【县级公开课】短文改错之秘诀课件

1、 短文改错之短文改错之秘诀秘诀 文章多采用记叙文，有时也用说明文，长度在 100 词左右； 要求学生仅对文中的某个单词进行增加、删除、或修改，只允许修改 10 处，从第十一处不计分 错误方式：词法、句法、句式结构、行文逻辑等。小苹果 短文改错秘决 （点击播放）一、名词和冠词一、名词和冠词 NMET2001： so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. NMET2003: Their word were a great encouragement to me. _ subjects words1、Bill was standing at the s

2、ide of the car, talking to two men who was helping him to repair it. werev2、 We may be one family and live under a same roof. v3、 As everyone knows, its famous mountain with all v kinds of plants and animals.v4 After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened. theaan查名词名前冠词错多少 名词该单还是复 可不可数要分清 主谓一

3、致忘不了有无冠词意不同 固定搭配必要记二、二、动词动词 NMET2003：She liked it very much and reads it to the class. NMET2000： Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. readare 动词(1) Im glad to learn that youve been settled down in Boston and are getting used to the local ways of life. (2) When one student does so, muc

4、h larger values are destroying. (3) When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city just as well. destroyedcome三、三、形容词和副词形容词和副词 NMET 2004 : I would describe myself as shy and quietly. _NMET 2005 : He asked angry if we had finished the work. _ quietangrily (1) After an hour or

5、 so we began to feel very frightening. (2) Last Sunday, police cars hurried to the taller building in New York. (3) As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. frightenedtallest四代词 (1) We chose the cheapest biscuits and ate it under a tree. (2) bu

6、t I believe you personal experience will be a lot better. (3) I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent it to me.themyour五介词五介词 (1) There are so many places I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer. (2) Her strength made me stronger and gave to me courage

7、 to try things others thought were impossible. (3) I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. as六数词六数词 (1) My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. (2) When he was in his fifty, he moved to France. (3) This big steel plant has a thousand of wor

8、kers. (4) About three-fifth of the workers of that steel works are young people.fiftiesthree-fifths查数词查数词勿忘数词错混用勿忘数词错混用七非谓语七非谓语这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分现在分词、过去分词，动名词词、过去分词，动名词和和不定式不定式错误。例如：错误。例如：NMET2001： My parents love me and will do all they can make sure NMET 2002: We fed monkeys, vi

9、siting temples and told stories. _NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. _ tovisitedtalking八连词八连词 (1) We liked the dishes you had cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you taught us. (2)My mother loves swimming. T

10、herefore, my father loves football. (3) It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. andHoweverwhen固定搭配固定搭配 (1) However, a second person thought that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good manners. (2) It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a w

11、ell time for all of us. (3) so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a funthan复合句复合句 NMET 2004 : I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. _NMET 1997：I live in Beijing，where is the capital of China. _ whywhich十、逻辑错误十、逻辑错误 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓

12、上的于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴张冠李戴。例如：。例如：NMET 2003: The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. _NMET 2005: Some students may also save up for our college or future use. _everythingtheir When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be

13、happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well