六级写作--现象型+高分作文

1、六级作文六级作文出题内容关于大学生的话题关于大学生的话题常见的社会问题常见的社会问题出题形式六级考试作文的出题方式有：六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等词作文等 五个类型 对立观点型，社会现象型，谚语警句型。图表图画型，应用写作型。时间与字数六级考试作文要求在30分钟内写出一片不少于150词的文章，只不过是比四级多30多个字就行了。有的同学太担心字数以至于在考场上就开始数数。在答在答题卡上平均一行的合理字数为题卡上平均一行的合理字数

2、为8-108-10个单词，六级写个单词，六级写作最合理字数作最合理字数180180左右。左右。3030分钟的合理安排分钟的合理安排 5 5（审题和构思）（审题和构思）+ 20+ 20（正文）（正文）+ 5+ 5（检查）（检查） *不建议打草稿，你没有时间也没有地方* 可以写出一些关键词和大纲来* 最后五分钟要自查硬伤-检查语法错误，连接错误，标点符号等。 重新定义六级作文写六级作文不是像写日记那样把事情表达清楚就好，而是要想尽办法使用比较复杂的词和句子结构去写出一篇符合要求的文章。大纲解读：两大原则书写工整、卷面整洁、语言第一位、结构第二位、内容第三位：语言：基本正确， 无重大语法错误丰富多变

3、（词汇+句型）结构段数：3-4段落结构：总分总主题句：翻译提纲，1句论证：2句小结：1句金玉良言写好第一句话写好第一句话 多用长句，少用短句 结构要清晰 多用衔接性的词组或单词 词汇的使用上多使用复杂词汇，尤其是六级词汇 如有可能，适当加上一两句名言或是谚语，以显示你见识的广博。 文章不要写得太长。 课后可以这样练 每天三十分钟的free writing两三天后的修改找一个比你水平低的人，帮他改作文 作文的修改写完两三天后修改1.语法错误2.合并简单句3.换词评分标准1. 满分为15分（15%/710分106分）。2. 评分标准分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至两份。3

4、. 阅卷人员根据评分标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加或减半分。4. 4. 评分标准评分标准1414分分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。1111分分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。语言错误。8 8分分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有

5、一些是严重字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。错误。5 5分分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。较多的严重语言错误。2 2分分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 注：白卷注：白卷, , 作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词，无法表达思想，则给词，无法表达思想，则给0 0分。分。现象解释现象解释/ /漫画漫画第一段：引入现象（好现象居多）， 补充例子第二段： 分析问题 给

6、出原因第三段：阐述影响 预测趋势问题解决型基本上是提出一个坏的社会现象，让你分析原因或者影响，然后提出对策第一段：引入现象，补充例子第二段：分析原因， 阐述影响第三段：提出对策， 加以解决第一段可借鉴的模板The prevalence ofThe prevalence of _has been a grave has been a grave problem in our society. Almost every day problem in our society. Almost every day newspapers carry articles pertaining to(newsp

7、apers carry articles pertaining to(关关于于)_)_. For example ,_. Although Although measures have been implemented to deal with measures have been implemented to deal with this problem, it still remains a serious threat.this problem, it still remains a serious threat.第二段阐明危害The consequence of _ is obviou

8、s. (_ can no doubt generate/trigger/bring severe consequences if we hear no evil, smell no evil. ) For one thing, _. For another thing, _. Whats more,_(if needed)结尾段1. 提出对策。三个万能措施：呼吁政府、加大惩罚、提高意识、In conclusion, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing phenomenon. T

9、o begin with, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control A. Furthermore, Punishment should be enhanced to give enough warning to _ A. Finally,. we should enhance the awareness of people about Only in this way can we _. With tough With tough laws and an educated public,laws an

10、d an educated public, _ will become a will become a thing of the past.thing of the past.DRUNKEN DRIVING 1 醉酒驾车日益增多 2 醉酒驾车的危害 3 如何减少醉酒驾车 The prevalence ofThe prevalence of drunken driving has has been a grave problem in our society which been a grave problem in our society which arouse public concern

11、. Almost every day arouse public concern. Almost every day newspapers and TV alike carry articles newspapers and TV alike carry articles and news pertaining to accidents of and news pertaining to accidents of drunken drivingdrunken driving. For example ,in Hangzhou, a drunken driver deprived 9 peopl

12、es lives. Although measures have Although measures have been implemented to deal with this been implemented to deal with this problem, it still remains a serious blem, it still remains a serious threat.It is obvious that drunken driving can no doubt generate severe consequences if we hear

13、no evil, smell no evil. For one thing, and the most important, it could easily trigger accidents which often result in the death of people and broken of families, with parents loosing their only child, children loosing their dependable supporters, and lovers loosing their beloved ones. For another t

14、hing, it is also no easy for the driver and his family. The reason is obvious-financial burden , inevitably involved in this phenomenon because economic compensation to the victims is necessary. In conclusion, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing phenomenon. T

15、o begin with, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control drunken driving. Furthermore, Punishment should be enhanced to give enough warning to this phenomenon. Finally,. we , as a citizen who has consciousness, should enhance the awareness of people about the hazards of drunk

16、en driving. Only in this way can we minimize the negative effects of this phenomenon， reduce the frequency and ultimately eliminate this threatening behavior.高分作文高分作文词汇准确多样词汇准确多样句式复杂有力句式复杂有力用词准确多样用词准确多样一、准确性一、准确性比如在图表类作文当中比如在图表类作文当中, , 我们会经常表达我们会经常表达“有很有很大的增长大的增长”， 很多会写成很多会写成-a big increase.-a big i

17、ncrease.不够准确，我们应当写成不够准确，我们应当写成 a sharp increase.a sharp increase.平时多注意收集准确、地道、多样的用词，尤其平时多注意收集准确、地道、多样的用词，尤其注意收集和使用搭配。当然是从阅读中收集。具注意收集和使用搭配。当然是从阅读中收集。具体来说，可以收集以下三种搭配。体来说，可以收集以下三种搭配。形容词形容词+ +名词名词 如如a sharp increasea sharp increase动词动词+ +名词名词 如如make a mistake, commit a crime, make a mistake, commit a cr

18、ime, commit mit suicide.动词动词+ +副词副词 如如expand sharply/dramaticallyexpand sharply/dramatically多样性多样性 A. A. 用同义词替代用同义词替代例例1: A 1: A 对对 B B很重要很重要. . 1 1）A is important to B.A is important to B.2 2）A plays an important rolepart A plays an important rolepart in B. in B.3 3）A is of importance to B.A is of

19、importance to B.4 4）B cannot livedevelopgrowB cannot livedevelopgrow survive without A. survive without A.5 5）A is to B what the foundation is to a skyscraper A is to B what the foundation is to a skyscraper water is to fish.water is to fish.6 6）A is essential/significant/A is essential/significant/

20、 crucial/critical /vital to B. crucial/critical /vital to B.7 7）The importance of A to B can never be The importance of A to B can never be exaggerateddenied ignored.exaggerateddenied ignored. 例例2 2 ，不同国家不同背景的人在不同，不同国家不同背景的人在不同场合有着不同的观点。场合有着不同的观点。 Different people with different personal backgrounds

21、 in different countries have different opinions on different occasions.Different在不同场合的同义词有unlike、dissimilar（不同的，不一样的），distinct、separate（个别的，单独的），various、assorted（各种各样的，多样的）这句话可以改为：Different people with unlike personal backgrounds in various countries have varying opinions on changed occasions.其实表达类似

22、意思还可以写成：Peoples opinion differ/vary/diverge as to 例例3 3：如今，越来越多的人将越来越多：如今，越来越多的人将越来越多的时间花在了看越来越多的电视节目的时间花在了看越来越多的电视节目上上Nowadays，more and more people are spending more and more leisure time watching more and more television programs.建议改第一个more and more为a rising/increasing/growing number of，第二个more an

23、d more 为a liona lions share ofs share of（最大的份额），最后一组more and more 可以改为：a kaleidoscope/a kaleidoscope/ kladskop / of / of (万花筒一般的)。例四、First-year students may encounter discouraging problems when they enter universities on the very first day. For example, first-year students are very likely to get los

24、t as to where first-year students can find cafeterias.these new-comers / these freshmen (同义词) they (代词)使用上义词或代词避免重复使用上义词或代词避免重复上义词就是表示类概念的词，下义词表示属概念，上义词和下义词之间的关系是：下义词属于上义词 The flower blooms inside the greenhouse, but the flower withers when the flower is put outside. 这句话出现了三个flower，可以将第二个flower改为它的上

25、义词plant，第三个改为it.把小词变成大词在所有可能的同义词的词群中挑选出更有难度的词，拔高用词等级词汇高级化范本The development of 21st century has seen a big change in social, cultural and technological fields.The advent of 21st century has witnessed a profound change in social,cultural and technological arenas/ rin /竞技场.例1：He broke the window in his

26、 anger. 他一怒之下砸碎了窗户。He broke the window in his rage/furry表达就更加丰富了例2Your suitcase is rather heavy-what have you got in it? 你的手提箱很沉，里面都放了些什么啊？heavyweightyponderous例3It is a very cold night. 这天晚上很冷。It is a freezing night.It is a icy night.It is a frosty night.最长用的单词例：认为 Think, believe, insist, maintain,

27、 assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue, be convinced, be firmly convinced, be fully convinced优势 ：Advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength重要的：Key, crucial, critical, important, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable, imperative急剧地：Dramatically，drastically，sharply，hugely，enormously，st

28、eeply， substantially，considerably，significantly，markedly，surprisingly， strikingly，radically，remarkably，vastly，noticeably 句型闪光句型闪光被动优先句子复杂（定从，状从）一个强调一个倒装一个虚拟被动优先大家要养成习惯随便写做个主动的句子都要考虑能不能改成被动句 原句：We should take effective measures to stop various forms of pollution.变为Effective measures should be taken t

29、o stop various forms of pollution.汉语中的无主句1）What should one do in a case like this?What should be done in a case like this?句子扩展句子扩展你老用简单句没有错。但是如果一点复杂句都没有那么肯定不会有高分。-Reading makes a full man; Writing makes an -Reading makes a full man; Writing makes an exact man exact man ，阅读造就了一个完备的人，写作造就阅读造就了一个完备的人，写

30、作造就了一个准确的人了一个准确的人。添油加醋法添油加醋法 我毕业于交通大学，写成：I graduated from Jiaotong University这样的句子只是一个SV结构的简单句， 怎么办？I graduated with honors from Jiaotong I graduated with honors from Jiaotong University, one of the most prestigious University, one of the most prestigious universities in China, in 1999, when I unive

31、rsities in China, in 1999, when I became an English teacher.became an English teacher.英语句子写作的基本思路：英语句子写作的基本思路：将中文信息还原为简单朴实的基本结构按英语结构完成英语按照英语修饰习惯进行扩展。拉长主谓宾，加上定状补例：I love you.I, ,love you.I, ,love you .I, , love you .I, with all my heart and soul, which is never going to change until the end of the ti

32、me, love you , whose eyes are filled with love and encouragement , which has supported me all the way here ,truly, Rose.练习一The firm gave Sam a watch.The firm gave Sam a watch.The well-established privately-run American The well-established privately-run American trading firm generously gave Sam, a s

33、ixty-year-trading firm generously gave Sam, a sixty-year-old gray-haired electrician with three sons and a old gray-haired electrician with three sons and a daughter, a gold Swiss watch on his retirement. daughter, a gold Swiss watch on his retirement. 那家声誉卓著的私营美国贸易公司在六十岁的那家声誉卓著的私营美国贸易公司在六十岁的SamSam退

34、休的时候慷慨地将一块金质瑞士手表赠给了这位退休的时候慷慨地将一块金质瑞士手表赠给了这位头发花白、有三个儿子和一个女儿的电工。头发花白、有三个儿子和一个女儿的电工。练习二I learned my English.In Quzhou University, one of the most beautiful universities in China, I learned my English, essential in both modern life and in our jobs. people prefer to live in the big cities. An increasing

35、number of people with a wanting of better education or trying to develop their personal career prefer badly to live in the big cities because they can provide people with better living conditions including job, housing ,medical attention, nursing and educationJEFF WAS SHOCKEDJacken, a man with short

36、 black hair and strong build, teaching Englishone of the most popular languages in the world was deeply shocked by the news that one of his students is going to get married with a black man born in a rich family, with her expecting to immigrate to Africa定从的魅力The girl is a senior student.She is elected as the Campus Beauty in QZU.定从The girl, who is elected as the Campus Beauty in ZUST, is a senior student.She h