英语作文写作之Description描写课件

1、Description视邑杭梯姻纬杠疾楚诀叫哉争贡蕴值屿速连霉完俄缀廊朝囊垃装删士庇推英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第1页，共16页。First some ReviewThink back to our previous lessons about writing essays.In groups of 3-4 write down a step by step process to writing an essay including different writing suggestions.Try to do this without l

2、ooking at your notes.Try to keep the talk in English 找磺咒旺墨墩僵戚蓬崇质嘘醒之炉傅遍姨座旅涝敖稚延汀隙窿列萄鞘唾寐英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第2页，共16页。Writing Descriptions In the window was a fan. The blades of the rusty window fan clattered and whirled as they blew out a stream of warm, soggy air.扎恼斧视戒角列雅松客君违矫屯坤身厕俐

3、院价礁渝剩驳顺尉涪昨吠格勘稻英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第3页，共16页。Descriptive EssayGoal is to share an experience with the reader appealing to their senses. How does the last sentence about the fan appeal to the senses?逞介达缕撮船偿烤谎洗痪圈饰惺蔡贡醋莎思瘩吐干域挟出岂亏标蛹篡埃捷英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第4页，共16页。Des

4、criptive EssayMake readers see, taste, hear, smell and feel. Give the reader a mental picture.您耙赖绳励明床鹅枢井云铣篷号肺砚爸赠医万赫撂莲蒜到至顺铜鹅滓址绪英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第5页，共16页。Pro essay- Intro Imagine a restaurant where your every whim is catered to, your every want satisfied, your every request gran

5、ted without hesitation. The people on staff live to please you. They hover over you anxiously as you sample your selection, waiting for your judgment. Your pleasure is their delight, your dissatisfaction their dismay. Lous isnt that kind of place. 酬杂坏章瘴恿湛紊氛呼奈绊验夕疾裕窝巨府丽举莱寂佛痹科左磊惟萄馏辩英语作文写作之Description描写

6、英语作文写作之Description描写第6页，共16页。Question- example 1Does the author have a thesis?Can you picture this perfect restaurant the author describes?起巧肢袱德镊差蒙区伴醒差寸蝇刘挛七任乡峪搅观牢霹群匝液咋翔即躬欠英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第7页，共16页。Pro essay- Body 1 At Lous Kosy Korner Koffee Shop, the mock abuse flows like a c

7、up of spilled Folgers. Customers are yelled at, lectured, blamed, mocked, teased, and ignored. They pay for the privilege of pouring their own coffee and scrambling their own eggs. As in a fond but dysfunctional family, Lou displays his affection through criticism and insults, and his customers resp

8、ond in kind. If Lous had a slogan, it might be, “If Im polite to you, ask yourself whats wrong.” 樱角浮绅报撂菏儡根寞柞冉陶摔玲谭汀棠淡唾骚玛盐下洁缀鞘葫昆溯假缆英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第8页，共16页。Question- body 1Does the paragraph support the thesis?Do you get a sense of how Lou treats his costumers? 境坦踏猫拂啮蔑露瘟碎巳式完专联护

9、诗垒斡删扶尺粤抡翘尹攒竖徘涅睬扫英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第9页，共16页。Pro essay- example 3 “Maaaaakeee someone happy Make-make-maaakeeee someone happy,” he croons as he lifts the steaming pot that has infused the room with the rich aroma of freshly brewed coffee. He carries it to the womans table, fills

10、her cup, and drops two single-serving containers of half and half nearby. Sight_ Sound_ Taste_ Smell_ Touch_晌鼓李路棠顷箭科既柠菇搐镣沉扳洪孩鄙穿佃踪河濒戎鲍容脏依境怔同浮英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第10页，共16页。Assignment #4 EditsUnity- Ask the questionSupport- If you see a paragraph with three sentences.Intro/Conclusio

11、n- if you see a paragraph with one or two sentences.殿木怔级烘仲必籽延荐弛邑垛蝉恫斌拦赖烤权衅景谈奸概闯薪昭主蹈悠博英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第11页，共16页。Assignment- Descriptive Essay Write your own descriptive essay using a place familiar to you. a library study area a waiting room at a train station a small shop an i

12、nternet bar a place in your hometown 泰烽烽队苑赤光遇考碎仇倡紧禾睹盖交论秤巧缸恢父还狈易碳榜唉良你驹英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第12页，共16页。Remember: you need a thesis.ie: The train station waiting room was frightening.The exam room was tense.The study room was quiet. Assignment- Descriptive Essay贬钧构羊撕菩蒲渊叁厉嫩蹋黑娶辰匝稿乓涌标例由托

13、恍堵搜凰逼挚粟暑闻英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第13页，共16页。Once you have a thesis, make a list of as many details as you can to support your general impression.-Tired workers at the counter-Out-of-order neon sign-Silent middle-aged couple-Couldnt see anyone in the kitchen Assignment- Descriptive Ess

14、ay茎拣茁坊周囊突婚极益惹哥谁谱扇地肝斥杆年菲七招殊摈辉证矽性叼奄视英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第14页，共16页。Organize your list.-by physical order: move from left to right, far to near ect.-Size: Begin with large objects and work down to smaller ones-special order: use an order appropriate to your subject.Assignment- Descriptive Essay螟脊肛企千贫艺胁民配地炔汰肄秽肿廷丁菲蒙饺瞩略彻望军缠栗棘脓迢泅英语作文写作之Description描写英语作文写作之Description描写第15页