浙江卷(6月)应用文-高考英语书面表达真题深度解析及变式训练

1、2022年高考英语书面表达真题深度解析及变式训练07浙江卷（6月）应用文（2022.6,浙江卷，来自网络，回忆版）假定你是李华，你校图书馆开设了一个小组学习室，请给留学生 Michael写一封邮件，邀请一同前往体验，内容如下：,位置和开放时间；.室内设施与功能。注意：.词数80左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。书面表达深度解析分析维度内容主题语境人与社会-人际沟通（良好的人际关系）话题选择邀请朋友参与活动体验对接课标普通高中英语课程标准（2017年版2020年修订）“普通高中英语课程语 用知识内容要求”：“必修”-根据交际具体情境，正确理解他人的态度、情感 和观点，运用得体的语言形式，如

2、礼貌、直接或委婉等方式，表达自己的态度、 情感和观点。普通高中英语课程标准（2017年版2020年修订）“普通高中英语课程语 言技能内容要求”：“必修”-一根据表达目的选择适当的语篇类型/根据表达的需 要选择词汇和语法结构/根据表达的需要选择正式语或非正式语。普通高中英语课程标准（2017年版2020年修订）“高中英语课学业质量 水平二（2-13）能在书面表达中有条理地描述自己或他人的经历，阐述观点， 表达情感态度/ （2-14）能在表达过程中有目的地选择词汇和语法结构，确切表 达意思，表达意义的逻辑关联性。普通高中英语课程标准（2017年版2020年修订）“高中英语课学业质量 水平三”：（3

3、T3）能通过书面方式再现想象的经历和事物，对事实、观点、经历 进行评论/ （3-14）能使用衔接手段有效提高书面语篇的连贯性。语篇类型邀请信：邀请信是邀请对方参与某种活动或邀请对方做某事。邀请信最重要的就Dear John,I am LiHua, a student from class 5. Our class will hold a graduation ceremony online , so I am writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony.The graduation ceremony will be held

4、on the afternoon of this Friday on Tencent Live meeting room. To begin with, our principal will make a speech to inspire us to pursue our dreams. Then wonderful performances prapared by our classmates will be on! Finally, you are particularly welcome to express your wishes to everyone of us.I sincer

5、ely hope that you can accept my invitation. I would appreciate it if you could spare the time to attend our graduation ceremony. Look forward to your arrival.Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请外教参加你所在的班级计划举行的线上 毕业典礼，并告知他相关细节。.词汇积累出 席：attend present激励：inspire一 motivate传达：express deliver感激；apprec

6、iate一 be grateful fbr.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Then wonderful performances prapared by our classmates will be on!拓展句： Then our classmates will give wonderful performances, which has been well prepared in advance.是自然流畅，对象不同，信中的表达方式也不同。比方你邀请某位老师组织活动， 如果是不认识的老师，就要说下自己是谁，有什么事情，要显得很尊敬对方。再 比方你邀请朋友参加某个活动，你已经知道对方是谁了，

7、那自然没必要自我介绍， 语气可以显得活泼一些。【写作考前须知】a.盛情邀请参加聚会、共度假期或游览某地等；b.建立密切 联系，加强感情交流；c.拓展相关内容，激发他人兴趣。【写作方法】首段：开门见山说明写作目的。主体：a.具体交代邀请原因；b.邀请内容：活动性质、时间、地点、日期； C.有关要求和希望。尾段：a.再次盛情邀请；b.希望尽快答复。写作构思(1)明确与作要求：给留学生Michael与一封邮件，邀请一向前往体验；(2)说明写信目的：开门见山地指出此次来信是为了邀请参与活动；(3)强调活动细节：地点、时间、活动特征等；(4)附带个人期望：末尾简要表达希望。策略建议(1)精准审题，构建框

8、架。通过分析文体、主题语境、写作框架、内容要点 和语言风格，解读了写作任务，使得学生对写作方向和内容有一个初步的了解。(2)分解要点，组织语料。分析首段、中段、尾段的写作内容和语言要素， 梳理所需的资源。例如，首段作为导语进一步解析试题的核心问题及主题。中段 作为主体拓展细节。尾段以带有激励性、号召性的话语结束。(3)调整修改，注重衔接。整合各局部语料，修改局部细节，添加必要的衔 接手段，以使整个篇章行文流畅。(4)由此及彼，举一反三。在复习备考的过程中，要注重对同类主题、话题的 写作的语料积累以及策略的运用，做到由此及彼、举一反三。【参考范文】Dear Michael,Our school

9、just opened a well-equipped group-study room in the library, so I want to invite you to study with me this Saturday morning.The room is designed for six people and open from 8 a.m. to 20 p.m. . The room facing south is so bright that we can not only enjoy ourselves in the sea of knowledge but bath i

10、n sunshine. Meanwhile,it has two well-perfbrmingcomputers and a big screen, with which we can share our thoughts with each other. Whafs more,free printer is always ready whenever you need to print essays.T hope you can join me! Looking forward to your early reply so T can make a reservation.Yours,Li

11、 Hua变式一主题对应【演变规律】试题所选材料与高考试题的主题一致，即维护良好的人际关系，但话题却不一样。【试题演练】假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。现在由你给她发邮件，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会(farewell party)。要点如下；.祝贺她顺利通过考试，她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；.感谢她帮助你们学习英语；.时间：星期六晚六点；.地点：阳光俱乐部(The Sun Club) 302房间。【参考范文】Dear Jane,Knowing that you are about to return to US, I would like to invite

12、you to a farewell party prepared for you.Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have really made great progress andfinished your two-year study in China. All you have gained is the result of your sweat and effort. We are so proud of you and we all appreciate your pati

13、ence and help with our English. We*ll always remember the wonderful time we spent together.Its a pity that you have to go back soon! So a farewell party for you will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come by 6:00 pm.? Please accept my invitation. Looking forward to

14、 having a fantastic night together!Yours faithfully,Li Hua【写作指导】本文是一篇应用文。假定你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年，即将回国。 现在由你给她发邮件，邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会(farewell party)。要点如下：1.祝贺她顺利通过考试, 她的学习进步很大，为她骄傲；2.感谢她帮助你们学习英语；3.时间：星期六晚六点；4.地点：阳光俱乐 部(The Sun Club) 302 房间。.词汇积累(4个以上)归还，返回：return一 give backcome back以而自豪：be proud o J

15、take pride in感激：appreciate一 be grateful to give gratitude to举行，举办：hold一take place.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Knowing that you are about to return to US, I would like to invite you to a farewell party prepared for you. 拓展句： When I know that you are about to return to US, I would like to invite you to a farewell

16、party prepared for you.变式二话题相似【演变规律】试题所选材料与高考试的主题可能一致、也可能不一样，而且话题也相似，即邀请某人参加 学习体验活动。【试题演练】假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith,但没有其联系方式。请 根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：.感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助：2.询问Mr.Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；3.邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。【参考范文】Dear Tom,I am now back home.In this letter I would like to say thanks

17、to you for your kind help when I was in New York.I have been missing our English professor,Mr.Smith,who is so good a teacher and leaves me a great impression.What about him recently?! want to ask him for some suggestions on how to improve my listening ability.HoweverJ lost his email address.So would

18、 you mind sending it to me via the online mailbox?I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.We can also have a try in lion dances,which is extremely exciting.And the grand lantern festival parade will

19、 be bound to impress you.I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at your home.With my best regards!Yours,Li Hua 【写作指导】本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生写信给同学表示感谢，同时询问老师的联系方式。第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时 要求：1.说明对Tom的感谢.询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式.发出来中国游玩的邀请第二步:列提纲（重点词组）leaves sb a great impression; listen

20、ing ability; be delighted to; so that; be bound to;第三步：连词成句Mr.Smith, who is so good a teacher and leaves me a great impression.want to ask him for some suggestions on how to improve my listening ability.am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival-Chinese Lunar Ne

21、w Year so that I can repay your friendship.4. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second. And then, Finally, In the end, At last.表并歹ll补充关系： What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthe

22、rmore, In addition As well as, not only.but （also）, including,.表转折比照关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause（从句）,In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand.,On the other hand. Some.,while others.9as for, so.that.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清

23、晰，第五步：润色修改变式三类型相似【演变规律】试题所选材料与高考试题在主题、话题上不一定相似或相同，但写作语篇的类型是相似的， 即写一封邀请信。【试题演练1】假定你是李华，为弘扬中国传统的书法艺术，你校书法社将于本周末举行社团活动。作为书法社社长, 请你写信邀请你校交换生Mike来参加。内容包括：L活动的时间和地点;2 .活动内容和意义。注意：1 .词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：书法calligraphy【参考范文】Dear Mike,Knowing that you are interested in Chinese calligraphy, Tm writin

24、g to invite you to attend the activity of our calligraphy club from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm this Saturday.At the beginning of the activity, you will enjoy a lecture about Chinese calligraphy and appreciate masterpieces of some celebrities. After that, you will be exposed to some hands-on activities. Thro

25、ugh this activity, we hope the attendees will know that being an important part of traditional Chinese culture, calligraphy serves the purpose of conveying thoughts and showing the beauty of lines and that not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but its a unique art form

26、 to purify our souls.Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua 【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，为弘扬中国传统的书法艺术，你校书法社将于本 周末举行社团活动。作为书法社社长，请你写信邀请你校交换生Mike来参加。.词汇积累知道：know一learn欣 赏：appreciateenj oy独特的：unique一characteristic对感兴趣：be interested in一have interest in.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： At the beginning of the activity, yo

27、u will enjoy a lecture about Chinese calligraphy and appreciate masterpieces of some celebrities. After that, you will be exposed to some hands-on activities.拓展句： At the beginning of the activity, you will enjoy a lecture about Chinese calligraphy and appreciate masterpieces of some celebrities, aft

28、er which, you will be exposed to some hands-on activities.【试题演练2】假定你是李华。你校将举办音乐节，请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：.活动时间和地点；2.活动内容；3.欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右。.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Dear Allen,How is everything going? Im writing to invite you to a music festival to be held at 8 am next Sunday in our school hall.It is known that great importance has been attached to traditional culture in high schools recently. Accordingly, the music festival