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1、How to write a letter for adviceQIN2011.9.8Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。要点全词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道连接词Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5

2、 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：参考词汇: 穿行 thread ones way 天桥 overpass 问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 As

3、pose Pty Ltd.第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?题材：人称 Person (The first/ third person)时态：Tense (the simple present tense)要点： a letterEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然

4、十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)第一人称一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性一般现在时Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.建议信篇章结构 说明建议的内容； 提出具体建议的原因； 指出采纳建议的益处。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼

5、貌，顾及对方感受。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.适当运用模板Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to

6、(引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议)As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaEvalu

7、ation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope

8、youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家长接送。交通更拥挤

9、；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheres a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.Our school stand

10、s next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.推荐句型：There be+并列句非谓语结构Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.润色小建议Next to a primary scho

11、ol将介词短语提前（全倒装） stands/lies/is our school, faced with / facing a main street.可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to与毗邻在对面 be opposite toEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Th

12、e traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙.traffic. during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.so. thatwith结构With so many cars and buses going on the road, Evaluation only.Created with Aspos

13、e.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.润色小建议“高峰期”可意译:at peak time，a large current of cars and people“交通繁忙”可译为:traffic jamcongestion 交通堵塞be choke up withbe crammed with 被堵塞/塞满Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011

14、Aspose Pty Ltd. 加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤 sendto, fetch. , 非谓语结构.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier. , which.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.

15、Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whats more, pick up. make.To make things worse/ whats worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school a

16、nd fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Whats more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NE

17、T 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意译为： so. that.=tootoThe children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.making 可替换为：causing, leading to, re

18、sulting in“sendfetch” 可替换为短语：pick up润色小建议Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险thread ones way，when doingIt is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句型It is +adj.

19、for to do.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.润色小建议2. Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/ sea of cars. 灵活运用其它的短语进行意译： 适当增加形容词和副词： it is extremely dan

20、gerous，it is of great/ tremendous dangerEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do such asMy suggestion is that the government should表语从句固定句型 It is high time that(虚拟语气

21、)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.简单句Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.1. In order to release the stress of t

22、raffic problems, 润色小建议2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government shouldA. 适当添加一些意思（过渡句）The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.B. 语义的意译3. Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of t

23、raffic, it is significant to buildC. 添加形容词和副词I strongly suggest, active/effective measuresEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.第三步. 连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. _, its crammed wi

24、th cars during the rush hour. _ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. _, its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. _, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.A. As a consequence B. According to th

25、e phenomenon stated above C. When it comes to traffic jamsD. What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.反面范例Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2

26、011 Aspose Pty Ltd.反面范例Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.反面范例Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.反面范例Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5

27、 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.不推荐字体Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.优秀作文范例1优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .

28、Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.优秀作文范例2优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.优秀作文范例3优点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。Evaluation only.Created

29、 with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.优秀作文范例4优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Cl

30、ient Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.优秀作文范例5Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.优秀作文范例6Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Congestion n. 阻塞, 拥挤, 充

31、血Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.适当运用模板Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyrig

32、ht 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(依我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this mat

33、ter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX Evaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important t

34、o . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议)As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaEvaluation only.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile .Copyrigh