初中英语 沪教牛津版 8B U6-4 Writing What animal makes the best pet Unit6 课件

1、深圳市南山区第二外国语学校（集团）海德学校 苏伊婷Module 3 Writing:What animal makes the best pets？Unit 6Unit 6 Part 1 Lead InVideo Play Watch and listenWhat are we going to learn today?4 Writing task现在越来越多人选择饲养宠物，宠物也变成人们生活不可缺少的一部分，请以“What animal makes the best pet?”为题，根据以下要求写一篇80词左右的作文，阐述你的观点。要点1、请选择一种动物要点2、陈述你选择这种动物的理由并举例

2、说明（理由至少三点）parrot 鹦鹉dog 狗cat 猫lizard 蜥蜴fish 鱼frog 青蛙spider 蜘蛛What animal makes the best pet?rabbit 兔mouse 鼠pig 猪turtle 乌龟snake 蛇Part 1 Lead InAn interview: What animal makes the best pet?_ make the best petsDogsWriting an article is like building a house!Foundation-beginning8 2. I think that dogs mak

3、e the best pets.Part 2 Foundation-beginningHow to bring out a topic1. Nowadays, more and more people keep pets at home. Pets are becoming an important part of our daily lives. When someone is thinking about getting a new pet, many of them will consider getting a cat. However, as for me, I will no do

4、ubt choose dogs as the best pets.Examples: （50 words!） （8 words） How to state opinion?State your opinion directly!The beginning should be concise and straightforward!Dogs make the best petsI think that dogs make the best pets.beginningWriting an article is like building a house!The main body -body p

5、aragraphs12 13 Writing task现在越来越多人选择饲养宠物，宠物也变成人们生活不可缺少的一部分，请以“What animal makes the best pet?”为题，根据以下要求写一篇80词左右的作文，阐述你的观点。要点1、请选择一种动物要点2、陈述你选择这种动物的理由并举例说明（理由至少三点）内容要点陈述你选择这种动物的理由并举例说明（理由至少三点） Brainstorm & Organize your ideasOpinionsSupporting details or examplesPart 3 The main bodybody paragraphsIde

6、as Bank1. Dogs are cute.2. Dogs are faithful.3. Dogs make people not feel lonely.4. Dogs can be our guards.5. Dogs can help the owners stay healthy.Dogs have adorable appearances and good personalitiesThere is a touching movie “ Hachi : A dogs tale”Dogs can accompany people who need love and care.Do

7、gs will bark at strangers.We should walk them every day.Dogs make the best pets I think that dogs make the best pets. Dogs are cute.Dogs have adorable appearances and good personalities Dogs can be our guards. Dogs will bark at strangers. Dogs can help the owners stay healthy.We should walk them eve

8、ry day.beginningbodyWriting an article is like building a house!Roof -ending17 Part 4 Roof-endingPossible endingsI believe that dogs make the best pets.Dogs are my best friends forever. Its a good idea to keep pet dogs.Examples:Echoing the theme.Conclusive.Dogs make the best pets I think that dogs m

9、ake the best pets. Dogs are cute.Dogs have adorable appearances and good personalities Dogs can be your guards.Dogs will bark at strangers. Dogs can help the owners stay healthy.We should walk them every day. Its a good idea to keep pet dogs.beginningbodyendingWriting an article is like building a h

10、ouse!Decoration 20 Part 5 Decorationrevising process01Accuracy（准确性）02Diversity（多样性）03Coherence（连贯性）Spelling errorsGrammatical errors Tense （时态）Pronoun （人称）Subject-verb agreement（主谓一致）Singular or plural form of nouns （名词单复数）Fix collocation（固定搭配） .Part 4 Decorationrevising process01Accuracy02Diversity

11、03CoherencePart 4 Decorationrevising processCorrect the errors in the short passage.I think dogs are the best pets. Here are my reasons. At frist, dog can be our friend. When we are sad, stay with them will make us feel better. Second, we can learn how to care about others by keeping a dog. It can h

12、elp us become responsible.They can be our guards. When strangers got close to our home, it will bark loudly.firstdogsstayingforgettheyPart 4 Decorationrevising process01Accuracy02Diversity03CoherenceDiversity of words：Dogs are lovely.Diversity of sentence patterns：Dogs can help the owners stay healt

13、hystay fit/ stay in good healthWalking dogs can help the owners stay healthy.Dogs can help the owners stay healthy.cute / adorable/endearingIt is good for our health to walk dogs every day. such as besides instead of last but not least in addition in summary therefore as well as takefor example as t

14、he result of because for example whats more but firstly / secondly / thirdly finally however thanks to in a word all in allPart 4 Decorationrevising processTransitional words & phrases01Accuracy02Diversity03Coherence03CoherencePart 4 Decorationrevising processTransitional words & phrasesSequenceOppo

15、sition ExemplificationSupplementCause & EffectConclusion Part 4 Decorationrevising processHere are my reasons.The following are my opinions.From my opinions above, I thinkExamples:Transitional sentencesDogs make the best pets I think that dogs make the best pets. Dogs are cute.Dogs have adorable app

16、earances and good personalities Dogs can be our guards.Dogs will bark at strangers. Dogs can help the owners stay healthy.We should walk them every day. Its a good idea to keep pet dogs.Here are my reasons.Thirdly,Secondly,Firstly,Therefore,Because of their adorable appearance and good personalities

17、, people like them very much. Keeping a dog can make us stay healthy, since we should walk it every day.isnt it?When strangers get close to our home, they will bark loudly .Writing an article is like building a house!Beginning -conciseBody paragraphs-opinions & supporting detailsEnding -echoing the theme29 Decoration -revising s