英语作文解决不平等问题

1、英语作文解决不平等问题篇一：英语作文开头结尾1）对立法：先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或 者偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题。1 When asked about., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that .But I think/view a bit differently.当被问及道的话题，大多数人认为，但是我却持有一点反对 意见。2 When it comes to .，some people believe that .Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse

2、is true. There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements, but I tend to the former/latter.一提到.一些人相信.然后另一部分人却不这么认为。这两种 观点都有相对正确的地方，但我更倾向于前者（后者）3 Now, it is commonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat. They claim/ believe/arguethat . But I wonder/doubt whether.现在，普遍的观点认为.他们坚信.但我对

3、此却表示怀疑.2）现象法：弓|出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后评论。1 Recently the rise in the problem/phenomenon of . has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.近来有个现象（问题）不断发生并且已经受到公众广泛关注。2 Recently the issue of the problem/phenomenon of .has been brought into focus/into public attention.最近关于.的现象（问题）已经进入了公众的视线。3 Inflati

4、on/Corruption/Social inequality . is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.通货膨胀（腐败、社会不平等社会问题）已经成为了新的可怕 的真相，使我们不得不持续地面对。3）观点法：开门见山，直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的 看法。1 Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/（be aware） that.现在越来越多的人

5、已经开始意识到.2 Now there is a（n） growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to.越来越多人已经意识到.的必要性3 Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of .现在人们已经不断地密切关注.的重要性4 Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.是时候应该对用一种新的观点（态度）来看待 了4）引用法：先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出文章

6、 要展开论述的观点！1 "Knowledge is power.This is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people.“知识就是力量”这是培根的名言，正被越来越多的人分享。2 "Education is not complete with graduation.This is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opini

7、on.“教育不应该随着毕业而结束。”这是一个著名的美国哲学家的 观点，现在越来越多人分享着他的名言。3 ".We often hear statements/words like those/this.我们经常听到这句名言4 We often hear such traditional complains as this ".&qu ot;.我们经常听到这句古训5）比较法：通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较， 引出文章要讨论的观点。1 For years, .had been viewed as . But people are taking

8、 a fresh look now. With the growing ., people .多年来，普遍认为的观点是.但是现在人们正用一种新的眼光看.随着.的增长，人们还会2 People used to think that . (In the past,.)But people now share this new idea.过去人们认为，但是现在人们有了新的观点。6) 故事法：先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣，引出文章的 主题。少用！1 Once in (a newspaper), I read of/learnt.The phenomenonof . has aroused pub

9、lic concern.曾经在报纸上我读到过这么一段事情这个现象已经引发了强烈的关注。2 I have a friend who . Should he .? Such a dilemma we are often confronted with in our daily life.我有个朋友他.他应该这样吗？此类困难在我们日常生活中一直遇到。3 Once upon a time, there lived a man who . This story may be(unbelievable), but it still has a realistic significance now.从前有个

10、人.这个故事也许是虚构的，但我认为现在很有现实 意义1、结尾万能公式一：结论说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇 大论，到最后终于冒出个"总而言之"之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也 必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了 ！比如下面的例子：Obviously（止匕为过渡短语）,we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.显而易见，我们可以做出以

11、下结论，好的礼仪能够提升他人对自己的礼貌和尊重。更多过渡短语：tosum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that ,Therefore, we can find that 2、结尾万能公式二：建议如果说"结论"是结尾最没用的废话，那么"建议"应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是 却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。Obviously, it is high time that

12、 we took some measures to solve the problem.显然，是时候我们应该采取措施了这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？更多句型：Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should betaken.精彩语句：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to

13、 the conclusion that 把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论？Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论？Hence/Therefore, we ' d better come to the conclusion that 因此,我们最好得出这样的结论 ？There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merit

14、s.毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点.All in all, we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.总之，我们没有？是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决 办法来对付可能出现的新问题.一、段首句1. 关于？?人们有不同的观点。一些人认为？There are different opinions among people as to .Somepeople suggest that.2. 俗话说（

15、常言道）？，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。There is an old saying. It"s the experience of ourforefathers， however， it is correct in many cases even today.3. 现在，？?，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，?；其次，？?。更为糟糕的是？?。Today, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First,Second,. What makes things worse

16、 is that.4. 现在，？?很普遍，许多人喜欢？，因为？，另外（而且）？?。Nowadays， it is common to . Many people like because. Besides，.5. 任何事物都是有两面性，？?也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everything has two sides and is not an exception， it hasboth advantages and disadvantages.6. 关于？?人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）？，在他们看来，？People 's opinions aboutva

17、ry from person to person.Some people say that.To them,.7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题？,这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problemwhich is becoming moreand more serious.8. ?已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将弓发激烈的辩论。has become a hot topic among people ， especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9.

18、 ?在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带 来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/ 成形图可以看出？?。很显然？，但是为什么呢？According to the figure/number/statistics/

19、percentagesin the/chart/bar graph/line/graph ， it can be seen that while.Obviously， ， but why?（二）中间段落句1. 相反，有一些人赞成？，他们相信？，而且，他们认为？。On the contrary， there are some people in favor of.At thesame time， they say.篇二：英语作文一英语作文技巧一一、好的英语作文的具体要求1. 要点全面、表达准确、语句连贯，符合交际要求。2. 能用书写体熟练清楚地书写，格式、连笔、词距、标点正确3. 书写格式、行文

20、及礼貌用语等无严重错误。4. 基本语法和常用句型无严重错误，意思表达清楚。5. 恰当使用复杂结构、新颖词汇和顺畅连接。二、英语作文写作要领1. 第一步是仔细审题。重点注意内容要点，写作对象和交际目 的。2. 要写草稿，实在没时间也要写一个提纲。3. 确定好时态。转述别人观点常用现在时。记叙经常发生的事 用一般现在时，描写过去发生的事用过去时。4. 不出现中文，不用汉语拼音。不生造中国式的英语。要用你 听过的话来说，用你读过的句子来写。5. 第一句很重要，不要轻易下笔。尾句部分容易出错，要留意。6. 为防止遗漏内容要点，可在原题上标出记号。7. 几个必要的连词一定要用，或顺接、或转折、或让步、或

21、比 较。8. 写记叙文，注意六个要素： who, where, when, why, how and the result.9. 议论文，注意论点与论据一致。还要注意是让你写一方观点 还是介绍对立的两种观点。10. 应用文主要是写信或通知，告知活动安排。一般按时间顺序 写比较稳妥。11. 试卷注意部分给出的参考词汇应尽量用上，不要自作主张忽 略不用。12. 词汇的闪光之处即不要重复你在本文中用过的和大家都可能 用的。全是简单句得不了好分。要用新颖的词汇传达最通俗的信 息。13. 采用多变的句式，如被动句式、定语从句，with加复合宾语 以及倒装句等。14. 有时候阅读题中的句型可以稍加改造，抄

22、来用在自己的作文 中。15. 字数一般应稍多于试题的最低要求，但不宜过长，因为言多 有失。16. 写完后要检查复核，重点看动词的使用。最好是写完作文后 先查查别的题型，因为自己刚写完的东西马上检查常常看不出问 题。三、英语作文写作建议1. 经常写随笔，每日三五句。出点错误也没什么。2. 背诵小短文或漂亮句子，多多益善。3. 最好的练习材料就是近几年各地的咼考试题。练习时，先看 题，自己写，写完后看答案，根据答案，修正自己的作文。但注意不要过多修正，要保持自己作文的原貌，每次只改动34个地方即可。4. 初学写作多写记叙文。5. 抄写短文，会使自己摆脱中文式的英文，可练习抄写新概念第二册。6. 多

23、听、多说、多读对写作的提高至关重要。第一章文章开头句型1、 对立法：先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者 偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题.例如1 When asked about.,the vast/overwhelming majority ofpeople say thatBut I think/view a bit differently.当被问及，大多数人认为|说但是我有点不这麽认为。2 When it comes to . , some people bielive that Othersargue/claim that the opposite/reverse is

24、 true . There is probably some truth in botharguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter .)当它涉及一些人相信其他人主张相反的观点。在这些观点里，有可能有一部分是真的，但是我倾向于前者或后者3 Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledged that . They claim/ believe/argue that . But I wonder/doubt whether.现在，大家普遍认为他们主张但是我怀疑是

25、否2、 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后评论.1 Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) . has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.最近，问题(现象)的逐渐严重已经引起广泛的关注。2 Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of .has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)大意同上3 lnflation/

26、Corruption/Socialinequality . is yet another of thenew and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.通货膨胀/腐败/社会不平等是另外一个新的令人感到苦涩的我们不得不学会去面对的一个事实。3、观点法-开门见山，直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题 的看法.1 Never history has the change of . been as evident as . Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of . benn

27、more visible/popular than.2 Nowpeople in growing/significant numbers arebeginnig/coming torealize/accept/(be aware) that.现在，越来越多人开始认为(意识到)3 Now there is a growing awareness/recognation to the necessitytoNow people become increasingly aware/conscious of theimportance of大意同上4 Perhaps it is time to hav

28、e a fresh look at the attitude/idea that也许，是时侯对观点拥有新的认识。4、 引用法-先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出 文章要展开论述的观点！1 "Knowledge is power.such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people .“知识就是力量”这句是培根的名言。这句名言已经被广泛的接受。"Education is not complete with gradulation.Such

29、is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion.“教育不是完成于毕业”这句是美国一位著名的哲学家所说的。越来越多的人接受这句话。2 "How often we hear such statements/words likethoses /this .“”我们经常听到这样的话。In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complainsas this "&

30、;quot;.在我们的日常生活中，我们习惯于听到如此传统得解释“”。3 As the saying goes that""正如某句名言说的“”5、比较法 通过对过去，现在 两种不同的倾向，观点的比较，引出文章要讨论的观点.1 For years, .had been viewed as . But people are taking a freshlook now. With the growing . , people2 People used to think that . (In the past, .) But people nowshare thi

31、s new.人们过去常常认为但是现在人们持这个观点。6、故事法-先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣，引出文章的主题.1 Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt . The phenemenon of . has aroused public concern.这个现象激发人们的公共意识。2 l have a friend who . Should he . ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.如此进退两难的局面是我们日常生活中经常面对的。3 Once upon a t

32、ime , there lived a man who . This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.很久以前，也许这个故事令人难以置信，但它仍有重大的现实意义&问题法-先用讨论或解答的设问，引出自己观点，适用于 有争议性的话题.Should/What? Options of . vary greatly ,some ., others . But in my opinion ,第二章文章中间主体内容句型原因结果分析1、基本原因-分析某事物时，用此句型说明其基本的或者

33、多方 面的原因.1 Why . ? For one thing. For another .为什么？第一第二2 The answer to this problem involes many factors. For one thing.For anotherStill another .这个问题的答案涉及到许多因素。第一第二另外3 A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect ./both individual and social contribute to .许多因素，包括物质上的和精神上的个人原因都能导致2、

34、另一原因 在分析了基本原因之后，再补充一个次要 的或者更重要时用！1 Another important factor is .2 . is also responsible for the change/problem.3 Certainly , the . is not the sole reason for . 当然，不是的唯一因素3、 后果影响 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响.1It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on.2ln involves some serious consequence for第三章

35、文章结尾形式1、结论性 通过对文章前面的讨论，引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点.1 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw theconclusion that .从以上所讨论的，我们确实可以得出的结论。2 In summary/In a word , it is more valuable2、后果性-揭示所讨论的问题若不解决，将产生的严重后果.1We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of . , if allowed to

36、proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of我们必须提出一个紧急方案，因为当前的现象，如果被允许进行，将理所当然的导致的重大代价 花费2Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that . will be put in danger.明显的，如果我们对这个问题视而不见，将有更大的可能被 置于危险之中。3、号召性 呼吁读者行动起来，采取行动或提请注意.1It is time that we urged an immediate end to

37、the undesirabletendency of 是我们促使将不好的趋势结束的时候。2lt is essential that effective measures should be taken to correctthe tendency.有效的措施被用来改变这倾向是必须的。4、 建议性 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见 ，包括建议 和具体的解决问题的方法.1 While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is . Another method is . Still anothe

38、r one is .2 Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step towardthe situation.对这问题的察觉认识是面对这种情况的第一步。5、 方向性的结尾方式-其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解 决提出总的，大体的方向或者指明前景.1 Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide wa

39、y .make some sense: 有意义，讲得通，有道理2 There is no quick method to the issue of ., but . might be helpful/benefical.3 The great challenge today is Thereis much difficulty ,but6、意义性的结尾方式 文章结尾的时候，从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义！ Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might

40、be worth the effort . It will not only benefit .butalso benefit .2 In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly .。篇三：英语作文Attention should be criticized and educated approachRemember that a good teacher once said: "God made mistakes is to the

41、 childre n& #39;s rights,we are faced with is a teen character forming in the will of the minor students, they need tolerance. Tolerance give them correct their mistakes and shortcomings of the force. "Toleranceis not the class teacher of students erroneous thinking, behavior and indiff

42、erence and indulgence, and only to students Gaicu create opportunities for students to avoid the psychological harm caused a way to solve problems and attitudes.In the education process, criticism is also indispensable means, but if undue criticism easily lead to "good intentions stem bad t

43、hing.Criticism must not use insulting language and innuendo language, we must make "sincere, color temperature, gas and, tactful words,to seek truth from facts, master measured and pay attention to ways and means. Criticism is the player between the ideological communicate with each other,

44、help each other, to correct the mistakes of the students and awareness. Therefore, thecriticism should be positive and encouraging.应注意批评教育的方法记住，一个好的老师曾经说过：“上帝犯错误是儿童的权利，“我 们面临的是一个少女的未成年学生会形成，他们需要宽容。宽容 给他们改正他们的错误和缺点的力量。”宽容不是学生的错误思想班主任，行为和冷漠和放纵，只有学生gaicu为学生创造心理伤害 的机会，避免造成的解决问题的方法和态度。在教育过程中，批评也是不可或缺的手段，

45、但如果过分的批评 很容易导致“好心干坏事。”批评不得使用侮辱性的语言和讽刺的 语言，我们必须“真诚，色温，气和，委婉的话，“实事求是，掌握分寸，注意方法和手段。批评之间意识形态的玩家互相交流， 互相帮助，纠正学生的错误和意识。因此，这种批评应该是积极 和令人鼓舞的。表扬与批评今天这么多“人类灵魂的工程师”聚首在这里，探讨一个非常有 意义的问题：表扬与批评，哪个更好？众所周知，表扬和批评， 都是我们教育的重要方式。表扬是一种对学生思想和行为给予肯 定评价，使其优点不断得到巩固和发展的教育方法。批评，则是 一种较严厉、较直接的指正他人不良行为的手段。两者相比较， 我方认为“表扬比批评好！ ”美国著

46、名的心理学家詹姆士说：“人类本质中最殷(yin)切的需求就是渴望被肯定。”这种肯定、鼓励，就是表扬。谁不知，无论成人，还是孩子，没有人不喜欢受到夸奖；而抗拒批评却是人的一 个天性，没有人天生就喜欢受到批评。伟大的马斯洛需要层次理 论认为，人的生理和安全需要得到基本满足之后，就会产生强烈 的自尊需要，即渴望得到别人的肯定和尊重，甚至是赞美和崇拜。古今中外，男女老少概莫能外。作为教育工作者，“教育艺术的本质在于唤醒、激励、鼓舞”。正确的表扬作为一种“性价比”非常高的教育方式，可以对学生的 行为起导向和激励的作用。从行为心理学角度说，表扬这种强化 手段，是使那些符合某种心愿的行为坚持下去的最好方式。

47、古人 云：“数子十过，不如奖子一功”，足见其对表扬的推崇。历史和 实践表明，表扬比批评有着压倒性的优势：第一，正确的表扬符合人的身心发展规律，故而应用极其广泛。如前所述，每个都渴 望得到肯定，每个人都有自尊心，满足人类普遍需求，实现人性深处的渴望,最好的方式就是表扬。尤其是孩子，心智尚不成熟，生性敏感 而脆弱，采用批评，千万要慎之又慎。第二，表扬比批评更有力量。一句真诚的表扬会给人以力量和信 心，催人奋进。从心理角度分析，表扬比批评更容易缩短心理距 离，体现教育平等，创造教育奇迹。20世纪末，中华大地上掀起的那场新课程改革的风暴大家并不陌生。其改革的缘起，就是反思我们原来的教育不够民主，很不平

48、等；过于严厉的规矩、制度 和批评，严重束缚了孩子的个性，限制了学生的发展，几乎毁灭了中华民族的创造性一一至今没有一个本土的诺贝尔奖获得者就 是一个有力的佐证。第三，表扬作为正面教育原则的体现，是我们教育的主要手段，首选方式。虽然，批评在短期内也能使学生 就范，却不一定真触动孩子，令其口服心服，其内驱力会产生逆 反心理，极不利于心智健康和多元智慧的形成。因此，当今教育 部文件中明确提出：“要改变过去过分强调选拔和甄别的功能，忽视改进与激励的功能”“多用采用激励性的语言，客观描述学生的进步、潜能与不足”。中国教育，亟需“多一点表扬，少一些批评”。综上所述，表扬的确比批评好。表扬犹如一盏明灯，它能让

49、迷茫 的心灵看到通往前方的道路；它能使泄气的心灵看到光明的未来。表扬是照在我们头上的灿烂的阳光，它给予人的不仅是温暖，还 有光明和力量。各位同仁，请少一些批评，多来些表扬吧！帮忙翻译成英文Today, so many "engineers of human soulsgather here to discuss a very interesting question: praise and criticism, which better? As we all know, praise and criticism, are an important way of educati

50、on. Recognition is a kind of thinking and behavior of students give a positive evaluation of the advantages to be consolidated and the development of teaching methods. Criticism, it is a more severe correction than the direct means of behavior of others. Compared the two, we believe that "g

51、ood criticism than praise! &qu ot;The well-known American psychologist James said: "The human essence of the most Yin (yin) is the desire to cut the demand to be sure.This certainly encourage that recognition. Who do not know, whether adult or child, no one do not like to be praised; an

52、d resist the criticism is a human nature, no one likes to be criticized on the natural. The great hierarchy of needs theory of Maslow believes that people's physiological and safety needs to be met, you need to have a strong self-esteem, that is eager to get other people 's recogniti

53、on and respect, even praise and worship. All times and in all, men, women and children without exception.As educators, "the essence of art education is to awaken, stimulate and inspire.Correct recognition as a "costof education is very high, the behavior of students can play the ro

54、le of guidance and encouragement. From the perspective of behavioral psychology, said that strengthening the means of recognition is the wish of those who are eligible for the conduct of some of the best way to do so. The ancients said: "the number of sub-10, and son and a prize than reacti

55、ve,reflects its highly commendable. History and practice has shown that praise than criticism has an overwhelming advantage:First, the correct recognition of the physical and mental development in line with the law, they are a wide range of applications. As mentioned above, each eager to be sure tha

56、t everyone has the self-esteem, to meet universal human needs, the realization of the depths of human desire, the best way to pay tribute. Especially children, the mind is not yet mature, sensitive and fragile nature, the use of criticism, but you should never have to care.Secondly, the recognition is more powerful than the criticism. A sincere person will pay tribute to the strength and confidence inspiring. From a psychological point of view, more vulnerable to criticism than praise to shorten the psychological distance of the education equality, the creation of education