四六级写作高分策略ppt课件

1、四六级写作高分战略1.尽量防止不应该出现的错误：只需评卷人认可了他语法掌握的程度，他才会抱着宽容甚至欣赏的态度看他的句型设计，用词和例证的征引。 CET作文常见错误在实践的阅卷过程中，语法错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点，大家可以想象一下，一篇语法上破绽百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢？因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽能够地防止少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的协助的。现将阅卷过程中所发现的大量言语错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家。1.句子成分残缺不全We always working till late at night before taking exams.(误)We

2、 are always working (We always work) till late at night before taking exams(正)We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)We should read books may be useful to us. (误)2.句子成分多余This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)T

3、he driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)3.主谓不一致Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)Some think that reading should be selective. (正)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)My sister goes to the cinema at leas

4、t once a week. (正)4.动词时态、语态的误用I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)We have little time to read some books in which

5、 we are interested. (正)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)I have been studying in the college for two years(正)5.词类混淆It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)Honesty is so

6、important for everyone. (正)The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正)6.名词可数与不可数的误用Too much tests are disadvantage for students study. (误)Too many tests are disadvantageous to students. (正)In the presidents office, we h

7、ave found new equipments of various kinds. (误)In the presidents office, we have found new equipment of various kinds. (正)7.动词及物与不及物的误用The traffic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways. (误)The traffic accident took place at the junction of two highways. (正)Because of his excellent

8、performance, the boss rose his salary. (误)Because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary. (正)8.介词to和不定式符号的混淆Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking. (误)Too many tests will do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. (正)All these contributed to

9、solve the serious problem. (误)All these contributed to the solution to the serious problem. (正)9.情态动词的误用It may not good to our health. (误)It may be not good to our health. (正)They should spent much time. (误)They should spend much time. (正)10. There be句型的误用There exists some new problems such as being

10、 dishonest. (误)There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. (正)There are many students think college education is worthwhile. (误)There are many students who think college education is worthwhile. (正)11. 动宾搭配不当We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the problem. (误)We must p

11、ay attention and find a solution to the problem. (正)It also may help you to make success. (误)It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. (正)12. 根据中文逐字硬译 If someones family situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. (误)If ones family is not well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan.

12、 (正)Let alone touch the outside world of campus. (误)Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus.(正)keep a good body health. (误)keep fit .(正)2. 句型要有变化性考生不可全以简单句拼凑文章，应自动运用复句、倒装、排比、平行构造及动词短语，表达出良好的言语驾驭才干。 以描画词或描画词组开头Mary was very pleased and telephoned her mother Pleased，Mary telephoned

13、 her mother The girl，hungry and thirsty，went back home Hungry and thirsty，the girl went back home以副词开头The child stayed there quietly Quietly，the child stayed there 以不定式开头 He got up very early to catch the busTo catch the bus，he got up very early以如今分词或过去分词开头 I was filled with anticipation when I came

14、 home from school that dark winters day so long agoComing home from school that dark winters day so long ago，I was filled with anticipationIf you give me enough time，I can do it well Given enough time，I can do it well 以介词短语开头 Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered itL

15、ike many other adventurers，Chester had experienced fear and conquered it以同位语开头Sue，our monitor，always likes giving suggestions to everybodyOur monitor，Sue，always likes giving suggestions to everybody以从句开头Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-h

16、andedBefore he sailed round the world single-handed，Francis had already surprised his friends several timesYou will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspectionIf you have a quality control inspection， you will greatly improve your finished product3. 一定要学会换词，笼统详细的替代

17、太广泛的。考试中普通不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等eg. It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. applicable替代proper, approaches替代ways, implement替代carry out, sh

18、arpen ones competitive edge替代enhance ones competitiveness提高某物竞争力, Computer and I I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i ha

19、d expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 交换 verythrilling 交换 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 交换 sb. be interested in sth.google 交换 searchan army of ,a sea of交换 a lot of The dawn of th

20、e new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The

21、dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描画在某个时期发生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 交换 more and more popular Coincident with 非常地道的词汇，表达“与一致的意思，交换 With Advancement 交换 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )交换 enter into Current ( currently )交换 now Appeal to sb. 交换 sb. be interested in sth. Gr

22、owing individuals 交换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations o

23、nline by chatting, playing games, or delivering . For a start 交换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法 Our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened 用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 交换 In addition / Besides Deliver 交换 send There is no denying that , however, compute

24、rs can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先

25、There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in the disservice of 交换 do harm to Emerging 替代 appearing ( fading 替代 disappearing ) As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds，computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts

26、. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 交换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ，do 强调 Positive 交换 important / good 等 A slice of 交换 a part of Unfavorable 交换 bad Impacts 交换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantag

27、e of 运用插入语 Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常笼统， merits/ virtues) 交换 advantages ( defects 交换 disadvantages ) Facet 交换 aspect 最经典的交换词1.individuals,characters, folks替代people ,persons 2. positive, favorable, rosy(愉快的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding替代good 3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor

28、, adverse(有害的), be less impressive替代bad eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of,

29、an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many, if not most)替代many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that 同理 用most, if not all ,替代most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替代some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that

30、, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (由于是书面语，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替代thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替代get much benefit ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替代 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替代more and more ( 留意没有growingly这种方

31、式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰描画词，副词用increasingly. Eg. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.exceedingly ,extremely交换 very13.benefitial, rewarding替代helpful14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替代customer15. thrilling 交换 exciting16.neverthele

32、ss 代 but17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替代sb be interested in18.capture ones attention替代attract ones attention19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替代ca

33、use22.magnificent ,cute, pretty, gorgeous替代 beautiful 23.desire 替代want24.pour attention into 替代pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替代remember26. enjoy, possess 替代have27. interaction替代communication28.frown on sth替代 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example替代 for example30.

34、next to/virtually impossible,替代nearly impossible 后为精彩交换词：31idea/opinion notion/ standpoint/perspective/outlook32. reasonable rational/ sensible/advisable33. consider ponder/contemplate/deliberate34. use utilize/ take advantage of35. deliver/send convey/ transmit/ transfer36. serious severe/austere/

35、stern37. obvious apparent/ evident/ transparent/conspicuous38. important significant/crucial/critical/ vital/fatal39. according to in accordance with/ based on40. basic essential/fundamental/ elemental/ elementary41. main/chief principal/ primary/ dominant/ predominant/ cardinal42. partportion/ sect

36、ion/ fraction43. public/common ordinary/extensive/comprehensive44. task/work assignment/ commission45. method/ way measure/mode/approach/remedy(指补救的方法)46. famous distinguished/ prominent/ eminent/ striking47. catch capture/ grasp/grip/(fig.)digest48. big enormous/immense/tremendous/ massive/ sweepin

37、g /colossal/gigantic49. search/look for google/ransack/ rummage50. finally eventually/terminally/ultimately51. striking astonishing/ amazing/ 52. unbelievable incredible/ inconceivable53. prove/justify confirm/ certify/ substantiate54. various diverse/myriad/ multitudinous/ miscellaneous55. complex

38、elaborated/ sophisticated /complicated/intricate56.unchanging permanent/ constant/ enduring57. instant /momentary temporary/ephemeral/ transient58. arbitrary 武断的59top summit/culmination/ acme/zenith/peak60. improve promote/ accelerate/ boost/enhance61. explain interpret/illustrate/illuminate/ elucid

39、ate/depict62. change alter/ convert/ transform/diversify/modify63. centre core/kernel/ nucleus64. agree approve sb. Of sth./ consent to do /concur with sb. in doing sth.65. dont know be ignorant of sth.66. in order to for the sake of 67.ability qualification/ capacity/ capability/ competence68. buy

40、purchase/procure69. about大约 approximate/ estimated70. rule/principle regulation/doctrine/formula71. give offer sth. to sb./provide for/supplyfor72. traditional conventional/ conservative73. dangerous perilous/ hazardous/ precarious74. actually substantially/ practically75. careful cautious/discreet/

41、 prudent/ scrupulous76. old/ out-of-date obsolete/ancient/antiquated77. productive pregnant 78good part advantage/merit/strength79. brave gallant/valiant/intrepid80. excellent/good splendid/glorious/brilliant/magnificent /marvelous81. natural spontaneous/ instinctive, inherent82. necessary compulsor

42、y /obligatory/mandatory83. finish accomplish/ consummate84. carry out implement85. about关于(prep.) regarding/ concerning86. difference divergence/ inconsistency/discrepasy/incongruity87.not clear ambiguous /suspicious/ dubious/ implicit88. decisive crucial/critical89. cause/ arouse trigger/stimulate/

43、whet90. reform evolution/innovation 91. city metropolis92. admit acknowledge/concede93.avoid avert/ dodge/ evade94. start/begin embark on sth./ commence to do sth./initiate sth.95. give up abandon/renounce/relinquish96. destroy devastate/demolish/exterminate97. puzzle bewilder/perplex /mystify98.sur

44、face superficial/ostensible99. the campus the Ivory Tower100.the net(internet) the fictitious world/the electronic world/ the cyber world101. a lot of a multitude of/ a galaxy of102. many myriad/ umpteen103. wethe public/the individuals/the folks104. as a result consequently105. popularprevalent4.主题

45、句放开头。作为应试手段，考生应现实地去争取做到开宗明义，将主题句 (Topic Sentence) 放在每段开头。将提纲以主题句的方式放在每段开头表述出来，就可防止跑题.5.写好第一句话。这样容易给阅卷者留下一个好印象，最好能用上一个复句，里面要用上2-3个难的单词或词组。 6. 自动运用生动的成语、谚语及有压服力的引语。每次练习时，把这些成语、谚语、引语划出来，以强化自动运用的认识。例如，在论述求知的困难时，可援用There is no royal road to learning. (做学问无捷径可走)7. 学会逃避。譬如，想表示某人过着奢华的生活，可以说 He lived a kind

46、of luxurious life. 但考生如不会写 luxurious 这个词，无妨逃避，切勿生拼硬造。考生可以说 He had a car, a big house and a large company.bread car - microbus/van“Mr Kong,“teacher Kong - Confucius， a great educator in the history of China孟子是Menciusthe boy putting sheep，the boy sending sheep, the boy MU sheep, -shepherd, the little

47、boy，8. 自动运用过渡词。例如运用firstly, secondly, to make long short, moreover, however, furthermore 等等，这样，会使文章层次明晰，也使本人思绪清楚。9. 留意防止逻辑错误。例: 1997年1月六级考试作文标题为 Haste Makes Waste，一考生的第一段第一句为 The faster the better， because they can save time in this way.这样写显然不妥，由于这样写，就等于认定快并可以省时.10.适当用被动替代自动，句子开头不要总是用we / I 比如写结尾时不用

48、we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. 经典结尾：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 1.擅长运用插入语，比如说把副词、衔接词等，作插入语放在中间，普通放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however /

49、therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，普通放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 2字数要足够。但不要写得太长(四级在120-180之间；六级在150-200之间)，否那么容易引起阅卷者的反感。3. 卷面要整洁。卷面潦草字迹不清的文章，经常还没有看到内容就会使人产生厌恶 。14.择语的准确性Do not write so that your words may be understood, but write so that your w

50、ords must be understood. The difference between the right word and the almost-right word is as great as that between lighting and the lighting bug. (Mark Twain)15.多余的或转弯抹角的词语都不利于明白地表达思想 莎士比亚的名言“Brevity is the soul of wit,相当于汉语的“言贵简约。 mutual aid (to each other) (mutual) aid to each other， (an entirel

51、y) complete confidence， repeat the question (again)， Return (back) from abroad，etc.Task1: Replace the underlined parts 1.In my opinion, those who are against the Internet think that it has a lot of advantages.From my perspective, the opponents of the Internet hold the view that it has a number of ad

52、vantages.Task1: Replace the underlined parts 2.In general, we can safely draw the conclusion that moving to suburb is good to a citys growth.In a word, we can safely come to / arrive at the conclusion that moving to suburb benefits a citys development. Task1: Replace the underlined parts 3.On the on

53、e hand, the teacher should punish the lazy students; on the other hand, such phenomena should be reported.For one thing, the teacher should impose punishment on the lazy students. For another, such phenomena should be reported.Task1: Replace the underlined parts 4.In the current society, some people

54、 dream of making much money overnight and take risks to produce pirated products. In the present society, some people dream of making a fortune overnight and take risks to produce pirated products. Task1: Replace the underlined parts 5.Nowadays, every one of us has been faced with many instances of

55、dishonesty. Nowadays, every one of us has been confronted with many cases of dishonesty.Task 1: Replace the underlined parts 6.But in some cases, talking is the right choice.Nevertheless, under some circumstances, talking is the right choice. 或者on some occasions, in some situationsTask II. Extension of simple sentence1.Now, the society needs talents. It is self-evident that the present fast-developing society calls for talents who can contribute to its ec