四级作文讲评(mobilephones)

1、 2013年12月英语四级作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at l

2、east 120 words but no more than 180 words. With the development of science and technology, mobile phone becomes more and more popular in our life. As the picture shows, people pay close attention to their mobile phones, even if they are walking across the street. And what even more ridiculous is tha

3、t they use crutches like a blind. As is vividly depicted in the picture, modern people can hardly surrive without cell phones in their daily life. Even when they cross the road, they use waling sticks as eyes. Apparently, the picture reveals the fact that we tend to spend an increasingly large amout

4、 of time in using mobile phone whereare we are. With more and more functions, the mobile phone has gained its popularity among people knowing no age. Besides, people are using phones to keep pace with such an updating world. However, we can not deny that the overusing of mobile phones do bring us so

5、me side-effects. Firstly,.Secondly,.Last but not least,. In conclusion,. In the picture, those people who are crossing the street are devoting themselves to their cell phones. Instead of their own eyes, they are using walking sticks to see their ways. With the development of technology in the past f

6、ew years, smart people gained its popularity. However, every coin has two sides With the rapid development of the socience and technology, it cant be denied that our living standard had been improving and the wide use of smart phones is one of the reflections of it. Undoubtedly , mobile phones is pl

7、aying an increasing important role in our daily life. From the picture, we can see many people on the street are looking at their cell phones, while some pedestrians are using walking sticks in order to see. In fact, since cell phone has become more and more popular, more and more people depend on i

8、t especially smart phone. However, overusing cell phones will cause some consequences In conclusion,. Mobile Phone in Peoples LifeFrom the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many people crossing the street. Instead of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and usin

9、g walking sticks to see. It is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones while even ignoring their security. Cell phones are of great benefit to all of us. However, it is mobile-phones advantages that lead some people to overuse or be addicted to them, which tends to exert a negative impact

10、on our life. For example, overusing cell phones will reduce face-to-face communication among people. It seems that most of us enjoy the convenience of contact at the expense of interpersonal relationships. Moreover, entertaining electronic games, magnanimous (海量的）海量的）information and a bewildering va

11、riety of social networking tools in mobile phones have occupied much of our time. Information distribution tools and social networking tools, in particular, have attracted all of our attention, which tempts us to keep our eyes on the screen around the corner of every second. This, has resulted in a

12、phenomenon of “alienation between acquaintances and familiarity between strangers”. Science and technology and modern tools should be served as an “angel” to improve our living standard, rather than a devil to disturb our normal life and communication. Just imagine, live one day without mobile phone

13、, will you be relaxed? Or anxious ?2015.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kids understanding of going to school. You should write at least 12

14、0 words but no more than 180 words. Technology has dramatically changed our world, stretching its legs to all walks of life（各行各业）. As is humorously depicted in the drawing, a boy holding a cell phone in his hand is asking his mother with great surprise. Since his phone can solve all the problems for

15、 him, he argues, is it still necessary to go to school? Funny as it seems, this picture poses us a controversial question: “can technology replace traditional school learning?” For centuries, our Chinese have adhered to the public wisdom: school where education is provided is indispensable in our de

16、velopment. Nevertheless, there is a growing recognition that technology plays an extremely important role in our study, which we can hardly ignored. Nowadays, when children have questions, “baidu”instead of “teacher” will be the first to come to their minds. To my knowledge, school learning should g

17、o hand in hand with technology. While cell phones do help in solving school problems, they cannot have answers to all the questions, such as “how to become a real man”, “how to make real friends”. Schools can shape our personality and allow us to adapt to the real world. Directions: For this part, y

18、ou are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 第一段：描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。 第二段：分析该现象的

19、原因。 第三段：提出措施解决。或得出自己的结论。 This picture vividly describes that the person uses a computer in the whole day even when he falls asleep at night. What the cartoon conveys is the impact of computers on people. New products are being invented every minute of every day, all of which will hold sway over peop

20、le in some respects. However, in all these technologies and products, computers have exerted the most important influence on people. Some people assert that computers have made life more complex and stressful, while some people believe that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Now ma

21、ny of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. For example, if I have some trouble studying, I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. However, Internet can make some problems at the same time. In a w

22、ord, in spite of the fact the computer appears to have made life more complex and stressful, I feel that the advantages are more obvious, which have become an integral part of everyday life. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a b

23、rief description of the picture and comment on parents role in their childrens growth. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words. 第一段：漫画描述，重点是母女之间的对话内容，从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性，家长干涉孩子过多。 第二段：可以分析此现象产生的原因。 第三段：采取措施解决此现象。 How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social

24、phenomenon concerning the independence of the children. Lets take a closer look at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university of her mothers choice with pride. The authors real purpose is not the drawing itself, but to lead us to discover what hides behind the picture. What are the rea