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1、议论文介绍段+核心段+结尾段轻松搞定6-6.52022/8/6To what extent do you agree or disagree?2022/8/62022/8/61. 我到底要赞同还是不赞同啊！2. 要不哪边好写就写哪边吧！3. (写了100词以后)完蛋！写不下去了！4. 要不把两边都写了吧！5. 完蛋！我到底赞不赞同啊！6. 不管了，反正都讨论到了！2022/8/62022/8/6三种可能的答案1. 一分为二地来看问题（一般来说是不赞同赞同部分赞同）2. completely disagree-2或3个不赞同(30%的可能性)3. totally agree -2或3个赞同 (几

2、乎不考虑这个可能)2022/8/62022/8/6完全赞同的写法并不常见，最主要的原因是考生不容易写够字数。除此以外，官方出题的时候也经常在题目里设定限定词，这就导致完全赞同的写法会显得比较肤浅。但是，大家最好还是把完全赞同的逻辑藏在某个小角落，万一有时候能用到呢。2022/8/62022/8/61. 改写观点，然后表达完全赞同；2. 赞同理由-13. 赞同理由-24. 赞同理由-35. In conclusion, 重复自己的观点. 2022/8/62022/8/6Some people think that unpaid community service should be a comp

3、ulsory part of high school programmes (such as working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2022/8/62022/8/62022/8/62022/8/6完全不赞同逻辑的使用比例比完全赞同稍多，这是因为有的题目读起来简直丧心病狂。作为作者，完全找不到这个观点合理的地方，所以就直接针对题目里的各个点进行反驳就好。2022/8/6202

4、2/8/61. 改写观点，然后表达完全不赞同；2. 不赞同理由-13. 不赞同理由-24. 不赞同理由-35. In conclusion, 重复自己的观点. 2022/8/62022/8/6Some people believe that wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2022/8/62022/8/6Some people argue that it is p

5、ointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of

6、 humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square met

7、re of land in order to feed or modate the worlds population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.2022/8/62022/8/6I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habit

8、ats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earths climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes

9、to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to pro

10、tect them2022/8/62022/8/6Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?2022/8/62022/8/61). It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit

11、 important sites and monuments. Personally, I completely disagree with this opinion.2). First of all, it is unfair to ask foreign tourists to pay more when visiting tourist attractions. They contribute a lot to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and se

12、rvices, including food, souvenirs, modation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidize important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them. 2022/8/62022/8/63). Secondly, if travelers realized that they would have to pay

13、 more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Pauls

14、Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the nations cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings.4). Finally, c

15、harging foreign tourists differently may cause trouble. It takes extra time to distinguish local residents from foreigners and this can be very difficult when people dont have any identification with them. As a consequence, there may be chaos at the ticket office. 5). In conclusion, I believe that e

16、very effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local residents. . 2022/8/62022/8/6Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent

17、 do you agree or disagree? . 2022/8/62022/8/6Opinions are divided on whether it is possible for individuals to make changes to society. I believe there are many examples of individual scientists, inventors or even political activists who have made significant contributions which have benefited their

18、 societies or mankind in general. Therefore, I completely disagree with the given statement. One field in which individuals have made positive changes is that of science, examples of which are medicine and electricity. With regard to the former, a British scientists called Sir Alexander Fleming acci

19、dentally discovered penicillin when he noticed that bacteria could not survive near certain fungi. This discovery, the first antibiotic, has saved millions of lives. As far as electricity is concerned, perhaps the greatest scientist of all was Nicola Tesla, without whose inventions in this field we

20、might not have the safe system of distributing electricity by alternating current that we have today. Among his other inventions were radio waves which are used to broadcast TV and radio, and of course wifi. 2022/8/62022/8/6Apart from science, a number of political activists have also made significa

21、nt contributions to their societies, and have helped to win freedom for their people. Perhaps the most famous of these was Mahatma Gandhi, an Indian lawyer who helped to win independence for his nation from the British with his unique style of peaceful protest, which was later an inspiration to othe

22、r leaders in the 20th century. For example, in the US, a black civil rights leader called Martin Luther King acknowledged the influence of Gandhi. Kings passionate style and non-violent protests against segregation helped to bring about political change for black people in that country. In conclusio

23、n, the scientists, inventors, and activists mentioned above show clearly that individuals can contribute greatly to their societies, so it is not true that they cannot change society. 2022/8/62022/8/6覆盖更全面的一分为二逻辑一分为二的逻辑最常出现，这是因为两个原因。首先，这种写法能充分保障字数；其次，这种构思能体现你对所给观点的全面认识。类似discuss both views的写作逻辑，我们在这

24、里也会采取先弱后强的写作顺序。但是，在这个结构中，弱的部分一定要控制字数，毕竟考官更想看到你对自己偏向部分的解释和论证。2022/8/62022/8/6覆盖更全面的一分为二逻辑1. 改写陈述题目观点。I disagree/agree/partially agree with this opinion(有可能在这儿就停下) because I believe that 一句话写出你的清晰观点；2. One the one hand, there could be two reasons why (这里有n种方法引出前半部分) -这个段落尽可能字数少一些3. On the other hand,

25、however, I would argue that开始强调自己的想法。包括：找到题目观点的不合理之处，夸张的地方，不足的地方，未考虑到的地方；4. In conclusion, 重复自己的观点和看法。2022/8/62022/8/6覆盖更全面的一分为二逻辑1. 改写陈述题目观点。I disagree/agree/partially agree with this opinion(有可能在这儿就停下) because I believe that 一句话写出你的清晰观点；2. Advocates/Opponents of the given opinion believe that .这个段

26、落尽可能字数少一些3. However, I would argue that 开始强调自己的想法。包括：找到题目观点的不合理之处，夸张的地方，不足的地方，未考虑到的地方；4. In conclusion, 重复自己的观点和看法。2022/8/62022/8/6有人认为不应该继续进行太空探索，因为花费巨大并且地球问题还没解决。1. 改写+I disagree with this opinion because I believe that 太空探索的回报大于成本。2. On the one hand, there could be two reasons why some people wan

27、t the government to stop space exploration. Firstly, it is undeniable that space projects have always been incredibly money-consuming. Launching of satellites, building of space ships and maintenance of facilities are conducted at a cost of billions of dollars each year. At the same time, a certain

28、proportion of people on the earth have been suffering hunger, plague and environmental pollution for decades. 3. On the other hand, however, I believe all the money spent on space exploration can be justified for two reasons. One is that the benefits brought by exploring the universe are too valuabl

29、e to be measured with money. (展开) Furthermore, exploring the universe helps to discover solutions to earth. (展开) 4. In conclusion, 我不赞同这个观点2022/8/62022/8/6有人认为应该禁止媒体暴力来减少犯罪。1. 改写 + I partially agree with this opinion and I believe that 青少年应该远离媒体暴力, 但它不应该被完全禁止。 2. On the one hand, the obvious argumen

30、t against media violence is that excessive exposure to super hero movies or CSI TV dramas may lead young viewers to believe that violence is a natural solution to various problems. Some people think that this influence will increase the incidence of violent crimes, like street fighting or armed robb

31、ery. Therefore, it is safe to say that young children and teenagers should not be allowed any access to such media content. 3. On the other hand, however, I believe that this influence is not as harmful to adults as to the younger generation. When adult viewers turn off the TV or walk out of the cin

32、ema, they will be back to reality where rational thinking dominates. (展开) 4. Furthermore, there is no proven evidence to show the connection between watching media violence and committing crimes. (展开) 5. In conclusion, 我部分赞同这个观点2022/8/62022/8/6有人认为金钱是幸福的唯一来源1. 改写+I disagree with this opinion and I b

33、elieve that 金钱满足人们的需求，但幸福并不仅仅来源于财富2. I accept that there is such a strong connection between happiness and money. Being rich enough to afford whatever one desires must produce a great sense of satisfaction. Also, if one is financially able to help others out of trouble, he or she must be happy about

34、 what they can do to make this world a better place. 3. However, admitting the importance of money is not the same as assuming that it is the only factor contributing to being happy. As a matter of fact, the definition of happiness varies greatly from person to person. (展开) 4. In conclusion, 我不赞同这个观

35、点2022/8/62022/8/6When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree2022/8/62022/8/6Many people think that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career. Personally, I disagree with the idea because I believe that other factors are

36、equally important. On the one hand, it is true that money is necessary for people to meet their basic needs. We all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education so most of us consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows us to cover these needs and have a rea

37、sonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other nonfinancial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money

38、to live comfortably and raise a family. 2022/8/62022/8/6On the other hand, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or fr

39、iendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many peoples feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. F

40、inally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society. In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect peoples choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators. 2022/8/62022/8/6前方高能！2022/8/62022/8/6一点点弱，很多很多强！

41、2022/8/62022/8/6In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. However, some people suggest that they should start to go to school at an earlier age. I totally agree with this idea. While some people think this may be damaging to a childs development, or to a

42、childs relationship with his or her parents, in fact I believe that there are many advantages to having school experience at a young age. Firstly, a child will learn to interact with a lot of different people and some children learn to communicate very early because if this. They are generally more

43、confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new situations. Such children find their first day at school at the age of six very frightening and this may have a negative effect on how they learn. 2022/8/62022/8/6Another advantage of

44、 going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially. They make friends and learn how to get on with other children of a similar age. This is often not possible at home because they are the only child, or because their brothers or sisters are older or younger. So overall, I beli

45、eve that attending school from a young age is good for most children, they still spend plenty of time at home with their parents, so they can benefit from both environments. 2022/8/62022/8/6练习题目Some people think that students should not be required to learn a foreign language at school if they have no talent in language. 2022/8/62022/8/62022/8/6是否赞同的介绍段最单纯地换词改写1). Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged m