备战2023年新高考英语读后续写高分必备攻略（全国通用）

1、读后续写高分技能（五） 生动的对话描写（1）对话描写为推动故事情节服务，是情节发展的一个环节，每段出现一两句即可，不宜过多；（2）对话描写要体现真情实感；（3）对话描写不宜过长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇；（4）对话描写尽可能结合动作描写或情感描写，增强画面感；（5）对话描写中可以用感叹词表示说话人的喜、怒、哀、乐等情绪。一、对话描写的基本原则句型1：“.,” he said,（sth) doing. （sth) doing，he said, “.”say后接doing/done/独立主格作状语，结合动作描写，增强画面感。 （1) “Ill get us some coffee,” she

2、said,_(head)for the kitchen.“我去给我们拿点咖啡” 她说着朝厨房走去。（2）Glaringat me with his frightening eyes ,he yelled, “Youre such an idiot.”heading二、对话描写常用句型(3) “Thats nice,” Alex said quietly,focusing on his plate.(4) “Why did they have to kill the dog?” she said, with her eyes full of tears. 句型2：“.,” he saidas/w

3、hen/before/as if. say后接状语从句，增加了动作等细节描写。例如：1) “Watch out!” she shouted_the car started to move.“当心!” 当汽车开始移动时，她喊道。as2) “Dear me! I wish I hadnt cried so much before,” said Alice as she swam about the lake, trying to find her way out.当爱丽丝在湖里到处游，设法找到出路时，她说道, “天哪！但愿我以前没有哭得那么凶就好了。”句型3： “.,” he said,and(t

4、hen he) did. say后接并列谓语或接并列句，增加了动作描写。例如：(1) “Yes, I think so,” he said reluctantly,_left the study.“是的，我想是的,” 他不情愿地说，然后离开了书房。and(2) “Drive safely,” he said, and waved goodbye. “小心开车,” 他说着挥手告别。句型4：.did.,did,andsaid, “.” say前有系列动作，构成并列谓语，引号内首字母大写。例如： 1) Hepaused,lookedstraight into her eyes,andsaidin a

5、 quiet voice, “Thats true.”他停下来，直视着她的眼睛，平静地说: “那是真的。”2) He grinned, waved, and said, “Hi!”他咧嘴笑了笑，挥挥手说: “嗨!”3) A large middle-aged lady patted me on the back and said, “Nice to see you again.”一位身材高大的中年女士拍了拍我的后背说: “很高兴再次见到你。”句型5：“.,” he said +副词或短语. say后接方式状语，说明说话的方式，说得更具体。例如： 1)“Of course,” Nancy rep

6、lied with a smile. “当然,” 南希笑着回答。2)“Im sorry,” she said with a sigh. “对不起,” 她叹了口气说。3) “Thank you, sir,” whispered Paul gratefully. “谢谢，先生,” Paul满心感激地嘟哝着。句型6： “.” +动作描写的句子 不出现say对话标志。例如： 1) “I dont believe you any more.” He turned around, slammed the door and stormed out.“我再也不相信你了。” 他转过身，砰的一声关上门，冲了出去。

7、2) “I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” Mac hugged them and burst out crying.我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。” 麦克抱着他们，大哭起来。1.对话标签在前She said,“I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”2.对话标签在后“I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”She

8、 said.三、对话标签的三个位置3.对话标签在句子中间“I would like to go with you,”she said, “but I havent finished my homework.”注意：对话标签在后或者在句子中间时（第2,3种情况），如果主语是名词，则可倒装也可不倒装。而代词不可以倒装，said she是错误的。“I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”said Emily（或者Emily said.）“I would like to go with you,”said Emil

9、y/ Emily said, “but I havent finished my homework.”1.废话连篇，对情节发展和刻画人物没有帮助。“Hey, how are you?” “Im fine, how are you?”“How is the weather?” “Terrific! Nice day for a walk, isnt it?”四、对话描写常见“四大错误2.追求花哨，过度使用对话标签“That is fantastic news,” he said happily.此句中完全没有必要加上一个happily来表达说的方式，因为句中的fantastic一词足以说明说话人

10、了表情，过度强调会让读者的注意力集中在“说话的方式”而不是“说话的内容”。建议改为：“That is fantastic news！” he said/screamed/exclaimed. 一个感叹号和一个fantastic已经足以让读者想象当时的情景。适当的“艺术留白”也是需要的，这样会留给读者想象的空间。还有一种避免过度的dialogue tags的方法是运用“动作描写”，尤其是表情上动作来取而代之。如：Her eyes reflected the candlelight as she smiled at her son.“Everyone is unique. Just follow

11、your heart and be yourself!”当她对儿子微笑时，她的眼睛反射着烛光。 “每个人都是独一无二的。 只要跟随你的心，做你自己！”3用词不当，错误使用对话标签I cant believe it, Emma gasped. (gasp意思为“喘气”)Thats funny, Henry chuckled. (chuckled.意思为“轻笑”)评析：以上两句话也是在大量的学生习作中发现的。这里把动作描写和动作标签混淆了，试想谁能gasp（喘息）、chuckle（轻笑）出一句话？除非他或她有特异功能。（Question tag+分词做伴随状况）请特别关注以上对话的标点符号。纠正方

12、法如下：I cant believe it, Emmasaid with a gasp.（对话标签Emma said+ with介词短语）Emma gasped.I cant believe it.（动作描写+句号）I cant believe it.Emma gasped.（对话句+动作描写,注意对话句式句号）Thats funny!Henrychuckled.（感叹句结束+动作描写）Thats funny, Henrysaid, chuckling.4.对话标签多此一举：对话对象十分明确，仍使用对话标签“I told you already,” I said, glaring.评析：此句貌

13、似豪华，其实对话中的主语“I”已经清晰地说明了说话者，完全没有必要用对话标签“I said”来说说话对象。纠正方法：加上一点动作描写就可以避免这种错误，并且提升语言的生动性。I glared at him.“I told you already.”第一种：加语气“I would love to,” said Emilyin a pleasant tone.“我很乐意这样做，”艾米丽用一种愉快的语气说。这里用到了“in a pleasant tone.”，即“用一种愉快的语气”，基本结构为：in a/an+形容词+tone如：in apleasant愉悦的/firm坚定的/rude粗鲁的/sad

14、悲伤的tone也可以用in a tone of +名词的搭配如：in a tone ofsurprise用一种惊讶的语气 in a tone of curiosity用一种好奇的语气in a tone of impatience用一种不耐烦的语气 in a tone of command用一种命令的语气五、如何让对话更生动第二种：加嗓音“I didnt mean to,” she murmuredin a low voice.“我不是故意的，”她低声说。这里用到了“in a low voice”，即“小声地说道”或者“用一种.声音”，基本结构是：in a/an+形容词+voice如：in ahigh /low / sweet/loud/soft /weakvoice 用一个高/低/甜/响亮/软/弱的声音第三种：加情感“I.I. dont think Im right for the part,”I repliedwith embarrassment.“我.我.认为我不适合这个角色，”我尴尬地回答。这里用到了“with embarr