English plays. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her. Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a med

30、al for her advanced deeds.I changed my ways of learning EnglishAs an international language, English plays a great character in our life.English has become more and more important to us. Therefore, I changed my way of learning English so that I can improve my English ability.In the past, I didn t li

31、sten to English news often. So I changed it. I began to listen to English songs. And I listened to the words of the song carefully in order to learn more words. Everytime when I met the words which I didn tknow, I would looked it up in the dictionary. And I always tried to remember it after looking

32、it up. After a month, I found that I knew more words than my classmates.I used to write as few words as I could. No doubt, I changed the help of my friends and my teacher, I tried to write more articles. Finally, I succeeded.I took up writing as a hobby and I will never forget it.I m glad that I cha

33、nged my way of learning English. And everything I changed will make me more and more interested in English.An unforgettable tripI went to Chongqing in July 22. It is a city which was built near mountains.So people call it Mountain City. In Chongqing, I went to the Red StoneCentre,to see the places w

34、hich the prisoners lived in the past. It is a terrible and awful trip. There were a lot of dogs, and soldiers with guns near the prisons. And most of the prisoners were good men. They didn t want to tell the bad people where the other people were. So they were put into the prison. They lived in very

35、 small houses. No good food to eat, no good water to drink. They had only twenty minutes to stay outside per day but they still said nothing. I think they are the heroes in that century. I will follow their spirit.My favourite animalMyfavourite animal is dog. I like it because it can help people in

36、manydifferent ways. Many, many years ago, dogs were already people s pets. They lived in caves with people. Dogs were very good helpers. They guarded the caves and kept people safe from danger.Nowadays, dogs are also people s pets. But some people are unkind to their dogs. They do not look after the

37、m and leave them in the street. We should be kind to dogs. They are our friends. They can help us do many things. They help the police catch thieves and find missing people. They also help blind people cross the road safely.Online shopping is changing the way of our lifeAs we all know, online shoppi

38、ng has become more and more popular among people especially the young people. We can buy nearly everything on the Internet. In my view, online shopping has already changed the way of our life. People tend to surf the Internet to buy what they need. I think the advantage of online shopping is its con

39、venience. People only sit in the soft and click the mouse at home to buy what they want. It can save people a lot of time and money.The disadvantage is that online shopping is not always safe. Sometimes your private information will be let out. So if you love online shopping, pleasebe careful with y

40、our personal information and the website so that you can benefit from online shopping.My favourite subjectEnglish is my favourite subject because English is used widely in the world, especially in Shanghai, a city with so many foreigners. What s more, I likeit because my English teacher is kind and

41、friendly to me.In order to learn English well, I read English aloud every morning and listen to the teacher carefully in class. After class, I often watch English programmes and keep an English diary every day.In a word, I love English and I will continue to learn it better. 12.Changes in myselfEver

42、yone has changed a little or a lot since the day he cameto the middle school. So have I. I am no longer a little girl because I am a middle school student now. I think that I have changed a lot. For example, I become more confident and friendly than ever before. I have made a lot of friends and we o

43、ften have a good time. We help each other and share things together. And I also get rid of some of my bad habits. For example, I used to spend much time on computer games. NowI always go to the park for a walk and try to do more physical exercise. I think the changes are good and I will be better in the following days. 13.The Lantern FestivalMy favourite festival is the Lantern Festival. The Lantern Festival is a traditional Chinese festival, which is on the 15th of the