2023年人教版高考英语一轮复习写作层次训练

1、写作层级训练层级一真义起始理清句子8大成分众所周知，句子有假设干个组成局部，它们分别承当着不同的作用，组成句子的各个局部叫作句子成分。 英语中的句子成分分为主语（subject）、谓语（predicate）、宾语（object）、表语（predicative）、定语（attribute）、状 in （adverbial） a 补语（complement）和同位语（appositive）八种。一、主语习惯于发号施令，偶尔也会被赶下台在句子中，主语是执行句子的行为或动作的主体。主语一般位于句子开头，且不能省略。但在某些特 定的句式里，如：疑问句、倒装句、祈使句、感叹句等，句子主语也可以“下台”而位

2、于谓语动词之后或 省略。能够充当主语的主要有名词（短语）、代词、数词、动名词（短语）、动词不定式（短语）和从句等。My school is planning to hold class meetings about Chinese traditional culture and will post some of the meetings on an English website.（名词作主语）（2021全国甲卷书面表达）To let China go to the world and let the world understand China is my first aim.（不定式短语

3、作主 语）（2019全国卷I书面表达）What is the most impressive is its many multi level waterfalls and colorful lakes.（what 引导的主语从句作 主语）（20213月天津卷书面表达）It was shown that only ten percent of the students were able to be devoted to their study.（代词 it 充当形式主 语，that引导的主语从句作真正的主语）（2020北京高考书面表达）名师点津：当从句作主语时，为防止头重脚轻，可用it作形式主

4、语，而把真正的主语（主语从句）后置。二、谓语坚决服从主语“领导”，执行命令雷厉风行谓语用来描述主语的行为动作、状态或特征，常位于主语之后。谓语可由动词或动词短语、系表结构 以及“助动词/情态动词+实义动词”充当，有时态、语态和语气的变化，同时又受到主语人称和数的制约。 谓语的构成如下：.简单谓语：由一个实义动词或动词短语构成。They advised getting the whole class involved in a brainstorm conference for studying more effectively. （2020北京高考书面表达）The text mainly fo

5、cuses on the story of a robot.（2020全国卷III书面表达）.复合谓语：（1）由情态动词或其他助动词加动词原形构成；（2）由系动词加表语构成。These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.（2021 新高考I卷应用文写作）Shy and negative, I was unconfident to join any activity during that time. （2021 新高考 I 卷应用文写作）三、宾语一直受到压制，有时“翻身农奴把歌唱”宾语表示谓语动作的对象，一般位于及物动词或

6、介词的后面，受到主语的限制和制约。宾语一般由名 词（短语）、宾格代词、数词、动名词（短语）、动词不定式或宾语从句等充当，根据需要也可用it作形式宾语。He often offers us some good advice on English learning./He often offers some good advice on English learning to us.他尽力使他的课活泼有趣。He tries to make his classes lively and inteiesting.他要求我们每天早上背诵一些英语单词。He asks us to recite some E

7、nglish words every morning.在他的帮助下，我们大多数人都取得了很大的进步。Most of us have made great progress with his help.我们为拥有这样一位好老师感到自豪。We feel proud to have such a good teacher.(二)把上述句子连成一篇100词左右的短文，可适当增加细节参考范文Our English teacher is very young and patient.He graduated from college two years ago.He has been working ha

8、rd since he came to our school.Finding some of us are weak in English, he often offers us some good advice on English learning.In addition, he tries to make his classes lively and interesting.Whafs more, he asks us to recite some English words every morning.As a result, most of us have made great pr

9、ogress with his help.We all like his classes and admire him very much.In a word, we feel proud to have such a good teacher.层级三 粗化词汇学会运用高级表达英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高 级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分， 文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从

10、而帮助考生获得高分。 要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：、使用亮点词汇的4种方法.标新立异“语”众不同在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会表达出自己的高水平。He will also spend some time in staying with me and share many funny things with me about his work.f He will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.(2020全国卷I

11、书面表达)1 like the school uniform better than the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month.fl prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. (2019江苏高考书面表达）(3)When I meet problems in English learning, my teacher listens to me patiently

12、and explains them carefully.f When I encounter problems in English learning, my teacher listens to me patiently and explains them carefully.(2020全国卷I书面表达)Great changes have taken place in our school in the last few years. And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.f Our school h

13、as witnessed great changes in the last few years. And word came that a short film will be shown in our school. (2018全国卷 II 廿面表达)(5)Im busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near.f Im occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Exa

14、mination, which is of great importance to me, is around the comer.(天津高考书面表达).多样表达防止重复在写作时，应尽量防止重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用 词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。(l)Besides, it provides us with many learning resources and many learning ways.f Whats more, it provides us with a wide range of learning resources and

15、flexible learning ways.(2021 全 国乙卷书面表达)(2)First of all, youd better arrive on time because it is polite to be on time in China.f First of all, youd better arrive on time because it is polite to be punctual in China.(2018 全国卷 I 书面表 达).短语优先语言生动当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方 面也能展示出学生扎实的语言

16、功底。(l)If it is convenient, may I visit you at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?f If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? (2020全国 卷in书面表达)(2)The match will be held in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th.f The match will

17、 take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. (2019全国卷 II 书面表达)(3)Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful/beneficial to you.f Hopefully, these suggestions would be of great help/benefit to you. (2018全国卷 I 书面表达)(4)To learn more about the development of our school, all the students

18、 are welcome to watch the short film Growing Together.With the aim of learning more about the development of our school, all the students are welcome to watch the short film Growing Together. (2018-# II 书面表达).高级词汇凸显水平为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应防止反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量使 用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。（l）The peaches were ripe

19、 and soft and I want to take a bite.f The peaches were ripe and soft and I couldnt wait to take a bite. （2020全国卷 II 书面表达）（2）You are definitely welcome to join in the festival, which will give color and fun to our festival.f You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun

20、 to our festival.（2019全国卷HI书面表达）If you take my advice you are sure to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.f So long as you take my advice you are bound to have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. （2018北京高考书面表达第一节）二、使用亮点词汇的2点注意.注意增加亮词的“出

21、镜率”，变消极词汇为积极词汇阅读中能认识但写作中不会用的词汇属于消极词汇，写作中能运用自如的词汇为积极词汇，也就是平 常所说的“第一反响词”。积极词汇量的多少直接决定着英语作文表达水平的高低。现在很多考生的困难 是，头脑中的很多词汇介于积极词汇与消极词汇之间；另外，很多背过的消极词汇如果较长时间不接触就 会变成陌生词汇。因此在备考过程中，考生要做的事情就是迅速扩大消极词汇量并且保持接触的频度，力 争使其变成积极词汇。很多考生作文驻足不前的一个重要原因是反复使用初中学过的简单词汇，背了大量的亮词妙语而不用。 建议大家在想到一个表达时，务必要想一想还有没有更好的表达方式，这就是我们平时常讲的“头脑

22、风暴 法”。例如想表达“美丽的”这个含义，大家首先想到的是“beautiful，那么在下笔时，要想一想还有没有 更出彩的表达，如“attractive或“charming”等。再如表达“困难的”时，大家常用“difficult，那是不是用 “tough或challenging”更与众不同呢？.注意亮点词汇使用的场合写作时，在用词上不可随心所欲，决不能为追求“高级”而使用复杂但毫无把握的词语，也不能满篇 堆积所谓的“高级”词汇，否那么给人过分炫耀之嫌，得不偿失。一般来说，一篇文章能用好三至五个高级 词汇就可以了。另外，为能更好地“完成规定的写作任务”，减少错误，特别提醒考生在使用“高级词汇” 时

23、，一定要注意遵循“准确、恰当”的原那么，并且要注意使用的场合，难词和生僻词汇并不一定就是高级 词汇，例如：一大早我们买了一些圣诞礼物。Early in the morning we purchased some Christmas presents.（purchased 太过于书面化,改为 bought 更地道） 三、写作的秘密武器24个高级词汇名词普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividualresultconsequenceeffectinfluence动词havepossesrep

24、lacesubstitutebearput up withunderstandmake sense ofdeveloppromoteconsidertake into account形容词enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimportantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/appealingdifficultchallenging副词finallyeventuallyhardlybarelyimmediatelyin a flashnowadayscurrently连词sothereforeandas

25、 well as(l)It is of importance for you to understand the content, Tang poetry.It is of importance for you to make sense of the content, Tang poetry.It is of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry.Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.f Thats w

26、hy I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better alternative.In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.-Hn the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.四、写作的顶级装备27个加分词汇表达关注的名词attention, focus, concern表达争论的名词discussion, debate, argument表达现象的名词phenomenon表达

27、优缺点的名词advantage, disadvantage, strength, weakness表达增长或下降的动词increase, accumulate, decrease, decline表达导致后果的动词短语result in, lead to, bring about, contribute to, give rise to表达支持、反对的动词短语approve of, be in favor of, object to表达可能性的形容词likely表达有好处的形容词beneficial表达强调的副词particularly, especially(l)The picture sh

28、ows a common phenomenon these days.这幅图显示了这些日子的一个常见现象。(2)The Internet has brought about many changes in the workplace. 网络给工作场所带来了很多变化。(3)Our teacher is likely to get angry when she sees the dirty floor.我们的老师看到地面这么脏时，可能会发火。综合演练三I.请用高级词汇替换以下句子中的加黑局部We were so interested in the competition that we forme

29、d a group to take part in it.keen onIm very glad to learn that you are coming in September. more thanWe are desperately in need of your help. As a result, I sincerely invite you to join us. As a consequenceSo, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will

30、help you prepare for your class. Therefore； make preparations forThe craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot, various/a range ofIn order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry, I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, acqu

31、ireOur class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials, came up withThe reasons are the following, as followsAt the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things.made up my mindAs high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at

32、school, are supposed toThere?s no harm in your staying up late sometimes, occasiocally/once in a whileThe teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses, challengingII.句型转换She didnt listen to what her teacher said in the class.f She turned a deaf ear to what her teacher said

33、 in the class, (ear)At that time, T realized that she didnt tell the truth.At that time, it occurred to m that she didnt tell the truth.(occur)You should finish your homework before you play football.f You are supposed to finish your homework before you play football. (suppose)In my opinion, neither

34、 you nor she has met the standard.f As far as Im concerned , neither you nor she has met the standard, (concern) I cant bear the way she treats her parents any longer. can no longer put up with the way she treats her parents, (put)During the mountainclimbing, please help each other and pay special a

35、ttention to your safety.f In the course of the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety, (course)After five hours non-stop work, we were all tired.f After five hours non-stop work, we were all worn out .(wear)Jack is very clever, who often thinks of new idea

36、s.f Jack is very clever, who often comes up with new ideas. (come)in.请用高级词汇对下文黑体局部进行提升考生作文Dear Peter,It is a great honor for me to invite you to 1. take part in the activity Build a Civilized Campus“ this month.We 2. plan to go hand in hand to 3. build our civilized campus where beauty and harmony m

37、eet. To achieve the goal, well 4. ask the school to communicate with each other in polite words. Meanwhile, we 5. should behave ourselves and obey school rules. As a nice environment 6. is good for us, well 7. try our best to create a pleasant school environment. All the above is to 8. lead to the g

38、ood conduct of teachers and students in our school.It would be nice if you could join us.Yours,Li Hua 升格作文Dear Peter,It is a great honor for me to invite you to 1 , participate in the activity “Build a Civilized Campus” this month.We 2. aim to go hand in hand to 3, set up our civilized campus where

39、beauty and harmony meet. To achieve the goal, well 4. call on the school to communicate with each other in polite words. Meanwhile, we 5. are supposed lo behave ourselves and obey school rules. As a nice environment 6. is beneficial to us, well 7. spare no effort to create a pleasant school environm

40、ent. All the above is to 8. contribute to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school.It would be nice if you could join us.Yours,Li Hua层级四锤炼句式学会运用高级结构高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”就是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。 不管是复杂结构的运用，如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句，还 是较多的语法结构，如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转换问题。不容置疑，这些复杂

41、结 构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次。增分句式(一)独立又相依的并列句并列句是用连词把两个或两个以上的简单句连起来，这种简单句常被叫做分句。并列句中的各个简单 句彼此独立，互不依从，但它们表达的意思之间有一定的关系，通常用并列连词连接起来。并列连词之前 可用逗号，也可不用逗号。它的基本模式是：简单句+并列连词+简单句。（一）常见并列句的类型及并列连词（1 ）The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.（2021 新高考 I 卷读后续写）类型连词并列关系（递进关系）and, whe

42、n, both.and., not only.but （also）., neither.nor.转折关系but, yet, whereas选择关系or, otherwise, or else, either.or., not.but.因果关系for, so比照关系while这对双胞胎把早饭带上楼，叫醒了妈妈。（2）Li Jiang recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su Hua prefers the school uniform.（2019江苏高 考书面表达）李江推荐中国传统服装，而苏华更喜欢校服。（3）You may have t

43、rouble in adjusting yourself to the life in Beijing, so I suggest that you make full preparations in advance.（2018北京高考书面表达）你可能在适应北京生活方面有困难，因此我建议你提前做好充分准备。（4）If youre interested in it, either you may send an email to or you can sign up in person. （2017全国卷III书面表达）如果你感兴趣，您可以发送电子邮件至12345siacoz或亲自报名。（二）并

44、列句的常见句型eitheror要么要么It had also given me a choice, either to leave that page blank or to keep writing the story with hope.（2018江 苏）这也给了我一个选择，要么把那页纸留作空白，要么怀着希望继续写故事。not only.but also不但而且Through the exhibition, not only can you admire wonderful pictures, but also enable you understand the art of tradit

45、ional Chinese painting better. （2021 浙江高考书面表达）通过这次展览，你不仅可以欣赏到精彩的画面，还可以更好地了解中国画的艺术。notbut不是而是She did not ask others to help her, but finished the whole work by herself that day.那天她没有叫别人帮助，而是自己完成了所有的工作。for因为We listened eagerly, for he brought news of our families.我们急不可待地听着，因为他带来了我们家人的消息。while而/然而The s

46、on was having a good meal at home, while the parents were working in the fields.儿子在家吃好饭，而父母却在田里辛勤劳作。祈使句/名词词组+ and/or/otherwise +陈述句Work harder, or/otherwise you will fail in the next exam.学习再努力一些，否那么下次考试你会不及格的。be doingwhen正在做这时I was walking to school this morning when I heard someone call me.今天早上我正步

47、行去上学，这时突然听到有人喊我。（三）在写作中使用并列句时的常见错误because 和 so, although/though 和 but 使用不当（误）Because my classmate was badly ilL so she didnt come to school.（lE）My classmate was badly ill, so she didnt come to school.（lE）Because my classmate was badly ill, she didnt come to school.（误）Although I dont like English, bu

48、t I spend much time on it every day.（正）1 dont like English, but I spend much time on it everyday.（iE）Although I dont like English, （yet）I spend much time on it every day.when 和 while 误用（误）The whole family were having dinner while someone rushed in. zzz%/zzzivzs/s/zsrx1L层级二表达妮范正确使用5大句型句式（一）简约却不简单的“主语

49、+谓语（况.）（+状语）”结构.主谓结构中谓语常用来表示主语的动作或状态。这种句型中的谓语动词为不及物动词，后面可以跟 副词、介词短语、状语从句等。但不能接宾语，也没有被动语态。常见的不及物动词有：arrive, come, lie, shine, live, walk, fall, rise, happen, exist, ride, occur, agree, write 等。.谓语动词也可以是不及物动词短语，如come up（被提出）,run out （用完）,get by（勉强生存）,come out（出 版）,break down （出故障）,drop by（顺便拜访），pass o

50、ut（晕倒）等。The racing route began at our school gate and ended at the foot of the South HilL（2020新高考全国卷 I 写作） 比赛路线从我们学校门口开始，到南山脚下结束。An important volleyball match is approaching.（2019全国卷 II 书面表达）一场重要的排球比赛即将来临。In the environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard.（2019全国卷 II 书面表达）

51、 在这种环境下，师生们生活快乐，工作努力。The upcoming music festival will take place in our school.（2019全国卷111二|方面表达）即将到来的音乐节将在我们学校举行。注意：不及物动词或短语后不能接宾语，要特别注意英汉表达的差异。His home broke out a fire last night.（ X）他家昨晚发生了一场火灾。A fire broke out in his home last night.（ V）-即时训练翻译句子（主语+不及物动词）. （2021 .浙江卷读后续写）父亲驾驶的卡车经常半路抛锚。The truc

52、k my dad drove often broke down halfway.（2020.全国卷H书面表达）上周末，我和我的同学骑自行车去新兴农场摘草莓。Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Xinxing Farm by bike to pick strawberries.（2019全国卷H书面表达）在比赛中友谊第一。Friendship always comes Erst in the competition.（2019全国卷H书面表达）比赛将于下午2点开始，大约持续3个小时。五、表示递进关系的过渡性词语whats more, further

53、more, moreover, besides, whats worse, still less, to make matters worse, worse stilh in addition, on the one hand.on the other hand., for one thingfor another (thing).等。(l)Besides, with the approach of the college entrance exam, we are busy making final preparations. (2020浙 江高考书面表达)另外，随着高考的临近，我们正忙着做

54、最后的准备。(2)Whats more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys.(2021 天津3月高考书面表达)更重要的是，在自然保护区散步，你有机会看到稀有动物，比方大熊猫，金丝猴。-即时训练用过渡性词语补全句子In addition , I can see different kinds of beautiful birds.(四川高考书面表达)另外，我可以看到不同种类的美丽的鸟。To make matters worse

55、/Worse still/Whats worse , if we spend too much time on phones, we will lose the communication skills we need in the future.更糟的是，如果我们在 上花费过多的时间，我们会在将来失去我们所需要的交际技能。六、表示列举事实的过渡性词语such as, for example/instance, take.for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words等。(l)For example9 there are huge

56、 amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. (2018江苏高考书面表达)例如，有大量的参考书，我经常困惑不知道怎么选择。(2)In order to expand my knowledge of Tianjin, such as its history, tradition and food, I spend every spare moment I have in the library.(天津高考书面表达)为了扩大我关于天津的知识面，例如它的历史、传统和美食，我把全部业余时间花在了图书馆里。即时

57、训练用过渡性词语补全句子We have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths, English, music, art and so on.我们有很多学科，例如语文、数学、英语、音乐、艺术等。The plan for the day is as follows : Firstly, its a custom to have dumplings on that day, so well make delicious dumplings with our own hands rather than buy some for them.那天的计划如下：首先，在那

58、天吃饺子是一项风俗，因此我们会亲手为他们做美味的饺子而不是去买。七、表示观点的过渡性词语in my opinion, in my view, from my point of view, asfar as I am concemnd, as for, personally等。（l）As for me, my father is the person I respect most. （2020全国卷 I 书面表达）对我来说，我父亲是我最尊敬的人。（2）Personally, Id want to learn about western painting. （2019天津高考书面表达）就我个人而言

59、，我想学习西方绘画。（3）As far as Im concerned, I think the outstanding movie Growing Together is interesting to watch. （2018全 国卷n书面表达）就我个人而言，我认为一起成长这部优秀电影看起来很有趣。-即时训练用过渡性词语补全句子In my opinion/view/From my point of view/Personally ， everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.（

60、天津高考书面表达）在我看来，这里的每个人都是我们大家庭的一员，我们从对方身上学到很多东西。As for cheating in the exams, I will tell them the importance of honesty.（广东高考书面表达）至于考试作弊，我会告诉他们老实的重要性。八、表示总结的过渡性词语in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up,to conclude, all in all, on the whole, in general等。（1）A11 in alL words fail to expre