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1、 美国留学申请书优秀 美国留学申请书优秀范文 To live a meaningful life everyday; to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals. My view of life. Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question. To me

2、, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer. “I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”; “What is the true meaning of that question?” When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court. I was deeply impressed by the judges calmness and the lawyers eloq

3、uence and resource that were showed in this opera. From then on, I hoped to study law some day. Fortunately, I performed well in entrance e-amination and got enrolled into -x-University. Then I chose law as my major without hesitation. At university, I studied hard and got GPA 3.4. Whats more, I bro

4、adly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc. My teachers instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country. From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law. Moreover, I actively participated in practic

5、e in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice. This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitrati

6、on Commission for arbitration. As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly e-plained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time. After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professo

7、r, and listened to her opinions. Realizing the counterpart didnt completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons as follows: First, the counterpart company didnt mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldnt be put into the plant because of the disqualification of

8、workshop. Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss. Based on these reasons, the counterpart didnt completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time. During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give

9、 reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court. Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated. They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company representatives as agents while we just had 3

10、 personstwo lawyers and me. Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect. This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study. In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies. In the process

11、, when I met a lot of problems, I often turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them. As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard. With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship e

12、very year. On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study. In practice, I e-ercised my legal knowledge. I also realize the big gap between theory and its applicationsometimes I have master the rules but I didnt know how to use it in actual case. My practice e-periences have not only strengthene

13、d what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career. In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers eloquence and jumping thinking more and more. However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in pra

14、ctice are insufficient. Moreover, after the Chinas entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law. I think, my internship e-perience is not enough. In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid

15、 enough. Whats more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot. Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition. yours Sincerely 写作技巧 一、研究你所

16、申请的学校 研究你所申请的学校。大部分学校会在admission page上提供校方对申请者的要求。充分了解该所学校，你愈可能写好你的PS，以此证明你对该所学校确实十分地感兴趣。你得花费功夫给读信者一种印象：你花了更多的时间使自己对该所学校了解得比其他的申请者更透彻，这些非常功夫使读信人对你的勤奋，专心致志和对该院系的兴趣有着十分良好的印象。这些非常了解和信息不必在每字之间中提出，也无须非常夸张其辞，你的陈述只需包含足够的信息使人留下你做了非常努力的印象即可。 由于学校的类型以及所选学校的威望，录取委员会将会阅读每年至少上千份文书，为了让你的文章有说服力，令人难忘和个性突出，在回答特定问题时，

17、请保留在概括性问题答案中提及的一些细节，让你总结性的陈述成为一个包容万知的文档，给入学委员会留下一个印象：你比你所陈述的更有内涵。 在申请文档中避免不同部分之间的冗长反复，不要只在行文间陈述你的平均绩点和课程，这些东西在申请中是会被予以与其它部分相当的重视，然而如果你认为平均绩点和课程有所需解释之处则不妨多写一些，比如说，你可以讲明某一些平均绩点的不定是因为生病或是家庭问题所致，除了这些情况，千万别为你的分数找理由，入学委员会每年都要读过成百上千个这样的理由。 二、牢记心中目标 在一篇个人陈述中介绍自己可以有着不同的形式格局，就像每个人讲话一样风格不拘。然而，一篇成功的个人陈述，是一种比较有针

18、对性的自我介绍，聚焦于申请表格提出的两个问题回答“我是谁”，“我能提供些什么”，成功的陈述从未偏离过这两个主题介绍自身，描述你作为有竞争力候选者的潜能。 因此，将个人经历中波及主题的主要成就，转折点和大事件必须相应地着重突出，分析你的个人简历，个人历史和记忆，将生涯中决定性事件单独突出。 一旦你找齐你的个人信息，为你的文章陈述找到一个框架，你已准备好了，可以动手写了，在此过程的一个要素是选择特定的观点角度来陈述你的资料，当然，你的选择有赖于多来年你所养成的特殊风格。 第一人称叙事，这是基本常见的方式，“我”字频频使用，对大部分体裁，它都可能用专业学校和研究生院经常使用此方法，因其直接切入主题，这种方法最大的危险在于你如果不改变句型就极易使读者厌烦，别在通篇文章中给描述语前面加上主语，改变它们的词序，注意词语句子长度，改变文章的面貌和笔感。 第二人称叙事使用“你”字，这种方法极少见但地读者和作者之间建立心