高中英语读后续写与概要写作微技能五情绪与情感描写

1、微技能五情绪与情感描写在读后续写中，描写人物的情绪与情感是常用的描写方法，恰当的情绪与情感描 写能够表现文中人物的性格，推动事件的发展。在描述人物情绪与情感时要突出 文章的中心，与人物的性格吻合，符合事件发展的逻辑。要选用恰当的词句通过 情绪与情感描写精确地刻画人物的内心世界。S!语言输入素材积累，为续写奠基人物喜乐I .词汇积累happy aJ/.愉快的，高兴的；美满的cheerful adj. 快乐的excited adj,兴奋的joyful adj.欢乐的pleased adj.欣喜的，高兴的，满意的enjoy vt.喜爱brighten vt,使快活delight n.欢喜，愉快，高兴

2、vt.使快乐，使喜欢pleasure n.愉快passion n.热情，激情be fond of music 爱好音乐a satisfied look 满意的表情brighten one飞heart 使某人心情愉快yell with delight 乐得大叫set ones heart at rest 使某人安心be wild with delight 欣喜若狂be in high spirits 精神高涨be excited with joy at the success 为成功而欣喜be on the top of the world 心满意足，非常幸福a mixture of excit

3、ement and happiness 既兴奋 乂开心n.佳句背诵The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。Tears of happiness poured down Susans cheeks.幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。Her cheerful spirits and hearty laughter infected the whole class.她那欢乐的情绪和爽朗的笑声感染了全班同学。She wo

4、re a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。人物悲忧消沉I .词汇积累tearn.常用复眼泪,泪珠sob v.啜泣，抽噎sorrow n.悲痛；忧伤desperate adj.绝望的；无望的sadness n.悲伤，忧愁pain n.痛苦release vt.释放griefn.悲痛a broken spirit 意志消沉ciy ones heart out 悲痛欲绝with a heavy heart怀着沉重的心情with a sinking heart 心情沉重地with a sorrowful heart 怀着忧郁的心情be seized with

5、panic 惊慌失措put him into a sentimental mood 让他很伤感fall into despair 陷入绝望a strong sense of loss 强烈的失落感make ones heart bleed 使某人悲痛be down in spirits 情绪低落lose ones spirit 垂头丧气1【.佳句背诵He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。In those days he was in low spirits.那些日子里他情绪低落。Her hands

6、were shaking and she was on the point of crying.她的手在颤抖，快要哭出来了。They were immersed in sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。人物怨怒I .词汇积累displeasure n.不高兴glare V.对怒目而视frustrated adj.失意的；失望的annoyed adj.恼怒的，气恼的rage n.愤怒cross adj.生气的，不高兴的

7、complain constantly 不断地抱怨flame with anger气得满脸通红be displeased at ones conduct对某人的行为感到不满be easily annoyed at trifles 易为琐事而恼火get mad/cross at sb 对某人勃然大怒have a worried look 愁眉苦脸ignore a complaint对抱怨不予理会express/voice a complaint about 对表示不满run out of the room in a burst of anger 怒气冲冲地跑出房间stamp one,s foot

8、 in anger 愤怒地跺脚feel discouraged 感到泄气的feel puzzled/confused 感到困惑的1【.佳句背诵His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。They stopped arguing and glared at each other.他们停止了争论，相互怒视着对方。He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。This failure leaves the child

9、 depressed and frustrated.这次失败使这个小孩灰心丧气。人物其他情绪I .词汇积累serious adj,严肃的,庄重的shame n.羞愧；耻辱yawn V.打呵欠forgive vt.原谅kindly adj.仁慈的；和蔼的；友好的，体贴的hopeless必.没有希望的，绝望的anxiety n.焦虑find.highly stimulating 觉得非常刺激a forgiving spirit 宽容的精神with a kindly spirit以和蔼可亲的态度not in the least is he interested in. 他对点也不感兴趣mixed w

10、ith the emotion of anxiety and hope 混合着焦虑与希望的情绪set off strong feelings 引起强烈的情感be hopelessly addicted to 对彻底上瘾under the domination of these emotions 在这些情绪的控制下1【.佳句背诵He lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。I decided to go for a walk to clear my head.我决定去走走，清醒一下头脑。He felt his cheeks burning wi

11、th shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。She looked at her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.她直视父亲的眼睛，诚实地回答了他的问题。My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.我走进她的办公室时，紧张得心都到了喉咙口。:语言输出层级训练，让续写添彩I .基础练习补全句子Her smile li jp th邑巨 joem.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。The woman delighted 或 the recovery o

12、f her stolen jewels那位妇人对找回 被盗的珠宝感到非常高兴。 Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held 迫 W steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。. She sobbed, hiding “匚 face jn _he hands 她掩面哭泣。His attitude mad邑 jn_ gxtremelY .gnnoy

13、ud. 他的态度使我极为恼火。Dont ge_nat ajne. I did it all for your own good. 别生我的气，我这样做完全是为了你好。His face suddenly rew serious.他的表情突然严肃起来。I【.综合演练完成读后续写，注意情感描写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。续写的词数应为150左右。Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very

14、sick and their father was stiuggling to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks.One day, Ali took Zahras shoes to a shoe repainnan to be fixed, but he lost them on the way HYPERL

15、INK http:/home.It home.It wasnt until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it seciet.Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Alis running shoes.Zahras school hours were in the morning, so

16、she would wear them first.After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali.He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in t

17、he city.When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived.Ali had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ach

18、e.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third.Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided （碰

19、撞）with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.【根据提示完成范文】Paragraph 1：Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could.He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize.Thinking he would let_her sister down（让她妹妹失望）, Ali couldnt help sobbing（情不自禁哭 了 起来）.Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule.Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony,