中考英语作文指导课讲课稿

1、How can we write a good composition(作文作文(zu wn)?中考写作中考写作(xizu)指导课指导课第一页，共50页。)第二页，共50页。 Dear Mr. Know， I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing.

2、And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent W

3、hats more, there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do.meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let aloneSometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone( (更不用更不用说说) )answer the questions about th

4、em. But the most answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please Can you help us? How can we improve our Eng

5、lish? Pleasegive us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon. me soon. Lets go for it! Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正文（正文(zhngwn)）第三页，共50页。) 第四页，共50页。健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的

6、身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次次(c c)(c c)的调查结果。的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告完整的调查报告, ,并提倡并提倡大家进行假日休闲。大家进行假日休闲。审审(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork第五页，共50页。 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日倡议假日(jir)休闲休闲stay at homeworkvi

7、sit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用根据以下关键词及图表用简单简单(jindn)的句子列出文章的要的句子列出文章的要点。点。第六页，共50页。 A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列(list)第七页，共50页。 How do people spend their vacation? We made a su

8、rvey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加加(add) 加首尾，使结构完整。加首尾，使结构完整。 可以

9、采取总分总结构，开头或结尾可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁的句子应注意简洁(jinji)、漂亮。、漂亮。第八页，共50页。 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents

10、. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连连(connect)第九页，共50页。方法方法(fngf)(fngf)一一: :善用高善用高级词汇级词汇第十页，共50页。Which is better? 他们他们(t men)(t men)很早就到了。很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.第十一页，共50页。 我们我们(w men)(w men)应该保护应该保护环境。

11、环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.第十二页，共50页。方法方法(fngf)(fngf)二二: :活用多活用多种句型种句型第十三页，共50页。第十四页，共50页。方法方法(fngf)(fngf)三三: :妙用关妙用关联词联词第十五页，共50页。1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor2.表示选择表示选择: or, eitheror3.表示转折表示

12、转折(zhunzh): but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比表示对比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to

13、 tell the truth8.表示顺序表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end9.表示强调表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示结论表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short第十六页，共50页。 _ I am tired, I keep

14、 on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt last第十七页，共50页。 How do people spend their vacation? We m

15、ade a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连连(connect)美美(bea

16、utify)第十八页，共50页。 We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And t

17、o visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美美(beautify)第十九页，共50页。 According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to sta

18、y at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. Peoplewho relax well work well.美美(beautify) And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.

19、Proverb（谚语（谚语(yny)）/saying第二十页，共50页。集中集中(jzhng)注意力于学习注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(yny)(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。第二十一页，共50页。加入英语俱乐部是学习加入英语俱乐部是学习(xux)英语的好方法英语的好方法Joining the English cl

20、ub is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加谚语加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头可用于开头(ki tu)和结尾，多是结尾。和结尾，多是结尾。第二十二页，共50页。Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans d

21、o. 三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧熟能生巧(sh nng shng qio)(sh nng shng qio)。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。6.Failure is the mother of success.第二十三页，共50页。Enjoy some proverbs 7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn. 第二十四页，共50页。方法四方法

22、四: :妙用谚语妙用谚语(yny)(yny)和例子和例子（多用于（多用于“the body”the body”）第二十五页，共50页。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救(zhngji)地球。地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save w

23、ater and energy.加例子加例子(l zi)第二十六页，共50页。加例子加例子(l zi)在家里在家里(ji l)，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.第二十七页，共50页。Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again!As students, we should start from ourselves. Don

24、t wait. Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today!How amazing! I cant wait!Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!It will be great fun!第二十八页，共50页。 First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing.And then its so di

25、fficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more Whats more, there are so many new words we , there are s

26、o many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. what to do. SometimesSometimes we cant understand the we cant understand the main idea,main idea, let alonelet alone( (更不用说更不用说) )answer the questionsanswer the questions about

27、 them. about them. ButBut the most difficult thing is to write. the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. We often use wrong words and sentences. Lets go for it!1 12 23 34 46 65 5第二十九页，共50页。 Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for

28、you. Yours _, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve you

29、r listening skill. _, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.Your turn to go for it!（试填一填）（试填一填）第三十页，共50页。 Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you. Yours _, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher c

30、arefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have

31、said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenThenYour turn to go for it!（check）1 12 23 3第三十一页，共50页。第三十二页，共50页。 During the winter holidays, It happened a lot of things. One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother. When my friends and me shopping in a shopping mall, we saw

32、a small girl cried in a corner. We asked what happened on her . She said she cuondt found her mother. So we started to helpt she to found her mother. Luckily, we found her mother, they were very happy and we were happy, too. I think it was the most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays be

33、cause I found I also can help others.The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.Check and correct this article.a lot of things happened.helpingIwere shoppingcryinghappened tocouldntfindhelpherfind.Theycould also, so第三十三页，共50页。满分满分(mn fn)作文标准：作文标准：第一档：（第一档：（1720分）分）完全符合题目要求，观点完全符合题目要求，

34、观点(gundin)正确正确, 要点齐要点齐全，立意高。全，立意高。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。卷面书写干净，卷面书写干净， 整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标疏密合适，书写美观。标 点，大小写正确。点，大小写正确。最好能有一两个亮点句。最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）（主从，定从，表从，谚语）第三十四页，共50页。 规范规范(gufn)(gufn)三写：大三写：大 小小 写写, ,拼拼 写写, ,书书 写写第三十五页，

35、共50页。第三十六页，共50页。第三十七页，共50页。 随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀猎杀所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们(w men)(w men)人类的朋友，我人类的朋友，我们们(w men)(w men)有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它有责任去保护他们，而不是

36、伤害或猎杀它们。们。 请根据上述内容写一篇不少于请根据上述内容写一篇不少于8080词的英语短文。词的英语短文。 要求：要求： 1.1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整； 2.2.提示的内容要全部用上。提示的内容要全部用上。Its your turn! (练练笔练练笔(lin b)第三十八页，共50页。 Lets Help Our Friends （ 满分(mn fn)作文赏析） With the increasing population, human needs more places to live in and more food to eat. As a re

37、sult, we change the forests into farmland. I feel pity for the animals. More and more new cities and roads are built on animals habitat. A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur. There used to be lots of animals, but now more and more animals become endangered because

38、 of our crazy and silly behavior. For example, there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now. Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear? Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future? Dont you think animals are our lovely friends? I know your answer is “No”. So its o

39、ur duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them. Dont put it off！Lets try our best to help our friends today!第三十九页，共50页。Thank you! Goodbye! A good passage= 第四十页，共50页。HOMEWORK:书面表达（共书面表达（共20分）分） 根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。的英文

40、文段。注意：注意：1字数字数60一一80。 2所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）都用上。（可适当发挥） 3发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要抄写发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要抄写在答题卡上）在答题卡上） 假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织(zzh)的赴加拿大的赴加拿大“绿色之旅绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。第四十一页，共50页。 name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old,

41、 live in Beijing, favorite subject, biology InterestFree Time ActivitiesFuture JobHopedrawinggo camping, draw pictures of plants, enjoy the singing of brids in nature.biologist, grow upgood friends,do ones best, make the earthDear friends,Im very glad to introduce myself to you. Thats all. Thank you

42、 for listening. 第四十二页，共50页。Dear friends , Im very glad to introduce（介绍（介绍(jisho)） myself to you. My name is Zhang Bin . Im fifteen years old . I live in Beijing . One of my favorite subjects is biology . Im interested in drawing . In my free time , I often go camping（野营）（野营） , draw some pictures of

43、plants , and enjoy the singing of birds in nature . I want to be a biologist（生物学家）（生物学家） when I grow up . I feel lucky to join you . I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make our earth more beautiful and much greener . Thats all . Thank you for listening . 第四十三页，共50页。I like many sports,

44、such as swim, fish and so on. But of all the sports, basketball is my favorite sport.I like basketball best because it can help me keep health. I play basketball with my classmates at school twice a week. I make a lot of good friends when I play basketball. And it bring me a lot of happy. Whats more

45、 ,it can make me to grow not only taller but also strong.I love play basketball. I hope be a basketball player in the future. My favorite sportswimming,fishinghealthybringsstrongerto be/ I will behappinessplayinggrow第四十四页，共50页。 The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im in Grade Nine. Actu

46、ally I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I

47、create a plan for the following days.Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the rest time efficiently. As theres no elevator to success, Ill try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that

48、I can do it! Its your turn! （ 满分作文满分作文(zu wn)赏析）赏析）第四十五页，共50页。Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.1. I climed slowly and was very tried.2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother.Spelling（拼写（拼写(pnxi)）（others)Friday4. I cant forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.I cant forget that day because5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember i