高中英语 新外研必修一 U6 课时6 Writing课件

1、深圳市教育科学研究院 2022 年3月深圳教育云资源平台建设教学教材：外研版高中英语新教材必修一教学内容：Unit 6 At one with nature第六课时: Summary Writing执教人： 纪玮琪/深圳实验学校光明部Mar. 1st, 2022Lesson 1Starting out & vocabulary威尼斯环境问题及解决方法，自然对人的影响Lesson 2Reading中国龙脊梯田开垦原因及运作原理Lesson 3Using language天然染料Lesson 4Speaking& listening地貌特征，不同气候区的人类生活Lesson 5Reading英国人

2、对园艺的热爱Lesson 6Writing英国果茶草茶文化的概要写作Lesson 7Presenting& reflection自选理想居住地，展示课时设计与衔接深入理解人与自然的相关性，辩证看待问题，树立人与自然和谐共处的意识。大观念：通过了解和思考不同自然环境对人类生活的影响，从而理解人与自然的关系，培养共情能力，提升人与自然和谐共处的意识不同地貌和气候对人类生活方式的影响人类对自然的合理运用和改造引导学生联系实际，讲述环境对自己生活的影响，为整个单元做铺垫Review01The Blessings of NatureThe Great Barrier Reef大堡礁The Blessin

3、gs of NatureThe North Pole 北极The Blessings of NatureThe Grand Canyon科罗拉多大峡谷The Wisdom of MankindTerrace fields梯田The Wisdom of MankindBritish GardeningThe Blessings of Nature 合一The Wisdom of Mankind天人Read & Analyze02any parts of a plant, like leaves and roots, can all be considered as herbsFlowers (h

4、erbs 草药)teaThis is the other way the British have found to utilize natureScan and choose the best topic for the passage (textbook p71) TeaFruit and Herbal TeaFruit and Herbal Tea in Britain2 mins to finishPay attention to pictures and words of high frequency (高频词)Lemongrass Tea香茅茶/柠檬草茶Mint Tea薄荷茶App

5、le TeaMango TeaStrawberry TeaHerbalTeaFruitTeaRefer to the tips on p70Task 5 on p71: Underline the topic sentences and fill in the blanks2.5 minsMany people grow their very own tea gardens with easy-to-grow herbs.Mango, strawberry, apple, pear, blackberry leaf and dandelionRelax, beneficial for the

6、immune systems, good for digestionCheck your answers o(_)o (Task 5 on p71)British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs. However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market.Herbal tea has various health benefits. (first sentence)Para 1Para 2Para 3(first sentenc

7、e)Topic sentences o(_)o (Task 5 on p71)表转折(in the middle)British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market.Herbal tea has various health benefits.Para 1Para 2Para 3Read the topic sentences again, and find out the

8、key words that can summarize the main idea of each paragraph1 minThe StructureFruit and Herbal Tea in BritainBritishs love of teaUnusual flavours of teaHealth benefits that tea bringsHow to write a summary?03What should a good summary be like? 1 min to summarize the tipsp71Tips for writing a summary

9、Rewrite and use your own wordsContain only the main ideas (usually from topic sentences)Keep it short (only one paragraph)Make use of linking wordsCan we add our own opinions, using phrases like “I think” or “in my opinion”?How to reconstruct/rewrite a sentence?Use the synonyms or change the parts o

10、f speech(同义替换，词性转换)Restructure the sentences (句型转换)30s to thinkA typical afternoon tea is usually loose tea in a teapot and you can add milk and sugar to it.Rewrite: An afternoon tea is typically loose tea in a teapot with milk and sugar.= with milk and sugartypically (词性转换 a.adv.)Reconstruct/rewrit

11、e a sentence (example)(句型转换)Restructure the Sentence(句型转换)I like different kinds of English tea.Unlike Chinese tea, we often add sugar and milk to English tea.合并为一个定从1AnswerI like different kinds of English tea which unlike Chinese tea, we often add sugar and milk to. 2Not only前置的倒装句It was an expens

12、ive habit to uphold. Not only was the tea itself costly, but (also) it was served only in porcelain cups, following the Chinese tradition.3Among all types of tea, I think the black tea tastes the best.The black tea was brewed in boiling water.句2变成done形式引导的非谓语，加入句1要求It was an expensive habit to uphol

13、d. The tea itself was not only costly, but also served only in porcelain cups (瓷杯), following the Chinese tradition.Among all types of tea, I think the black tea brewed in boiling water tastes the best.differentvarious/ a variety of/ diversedifficultnot easy/ hard/ challenging/ demandingcorrectright

14、/ proper/ suitablewaymethod/ meansbenefitadvantage/ be of benefit to sb/ to ones benefit/ have a beneficial effect on sth.Useful Synonyms (同义词)2 mins to take notes表因果so, therefore, thus, hence, accordingly, consequently, as a result表条件As (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless表并列First, second, t

15、hird. ; firstly, secondly, thirdly ; First, next, then.; in the first place, in the second place. ; for one thing, for another thing. 表转折however, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, yet, otherwise表对比on the contrary，in contrast，by contrast，in comparison， by comparison表层递also，further，furthermore，likewi

16、se，similarly，moreover，in addition，whats more解释举例for example，for instance，in fact，actually总结说明in conclusion，in short，to sum up，to conclude，in a wordCan you come up with more?Accordingly/Consequently (因此),tea drinking became popular in England.然而Make use of linking words and phrases (连词/词组)Fill in the

17、 blanksBrewed tea (泡制茶) doesnt contain much caffeine (咖啡因).Someone still cannot fall asleep after drinking it.Relations转折1Linking Wordshowever, but 2I enjoy drinking English black tea Earl Grey.I often order Earl Grey during my tea break.因果therefore, so, thus3There are various kinds of English tea.E

18、nglish breakfast tea, Green tea, Earl Grey, etc.解释举例for example, for instanceWrite your own summary04Attention:Use your own wordsAfter writing, read it again and make sure theres no grammar or spelling errorWrite your own summary (within 80 words)10 mins(write it either on paper or computer) Peer an

19、swer, sample writing & conclusion05Student Answer 1 British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs. They like mint and lemon grass herb, lemon and ginger. However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market, mango, strawberry, apple and pear, blackberry leaf and

20、 dandelion. And herbal tea has various health benefits. It can help people relax. It can help peoples immune systems. It can be good for digestion.Good:Few spelling & grammar errors.Include all major points1 minStudent Answer 1 British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs. They like mint and

21、 lemon grass herb, lemon and ginger. However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market, mango, strawberry, apple and pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion. And herbal tea has various health benefits. It can help people relax. It can help peoples immune systems. It can

22、 be good for digestion.To improve:Rewriting is not enoughBe more authentic (地道)课文原句，未进行足够改写重复herb与前面的mint, lemongrass 重复Lemon grass一般写成一个单词 British people love fruit and herbal teas and many even grow their own tea gardens. Apart from the traditional flavours, distinctive flavours such as mango and

23、dandelion are growing popular in recent years. In addition to the enjoyable flavours, herbal tea also has various health benefits. Not only can it bring people relaxation but also is beneficial to the immune system and digestion.Linking wordsWord upgradingSentence restructuring句式变形倒装句Sample Writing

24、(a possible version)Type your answer on or 批改网 () 3 mins for self-assessmentRating Scale123ContentDid you include all the major points?3: I did it.2: I partly did it.1: I failed to achieve it this time.GrammarWere there any grammar errors?CoherenceDid you use the linking words properly?LanguageDid y

25、ou use your own words?Self-assessmenttotalmilk & sugarVSEnglish TeaChinese TeaSimilarityHigh social class people from all walks of lifeConsider drinking tea as a traditional way to relaxDifferencefruits & herbalsChinese people like pure teadesserts & pastriesConclusionWrite a summary of a passage on

26、 British teaRead and analyze: Grasp the main idea; find the topic sentences and key words; outline the structureWriting skills: Restructure the topic sentences and use linking words to write a summaryAnalyze a peer answer and a sample, learn to self assess Compare British tea with Chinese teaHomewor

27、k06Write a summary within 80 words and send it to your teacher: Mount Fuji is a worldfamous mountain in Japan. It is one of Japans “Three Holy Mountains” along with Mount Tate and Mount Haku. Mount Fuji is 3,776 meters high, and its perfect beautiful shape can be seen from all around. Mount Fuji pre

28、sents different faces in different seasons. In Japan, people describe the mountain as “Diamond Fuji” when it is at dawn or dusk and as “Red Fuji” when the mountain is lit by the early morning sun. Mount Fuji is one of the worlds classic examples of a strato volcano (层状火山), meaning that it is formed from many layers (层) of hardened lava (硬化熔岩) that has spread to produce a huge base. The last eruption (爆发) of Mount Fuji was in 1707.take a screenshot1Write a summary within 80 wo