大学英语六级写作

1、Tips for CET-6n大学英语四级和六级的试卷结构、测试内容、测试题型、分值比例和考试时间如大学英语四级和六级的试卷结构、测试内容、测试题型、分值比例和考试时间如下表所示：下表所示：Differences:1.词汇量: CET4 大纲词汇4200 核心词700 CET6大纲词汇5500 核心词13002.作文: 150词 句子/逻辑关系 （四级120-150词）3.听力: 难度加大,速度加快, 小词多,场景词4.阅读: 文章加长,难度加大,逻辑关系PP Principle Passion ： Inspiration Motivation 1，全球化的影响 2，职业趋向 3，个人价值的实

2、现 Practice 好好背单词 多做真题六级词汇的重要性利用“人体规律法”背单词 1，每天背50个单词左右最佳： a)如果是短期记忆：每个单词背4遍 b)如果要长期记忆：每个单词背7遍最好 2，背单词的最佳时间：晚上睡前的半小时，和早上醒来后的1小时 3，背单词最适宜的温度：10摄氏度左右（个人体验） 4，背单词最佳姿势：“倒背如流”(可操作性不强) 最佳的姿势：来回走着背。 优点： a)辅助记忆，便于思考，利于大脑的快速运转 b)预防疾病，Cervical spondylosis颈椎软骨疾病 背单词眼耳口手齐到，才能真正记住单词复习计划复习计划: 1.真题卷和预测卷及单项 2.六级词汇书

3、每天60词 3.每周背一篇范文,写一篇标准作文 4.每周至少一套真题,精确掌握时间 5.反复分析错误和弱项 6.反复练习,提高正确率Writing 1234Contents 评分标准词汇句型篇章结构了解你的对手n1. 从题目的角度nTime：30 minutesnWords：150nProportion：15%=106.5nAverage score：below 50%了解你的对手n2.从改卷员的角度n误解：高分=读起来是好文章n正解：高分=看起来像好文章n如何改卷：抓壮丁心态每天500篇以上5篇范文对照（2、5、8、11、14分）A.扫两点（错点&亮点） 四级和六级两点非常重要的区别

4、： 四级写出正确的句子就可以了，四级词汇用得不用很多就可以得到13到14分，六级完全不一样，我们只看第一就是要多变，多变体现在多用复合句也要用简单句，第二点是词汇，如果这个词汇是比较平常的，我拿过来绝对不给你13或者14分最多给12分，在阅卷的过程中会看到好多老师会看到他们说这样的学生这样难的词汇都可以用了应当得12分，尽管错了一个句型，你把四级、六级非常难的词汇都用上了，非常难的短语都用上这篇文章肯定可以得到高分避免四级垃圾词汇： n相信大家都有这样的感受，明明是背了很多的单词，可写作文时，总是用一些高中或小学的词汇（又称垃圾词汇）。为了更好的克服这样的情况，我总结了一些常用的替代语，希望对

5、大家有所帮助： 关键三步n1.减少失误（拼写、语法、字迹）n2.模板句n3.语言升级Words, my swords!改，桑田变沧海词句升级的可操作性n开头句大众脸：nWith the development of science and technology, our life is more and more convenient.n开头句明星脸：nWith the expansion of IT implication, our life is of increasing convenience.n开头句巨星脸：nThanks to the rapid expansion of IT-b

6、ased implication, the convenience of our daily life is on the rise.词句升级的可操作性n词汇句型升级关键：少而精n词汇升级：词汇升级：15组组n一个都不能多！1.一个都不能弱！Words, my swords!词汇升级15组1.n输出类项目（写作、口语）要偷师输入类项目（阅读、听力）考察以下的阅读文段：nIndeed, until two centuries ago, the West was so backward in agriculture compared with China, that the West was th

7、e underdeveloped world in comparison with the Chinese developed world.1.名词化n1.1 形容词名词n翻译：知识非常重要。翻译：知识非常重要。nKnowledge is very important.nKnowledge is of great importance.n*The importance of knowledge is obvious.1.名词化n1.2 副词名词n翻译：我们需要客观地看待这个问题nWe should look on this problem objectively.nWe should look

8、 on this problem in an objective way.1.名词化n1.3 动词名词nWe should take measures to save wild animals.nWe should take measures for the safety of wild animals.1.名词化nSummaryn1.1 be adj be of + n n isn1.2 adv in a adj way/mannern1.3 to do sth for sth2. 双重否定n阅读文段的例子：nIt is generally believed that fashion is

9、common in any country that has a strong consumer economy. In other words, fashion is not unique to the United States. 2. 双重否定n题目：Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?n传统书会传统书会一直存在一直存在就像电视机就像电视机一直存在一直存在一一样样nTraditional books will still exist just like that televisions have never disappeared.3. n阅读文

10、段的例子：nHeadache has arrived with the cold and wet conditions. The illness is striking almost everybody from infants to the elderly.3. 上层词n好处：避免表达的重复；比较容易想到n再看一个阅读例子：nHigher water levels in the lake area may also damage bamboo woods. That means giant pandas, which feed on these plants will suffer, too

11、.3. 上层词n翻译：艺术班如雨后春笋般涌现，不少家翻译：艺术班如雨后春笋般涌现，不少家长把孩子送到这些艺术班。长把孩子送到这些艺术班。nVarious art classes keep rolling in and a great number of parents send their kids to_nthese art schoolsnsuch kind of supporting education.3. 上层词n翻译：海外旅游价格越来越便宜，因此很翻译：海外旅游价格越来越便宜，因此很多人选择海外旅行。多人选择海外旅行。nThe price of oversea travelling

12、 is continuously dropping. Accordingly, a large number of people prefer_.nthese travelling/ tour linesnthis kind of recreation. 4. 表达“人们”n万恶的万恶的“people”nSome people believe that education is important.nOther people do not agree.nHowever, all people need to study,nbecause no people can grow without i

13、t.n4.1 直接去掉直接去掉 peoplenSome believe that education is important.nOthers do not agree.nHowever, all need to study,nbecause none can grow without it.4. 表达“人们”n4.2 “人们”作主语的时候n翻译：一些人认为电子书对孩子是有好处的。翻译：一些人认为电子书对孩子是有好处的。nSome people believe that E-book is beneficial for kids.nindividuals4. 表达“人们”n4.3 表达“在人们

14、中”n这个问题引起了人们热烈的讨论。这个问题引起了人们热烈的讨论。nThis has aroused hot discussion among people. nthe societynthe general public.4. 表达“人们”n4.4 当“人们”与“自然”相对的时侯n翻译：人与自然的和谐共处翻译：人与自然的和谐共处n_ coexistence between people and nature nharmoniousnhuman beingsnmankind4. 表达“人们”nSummarynpeoplen4.1 直接去掉n4.2 the society/ the genera

15、l publicn4.3 individualsn4.4 human being5. 表达“重要”n5.1 表达“重大，显著”n翻译：翻译：iPad是苹果公司最重大的发明之一是苹果公司最重大的发明之一nOne of the most _ inventions of Apple company is iPod.nsignificantnremarkable5. 表达“重要”n5.2 表达“关键的”n翻译：勤奋是成功的关键翻译：勤奋是成功的关键nHard work is _ to success.nessential5. 表达“重要”n5.3 表达“不可或缺”n翻译：数码产品已经成为日常生活不可或

16、缺的翻译：数码产品已经成为日常生活不可或缺的一部分。一部分。nDigital products have become _ in daily life.nIndispensible dispensbl 5. 表达“重要”n5.4 一个黄金词组n翻译：互联网对开阔我们的眼界至关重要。翻译：互联网对开阔我们的眼界至关重要。nThe Internet plays a _ role in widening our eyes.nvitalnwiden ones eyes?nbroaden ones horizons hraizn nwiden knowledge; enrich experience;5

17、. 表达“重要”n5.5 一个钻石句型nA is to B what perfume is to a flower.n众所周知，兴趣对于学习至关重要。众所周知，兴趣对于学习至关重要。nAs is known to us, interests are to study what perfume is to a flower.5. 表达“重要”nSummarynimportantn5.1 significant/ remarkablen5.2 essentialn5.3 indispensablen5.4 play critical/ crucial/ vital role n5.5 A is t

18、o B what perfume is to a flower.6. 表达“将会”nwill/ would?n翻译：石油资源会在未来几十年被耗尽。翻译：石油资源会在未来几十年被耗尽。nPetrol resource will be used up in a few decades.6.1 is likely ton6.2 tends toExercise 1n翻译：大多数人认为，英语会变得更重要。nMost people think that English will become more important.nAccording to most individuals, the signi

19、ficance of English tends to increase. 7. 比较级n翻译：她比他更聪明。nShe is smarter than him.nShe is relatively smart compared with him.8. 表达“许多”n翻译：很多人在金融危机中损失了很多钱。翻译：很多人在金融危机中损失了很多钱。n可数：可数：numerous; a large number of n不可数：不可数：mass; a vast amount ofnA large number of investors had lost a vast amount of money in

20、 the financial crisis.nNumerous investors had gain a mass profit.9.n此句土，土在何处？nNowadays, environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular.9. 表达“现在”nNowadays, environmentally friendly products are becoming more and more popular.ncurrentlynin contemporary societynin this day and age

21、Exercise 2n翻译：现在，很多人过上了比以前更好的生活。nNowadays, many people live a better life than before.nCurrently, a vast number of individuals live a relatively decent life compared with the past.10. 表达“越来越”n越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越难找到好工作。难找到好工作。n菜鸟级菜鸟级nMore and more college graduates who have just grad

22、uated from university find that finding a good job is more and more difficult.10. 表达“越来越”n越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越难找到好工作。难找到好工作。n大鸟级大鸟级nA growing number of fresh graduates find that obtaining a decent job is increasingly difficult.10. 表达“越来越”n越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现越来越难找到好工作。难找

23、到好工作。n神鸟级神鸟级nThe difficulty of being employed by a decent employer is on the rise, as the number of fresh graduates grows.10. 表达“越来越”nmore and more adj= increasingly adjn = n is on the risenmore and more n = a growing number of nn the number of n is growingn在常考的对立论证题目里面，n以下四个单词被频繁使用，n江湖称之为“四大土鳖”n好，坏

24、，优点，缺点ngood, bad, advantage, disadvantage11. 表达“好”n11.1 表达“对有好处”n翻译：上艺术班对孩子们是有好处的翻译：上艺术班对孩子们是有好处的nAttending art classes is _good_ for kids.nbeneficialnprofitable11. 表达“好”n11.2 表达“好生活、好工作”ndecentn抓住这个好机会抓住这个好机会ncatch this decent opportunityn工资待遇好工资待遇好ndecent salary11. 表达“好”n11.3 表达“好主意”na good ideanw

25、isensensible11. 表达“好”n11.4 表达“优秀”（好学生、好产品）na good studentnoutstandingnextraordinary11. 表达“好”n11.5 表达“A比B更好” nA is better than B.nA is superior to B.n翻译：少数服从多数nMajority is superior to Minority.12. 表达“坏”n12.1 表达“坏的，有不好后果的”nharmfulnDetrimental ,detrimentl adj. 不利的；有害的nHazardous hzds adj. 有危险的；冒险的；碰运气的;

26、 坏的12. 表达“坏”n12.3 表达“A 比B 坏” nA is worse than BnA is subordinate to B.13. 表达“优点”nadvantagenmerit n. 优点，价值；功绩；功过 /virtue v:tju: n. 美德；优点；ntake advantage of sth?nmake full use of sths merit /virtue 13. 表达“优点”nmerit /virtuen翻译：我认为两种意见都有好处而且可以共存。翻译：我认为两种意见都有好处而且可以共存。nI believe that both views have their

27、 own _ and can coexist.nmerits/ virtues14. 表达“缺点”ndisadvantagendemerit/ drawback/ flaw/ shortcoming/ costn拖后腿？坏处？代价？短板？瑕疵？拖后腿？坏处？代价？短板？瑕疵？14. 表达“缺点”ndemerit/ drawback/ flaw/ shortcoming/ costn翻译：我认为我们应该利用互联网的好处而翻译：我认为我们应该利用互联网的好处而避免它的坏处。避免它的坏处。nFrom my point of view, it is wise to take advantage of

28、internet while minimizing its drawbacks.15.表达“例如”nfor example Take a typical/ vivid / concrete example, A typical/ vivid case in point is15.表达“例如”nfor examplen升级版升级版*n举数据例子：Take a typical/ vivid / concrete example, it was revealed by the data in a recent report thatn举生活例子：A typical/ vivid case in po

29、int is my old friend Ben. HeMore examplesn垃圾词汇1：help 典型例句：Ill help you. 替代语：accomodate e.g.: Ill endeavour to accomodate you. 垃圾词汇2：helpful 典型例句：sth is helpful (to sb) 替代语：conducive e.g.: sth is conducive to sb.鉴于有些作文多关于道德和品格塑造，再给出两个有用的短语： time-honored 时代赋予的 do credit to our forbears 继承先辈的优秀传统 垃圾词汇3

30、：show 典型例句：as it shows in the picture 替代语：betray 垃圾词汇4：think 典型例句：I think - - 替代语：deem 垃圾词汇5：ugly 典型例句：xxx is ugly 替代语：hideous nn垃圾词汇6：by the way 典型例句：by the way,. 替代语：incidentally,.n垃圾词汇7：because 典型例句：xxx because xxx 替代语：in that/in as much as 垃圾词汇8：consider 典型例句：We must consider xxx 替代语：allow for e

31、.g: We must allow for xxx 垃圾词汇9：much 典型例句： There has been a much increase in the world population 替代语：There has been a drastic increase in the - 垃圾词汇10：about 典型例句：It is about 250 times of that 替代语：It is approximately - 垃圾词汇11：buy 替代语：purchase 写作句型历年题目的第一段历年题目的第一段n2010.06 1. 2010.06 1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文

32、的现象近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象n2009.12 1. 2009.12 1. 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班，对此有人表现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班，对此有人表示支持示支持n2009.06 1. 2009.06 1. 有人认为名字很重要有人认为名字很重要n2008.12 1. 2008.12 1. 大学生的心理健康十分重要大学生的心理健康十分重要n2008.06 1. 2008.06 1. 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多n2007.12 1. 2007.12 1. 如今数字化产品得到越来越多广泛的使用，例如如今数字化产品得到越来越多广

33、泛的使用，例如 n2007. 06 1. 2007. 06 1. 有人做好事期望得到回报；有人做好事期望得到回报；n2006.12 1. 2006.12 1. 阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。写作核心：句型写作核心：句型n总起：阅读经典书籍非常重要。总起：阅读经典书籍非常重要。n初中初中nReading classics is very important.n高中高中nbe important = be of importancen great vital crucial 写作核心：句型写作核心：句型nIt is of vital importance to r

34、ead classics.n大学预科大学预科nNothing is more important than nNothing is more important than to read classics.n大学四级大学四级nplay a/an role / part写作核心：句型写作核心：句型nReading classics plays a very important role nowadays .n六级高分六级高分nimportant = significant = essentialnpivotal pivtl = indispensiblenNothing plays a more

35、 indispensible role than to read classics.天龙八部天龙八部 第一部第一部n2006.12 The Importance of Reading ClassicsnIt is generally accepted that nothing can play a more indispensable role than reading books.n描述类经典句描述类经典句n真理类经典句真理类经典句nIt is generally accepted that one should never expect a reward when doing a good

36、 deed. Seemingly justifiable, however, it is not always the case.第一部发散第一部发散n真真题题类类经经典句升典句升级级：nThere is little doubt that nThere is general acceptance that nIt cannot be denied that nThere is a growing recognition that nIt has been widely noted that nIt is universally acknowledged that nA prevailing

37、notion / trend is that 天龙八部天龙八部 第二部第二部n2009.06 Should parents send their kids to art classesn越来越多的父母开始考虑把孩子送到艺术学校去。越来越多的父母开始考虑把孩子送到艺术学校去。nAn increasing number of parents begin to consider sending their kids to art classesnsuch as drawing and dancing on weekends or during the holidays.nAn increasing

38、/ growing number of people begin to 可以可以取代取代 more and more npeople in growing number天龙八部天龙八部 第三部第三部n随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多nOwning to / With the development of IT industry, e-books in growing number begin to emerge into peoples vision. n出现类出现类 - 出现，产生出现，产生nProbably without our conscious

39、ness / realization, the IT technology seems to give birth to a digital age in todays world.nA - emerge into peoples sight/visionnA - B A give birth to B英英汉汉差差异异1 1n英语多被动，汉语多主动。英语多被动，汉语多主动。n我们应该重视阅读电子书我们应该重视阅读电子书nWe should pay attention to e-books.nYou should pay attention to e-books.n文章中不得出现文章中不得出现y

40、ou！nAttention should be paid to reading e-books.n加比加比较级较级：nlaid concentration/focus on/upon Much more concentrations than ever before have been laid on/upon reading classics. 天龙八部天龙八部 第五部第五部n2009.06 On the Importance of a Namen长期以来，人们一直都对名字的重要性很长期以来，人们一直都对名字的重要性很感兴趣感兴趣。nOver the past centuries, peop

41、le have long been interested in identifying the significance of a name.nPeople have long been interested in identifying 天龙八部天龙八部 第六部第六部n2009.12 Should parents send their kids to art classesn孩子的教育已经成为最重要的社会问题孩子的教育已经成为最重要的社会问题之一之一。nChildrens education has recently arisen as one of the essential proble

42、msnWhich arouses public concern in our society.n之一之一 has arisen as one of n可以取代可以取代become 新生事物新生事物天龙八部天龙八部 第七部第七部n2008.12 The Importance of Students mental healthn对于对于如何提高大学生心理健康问题如何提高大学生心理健康问题，大家，大家议论纷纷议论纷纷。nA：the issue of how to improve the students mental healthnB：a heated discussion / a debaten1

43、. A has been a matter of Bn2. A has been open to B天龙八部天龙八部 第七部第七部n3. A has caused / led to / resulted in / triggered / given rise to B.n4. As regards A, there has been B among the general public in our society.n5. An agreement / A consensus has not been reached among the public upon B.n句型多样性句型多样性英英汉

44、汉差差异异2 2n汉语多短句，英语多长句汉语多短句，英语多长句nwind flower snow moonn小桥小桥 流水流水 人家人家nMurmuring stream flows underneath the tiny bridge, leading to elegant dwellings. n某人做好事要求回报某人做好事要求回报n发散发散英英汉汉差差异异2 2nOne should expect a reward after doing a good deed. Though the question is seemingly simple, it poses a considerab

45、le challenge to the society. And it tends to showcase peoples moral belief.n10 - 7n10 - 9甚至甚至10 ？天龙八部天龙八部 第八部第八部n2007.06 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?nSeemingly simple, the question of whether one should expect a reward after doing a good deed poses a considerable challenge whic

46、h tends to showcase peoples moral belief.n pose a considerable challenge to n tend to 当中文出现容易时当中文出现容易时nI tend to believe / claim that 第八部发散第八部发散n使使动动类类经经典句升典句升级级(对对造成了造成了)npose to 或者或者 place / put on n1. Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.n2. Rapid population growth will put/place a str

47、ain on economies around the world.n3. Smoking place a great influence on our health.第八部发散第八部发散n趋势趋势类类经经典句升典句升级级：ntend to tend to nbe likely to be likely to nbe inclined to be inclined to nbe liable to be liable to nbe apt to be apt to nbe prone to be prone to 第八部发散第八部发散n1. One tends to shout when he

48、 gets excited.n2. In winter, people are apt to catch cold.n3. He is likely to make mistakes when tired.n4. She is prone to lose temper in difficult situation.n5. Leo is liable to act aggressively.n6. This kind of shoes is inclined to slip on wet ground.天龙八部步法天龙八部步法举例类举例类n1. for instancen2. take _ fo

49、r examplenTime / Place has witnessedna sharp / dramatic / steady / slightnincrease / decreasenin the number of who _.为什么要用天龙八部为什么要用天龙八部n天龙八部核心天龙八部核心 句型句型n如如20072007年年1212月月 Digital AgeDigital Agen数字时代可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害。数字时代可以使人们受益，也可能带来危害。nDigital age both has advantages and Digital age both has advant

50、ages and disadvantages.disadvantages.nIt goes without sayingIt goes without saying that that Digital Digital age both have advantages and disadvantages.age both have advantages and disadvantages.六级考试作文闪光点 n作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼!n高分作文标志

51、:n1：是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：n1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches

52、 were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. plikbln2. 善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。n如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。n比如说： Other individuals, however, take the a

53、ttitude that nn 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,npeople, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替换enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)n下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。n n Computer an

54、d I nnI never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sl

55、eepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. miludisnexceedingly 替换 verynthrilling 替换 excitingnsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.ngoogle 替换 searchnan army of 替换 a lot ofnn n The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coi

56、ncident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!nThe dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increas

57、ing popularity 替换 more and more popularnCoincident with 非常地道的句型，表达“与一致”的意思，替换 With nAdvancement 替换 developmentnPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter intonCurrent ( currently )替换 nownAppeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.nGrowing individuals 替换 more and more peoplenIt is no exaggeration t

58、o say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的nn For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.nFor a s

59、tart 替换 To begin withnWe can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法nour knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动nAdditionally 替换 In addition / BesidesnDeliver 替换 send There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a

60、way, especially the growing violence , porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.nThere is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语， function in th