高考英语书面表达

1、高考英语书面表达Part one 写作步骤审（题）什么体裁应用（日记；便条；邮件，书信；口头通知和笔头通知；失物招领启示;演讲；指路；图表；使用说明）；记叙；议论或混合表达。什么时态通知，演讲，启示多以现在时，将来时为主；描写说明多用一般现在时;日记多以一般过去时为主；书信往往综合几种时态。当然，这只是一般性的特点，具体写作中要结合实际灵活交替运用；比如议论与说明中涉及时代变迁前后对比。什么人称看清题干上的人称要求。 什么句型，短语，谚语可使用哪些句型如It; There be; 从句；分词结构；等等（切忌词句少,千篇一律）。课文，阅读篇目中曾经见到过的相关句子，短语，谚语（尽量使用简单句和自

2、己最熟悉、最有把握的句型、短语等，切忌只言片语，过于生僻，弄巧成拙）。作文审题在很大程度上关系到整篇文章的成败。有的考生唯恐时间不够，急于成文，不认真审题，结果写出的文章不是离题太远，与原命题大相径庭，就是抓不住重点，杂乱无章，缺乏逻辑性与关联。2. 思 列题纲分段落。列要点 -题目要求写明什么，还要发挥什么；写句子我是谁？人称问题；这个动词可否用被动式；是否符合主谓一致的原则；前后指代是否清楚；数是否一致；是否符合平行原则；是否有固定词组可用；何处断句；复数变化，过去式，冠词，介词，副词形式，拼写的习惯性失误等等；避免Chinglish有了提纲，文章在材料安排上才会层次分明，整体性强。3.写

3、 起草稿审明了题意，列出了提纲，下一步就是应该分段写作。每段应该只有一个中心，段落的结构要完整。自然段多以该段的主题句开头、中间展开说明和叙述，末句常是结论或内容的归纳。在推展主题目时，要充分利用学到的写句子、写段落的技巧，注意句与句、段与段的衔接和过渡。注意段落的完整性和连贯性。为了使文章紧凑，全文最好一气呵成。*相关过渡语1). 表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last2). 表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on

4、 the left, on one side3). 表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise4). 表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus5). 表示递进关系: besides, whats more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of6). 表示并列关系: and, as w

5、ell as, also7). 表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude扩写紧扣要点，扩写成文。在列出要点后，依据已经写出来的话语扩写成一篇短文。扩写时，必须紧扣要点或图画的内容，每点补充1-3句进行适当叙述，逻辑连贯，通顺即可，不可对一个点过分补充，顾此失彼，或想象过分，离题万里。4. c（检）查（修）改抄（写）检查：词数够吗？要点有无遗漏？是否有重复现象？衔接是否流畅？有无自己没把握的词句？措辞是否做到了尽量准确？ 修改:是写好文章必不可少的一环。注意：1,标

6、题写在第一行的中央，标题中每一个实词都应大写。标题不加标点，即使是一个完整的句子，也不加句号；2，注意段落首缩进3-4个字母；3,书写要工整，规范，卷面要整洁，词与词之间要有2-3个字母的间隔 ；抄写完之后，一定要检查一遍。校阅要逐字句，逐段进行，4,注意检查语法错误主谓一致，时态语态；5，拼写错误、标点和大小写等方面的错误。6，文章的词数是否够（100-120词）。花两分钟检查一遍，往往能增强文章的效果、提高考试成绩。操练一下：以上图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。注意：1. 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增加细节，使其连贯、完整。2.

7、叙述必须用第一人称。3. 词数100左右。生词：违章者 offender n. 十字路口crossroads n.第一步：通读审题。逐图推敲，了解大意，把图画信息及时转化成文字信息。通过读图，把六幅图画信息简明地记载如下： 图l brother、 I、 riding bicycle、 cinema 图2 crossroads、 a young man and a young girl、 we were stopped图3、4、5 the young man， told their story：1.half an hour ago、 riding bicycle、 stopped by a po

8、liceman，2.catch the next offender 图6 we were punished、 catch the next offender instead of them第二步：编拟提纲。根据上述图画信息，编拟出要点、提纲，组织语言材料。在拟定提纲时，应注意提纲的中心要突出，条理要清楚，不要节外生枝，写一些与题无关的东西。 1.Brother and l went to cinema， Brother was riding while I Was Sitting 2.To the crossroads， we were stopped by 3.They said they

9、had found us. Pointing to a policeman， the young man told us their story. 4.They were stopped by a policeman. 5.They were made to catch the next offender.第三步：扩写成文。把上述要点提纲扩写成文。在扩写时，要注意以下几点：1.添加必要的时间、冠词及其它一些与题有关的细节； 2.尽量使用简单句和自己最熟悉、最有把握的句型、短语来表述； 3.语法结构和关联词的正确运用； 4.语言符合英语习惯和表达，不用汉语式的英语； 5.书写规范，卷面整洁； 6

10、.运用语言时，注意一个意思的多种表述法。上述提纲扩写为下文： Last week my brother and l went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding while I was sitting on the seat behind. When we came to the crossroads， we were stopped by a young man and a young woman. They said they had found us at last. But we didnt know them at all.

11、 Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man told us their story. They were stopped by the policeman about half an hour ago and made to Catch the next offender as a punishment. They asked us to go and stand there and wished us good luck. We were made to catch the next offender instead of the

12、m.第四步：检查修改。扩写成文后，还需认真地进行检查和修改。第一，看一看有没有遗漏信息点；第二，看句子结构是否正确，有没有主谓不一致，时态、语态上的错误；第三，看过渡是否自然，单词拼写是否有错，大小写、标点符号使用是否得当；第四，看所写文章的人称是否符合题目要求；最后还要数一数文章的词数，看是否 符合要求。课后作业假设你是上图的李华。请根据图画所提供的信息，写一篇英语作文，描述昨天晚上邻居看足球赛影响你学习的情况，并描写你随后与邻居交涉的过程(如：你向邻居提出要求，对方向你表示歉意等。)注意1. 词数：80120 2. 可以编写对话或其它叙述方式描写你与邻居的交涉过程图画信息内容要点：时间：

13、at nine oclock in the evening地点: at my home/ in my room doing my lessons人物： I, my neighbour情景（事由，经过）: the neighbour watching football match on TV, excited and shouting loudly,making a lot of noises I covered my ears,could no longer stand/control myself, impatient结果：What did I do? What did my neighbo

14、ur do?感想：take care of each other,not to disturb othersOne possible versionAbout 9 oclock yesterday evening, I was busy preparing for my tomorrows test when suddenly loud noises came into my room. My neighbor was watching a football game on TV in his room. The noise was so loud that I couldnt go on s

15、tudying. I covered my ears with hands, but it was no use. I became so impatient that I had to go to explain my difficulty. After hearing what I said, my neighbor apologized and turned down the TV immediately. I thanked him and went back to continue my study.Two other possible versions1.About 9 ocloc

16、k last night, I was doing my homework. Suddenly I heard my neighbor shouting and laughing loudly. He was watching a football game on TV. Icouldnt go on studying and became impatient. I covered my ears, trying to keep the noises out, but failed. So I had to go my neighbor. I knocked at his door and s

17、aid, Good evening, Mr Yang! Could you please turn down your TV a bit? I am doing my homework. “Oh, Im really sorry to have disturbed you. Well do as you say.” My neighbor said politely. Thank you very much.” I said and went back to continue my study.2Last night I was preparing for the coming examina

18、tion when the noise from my neighbor interrupted me. The noise went on and on. It was so loudly that I could hardly pay attention to my study any longer. So I went to my neighbours house and said to him: “Excuse me, would you please turn down the TV? Im preparing tomorrows examination.” Having heard

19、 these words, his face went red. And he said, “Ok, Ill turn it down. Li Hua, Im very sorry to have made so much noise. Just now, the football was very wonderful. I was too excited to control myself. I wont do that again. Good luck in your coming examination. ” After that, I got down to my study.Part

20、2高考英语书面表达题型汇总（全国和四川）全国卷年份 文体 格式 命题形式 内容 1999 说明文 书信 看图写作（6 幅） 介绍学校的变化 2000 记叙文 事故报告 看图写作（4 幅） 因目击一起交通事故写一份目击报告 2001 应用文 书信 提供要点 反映当前实施减负全面贯彻素质教育方针后，学校生活中的重大变化 2002 应用文 书信 提供要点 介绍关于“公园是否应收门票”的讨论情况 2003 应用文 书信 看图写作 根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况 2004应用文书信提供要点通知朋友参加电视台才艺比赛2005应用文电子邮件看图写作询问旅行社伦敦旅游有关情况2006说明文书信看图写作

21、介绍校图书馆的情况2007应用文书信提供要点描述理想中的笔友2008应用文书信提供要点询问美国大熊猫苏琳情况2009应用文留言提供要点给房东留言2010应用文书信提供要点请外教做评委20112011全国卷第二节 书面表达（满分25分） （注意：在试题卷上作答无效）假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校 HYPERLINK /study t _blank 学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1. 本人简介；2. 求助内容；3. 约定时间；4. 你的联系方式（Email:;Phone:12345678)

22、。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3. 结束语已为你写好。*Dear Sir/Madam,_Look forward to your replay.Yours,Li Hua四川卷2006第二节 书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。旅游资源许多世界著名的风景名胜，如九寨沟（海子：清澈见底；色彩斑斓）， 都江堰水利工程 （2000多年历史；仍在发挥作用）相关信息气候适宜；交通方便注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式及开头已为你写好（不计入总

23、词数）。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：省份-province海子-lake都江堰水利工程-Dujiangyan Irrigation ProjectDear Nick, Im glad to hear that youre coming to Sichuan in August.Yours sincerely,Li Hua范文：Dear Nick,Im glad to hear that youre coming to Sichuan in August. Youve made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Pro

24、vince is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Projcet.Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors imagination. Another attraction is Dujia

25、ngyan Irrigation Project. It was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. Im sure youll have a good time.Im looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li

26、Hua高分作文Dear Nick, I am glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August. Sichuan is generally regarded as a place to which people never want to say goodbye. Lying in the southwest of China, it enjoys lots of rich tourist attractions and world-famous places of interest such as Jiuzhaigou and Duj

27、iangyan. The lakes in Jiuzhaigou are so transparent and clear that we can even see our reflections in them. We have been benefiting from Dujiangyan Irrigation Project for over 2000 years. It is this project that nurtures the civilizations around here; it is also this project that makes everyone in S

28、ichuan feel proud. If you are interested in visiting these places, convenient transportation will surely carry you there quickly and a wonderful journey will then begin. I am looking forward to your coming soon and where there is any trouble, there is always my help. Yours sincerely, Lihua2007书面表达：假

29、设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry 最近来信，询问你高考后的暑期安排。请胸根据以下要点, 用英语回一封信, 说明你的计划, 并简述理由。1. 休息； 2. 读书； 3. 陪伴父母； 4. 参加社会活动；注意：1. 词数100左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：高考college entrance examination / 社会活动social activities Dear Henry, Im glad to receive your letter._Best wishes!Li Hua范文Dear Henry, Im

30、 glad to receive your letter. Its a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. First of all, a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. Of course, Ill do some reading for fun, and for knowledge

31、 as well. Ill spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. Theyve done so much for me, you know. If possible, Ill take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.Best wishes!Li Hua 2008年延考区书面表达（满分30分）假定你是李华，将去英国某学校短期学习，被安排住在Smith

32、先生家。请你写封短信与其取得联系并询问以下情况：1住宿条件； 2膳食安排； 3交通情况。注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头语已为你写好。Dear Mr. Smith,Im Li Hua from China, writing to ask about my stay with your family. Yours,Li HuaOne Possible Version:Dear Mr. Smith,Im Li Hua from China. writing to ask about my stay with your family.First, Id like

33、 to express my thanks for your kindness of having me. To better prepare for my life in Britain, Id like to know if Ill have a room for myself and if there is a computer I can use. I plan to have lunch at school, and it would be great if I could join you for breakfast and supper. Finally, could you t

34、ell me how far your place is from the school? Is it within walking distance or do I need to take a bus?Im so excited about my visit to the UK. I look forward to seeing you soon. Yours, LiHua2008非延考区书面表达（满分30分）你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：保护环境从我做起。请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。What c

35、an I do for our environment?Everyone can do something for our environment. One Possible Version: What can I do for our environment?Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person leave the classroom in the

36、 evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all

37、these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.2009年四川高考英语书面表达原题如下：假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane打算七月来中国，特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面做具体介绍。1.见面时的问候方式。2.对赞美的回答方式。3.接收礼物时的回应方式。4.餐宴礼节。注意：1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Jane, Glad to he

38、ar from you and you are welcome to China in July. _I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good jounery. Yours sincerelyLi Hua参考答案：Glad to hear from you and you are welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs.Firstly,we greet each other by saying Helloor ask

39、ing such questions Where are you going?or Are you busy? to express our care. Secondly,when praised, we reply with Oh,No! or Im over-praised to show good manners. Next ,when receiving a gift,we usually say Its unnecessary besides Thanks to show politeness and then put it away.Finally, at dinner parti

40、es,we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someones health or success to show that were warm.Anyhow,different cultures,different customs.If you Do as the Romans do when in Rome, youll enjoy more of your stay here.I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good jounery. Yo

41、urs sincerely Li Hua2010第二节 书面表达（满分35分）假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。1.过去对成年的向往；2.现在的感受和认识；3.将来的目标及措施。参考词汇：责任 responsibility注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）Good morning，everyone！The topic of my speech today is “thoughts on becoming a grown-up”. _ Thank you for

42、listening.SampleGood morning, everyone !The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now Im a grown-up, but I find things do not go as I expected.

43、Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entranc

44、e examination and enter a good university.(106words)Thank you for your listening.内容要点1.过去对成年的向往；2.现在的感受；3.现在的认识；4.将来的目标；5.要采取的措施。2011二、书面表达（满分35分） 最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。 你校开展课外活动的情况； 你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处； 为同学选择课外活动提出建议； 为学校开展课外活动提出建议。 注意： 词数100左右；

45、文中不得提及人名、校名及地名； 稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）。 After-class Activities Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. _One Possible Version After-class Activities Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are v

46、arious kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study. Here I have some suggestions. To stu

47、dents, youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework. Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only mak

48、e your school life colorful, but also improve you learning.Part3模版1.观点对比模版1The topic about is becoming more and more popular in our school recently. There are two sides of opinion about it.Some students prefer to consider doing sth.(Some students say is their favorite.) they think that (理由一).Whats m

49、ore， (理由二)。Moreover， (理由三)However， others believe is a better choice for three reasons. (然而，其余的人认为做某事是一种较好的选择，有三个方面的理由) to begin with， (理由一)。 Next， 。 In addition， In my point ， the former is surely a wise choice. The reason is that(或者用：As far as I am concerned， I firmly support the view that(依我来看，我坚

50、决支持这种观点 that引导同位语从句)模版2There is a widespread concern over the issue that (作文题目)。 But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that 观点一 。 In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows： in the firs

51、t place， 原因一 .Furthermore， in the second place， 原因二 。 So it goes without saying that 观点一 。People，however，differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplehold the idea that 观点二 。 In their point of view， on the one hand， 原因一 。 On the other hand， 原因二 。 Therefore， thereis nodoubtthat 观点二 。As far as I am con

52、cerned， Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat 观点一或二 。Itis not only because ， but also because 。 The more ， the more 。2好处与坏处的对比In recent years， has been popular. There are many advantages in First， Second， Third， However， therere some disadvantages： (之一)。Besides， (之二)。 Also， (之三)In my opinion， it is true that ad

53、vantages are more than disadvantages.(依我看，的确是好处多于坏处) I think One big advantage of is that。 / One obvious advantage of is 。 / Finally， While it is true that has many advantages， it is also important to realize that。(虽然某事确实有许多好处，但是意识到也很重要。3.问题与建议模版1提出问题：In recent days， we have to face a problem that近来

54、，我们面临这样一个问题，就是(that同从)。解决办法：With the help of modern technology， we now have many means to solve it. By doing ， we canWhats the most important is that结论：In a word， it is clear / obvious that Only whencan we 。模版2要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法1.有一些人认为 2.另一些人认为 3.我的看法The topic of _(主题)is becoming more and more pop

55、ular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of _(支持A的理由一)What is more， (理由二)。 Moreover， _(理由三)。While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly，_(支持B的理由一)。 Secondly (besides)，_(理

56、由二)。 Thirdly (finally)，_(理由三)。From my point of view， I think _(我的观点).The reason is that _(原因)。 As a matter of fact， there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me， the former is surely a wise choice 。模版3给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Some people believe that _(观点一)。 For example， they think _(举例说明).And

57、it will bring them _(为他们带来的好处)。In my opinion， I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing，_(我不同意该看法的理由一)。 For another thing， _(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said/In a word/In conclusion， I agree to the thought that _(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).模版3解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径：1。 问题现状;2。怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)。In r

58、ecent days， we have to face a problem A， which is becoming more and more serious. First， _(说明A的现状).Second， _(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A， we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing， _(解决方法一)。 For another thing _(解决方法二)。 Finally， _(解决方法三)。Personally， I bel

59、ieve that _(我的解决方法)。 Consequently， Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because _(带来的好处)。4应聘范文Dear Sir or Madam：Im writing to apply for the job as aan part-time reporter ， which I saw advertised in the English Weekly 。 Im interested becoming aan part-time reporter very much. I enclose a

60、copy of my CV.Im a girlboy of 19 years old and Im in my second year of senior high school. I work hard and do well in English， especially in writing and speaking. Besides， Im good at typing and computer. Whats more， I also know something about photography， which is helpful to my job.I have been aan