2020海淀一模ppt课件

1、2019 海淀一模作文讲解假设你刚刚参加了一次“伦敦游学活动, 请根据以下五幅图的先后顺序, 写一篇英文汇报, 在班内介绍你们游学的过程。留意：1.汇报的开头和结尾已经为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。内容-要点 1到达受到欢迎、接机） 2入住home-stay family、吃饭） 3学习听讲座、了解大学） 4游览Big Ben、London Eye） 5. 送别farewell party、唱歌、跳舞） 内容-要点 1到达受到欢迎、接机） 2入住home-stay family、吃饭） 3学习听讲座、了解大学） 4游览Big Ben、London Eye） 5. 送别farewell par

2、ty、唱歌、跳舞） 结尾：对此次活动的总结。（两句话） 内容细节 1到达受到欢迎、接机） 到达，热烈欢迎，握手，等待，分别去了不同的家庭引出下图） arrived at, were warmly welcomed, shook hands, had been waiting, then we separated to different home-stay families. 入住home-stay family、吃饭） 细节支持： 吃英国美食，谈话聊天，聊天话题，气氛 had delicious and typical foods, had a pleasant talk, food cul

3、ture, cultural difference, 学习听讲座、了解大学） 细节支持： 第二天，上课，听讲座，介绍W College，学习到了什么， attended a class, gave introductions, learned a lot about游览Big Ben、London Eye） 细节支持： 参观了伦敦市各个景点；拍照，导游介绍，买纪念品，了解英国的历史城市文化 visited,through the tour guides introduction, I knew more about which I could not learn from books took

4、 pictures, bought souvenirs, 送别farewell party、唱歌、跳舞） 细节支持 谁举办了这个party，我们party 上表演节目唱歌、跳舞， The school held a farewell party, we gave performance dance and songs 结尾 提高语言技能，加深对英国和英语文化的了解。 improved our speaking skills, got a better understanding of British culture. 主要问题 时态混乱 细节缺失 详略不当 语言质量低 注重平时的积累。没有速成

5、。 On arriving at the Heathrow Airport in London, I received a warm welcome from my home-stay family. The whole family, a couple with their little son, came to greet me in person. That night, they treated (prepared) me a superb dinner. They were curious about what our life is like in Chinese, so I to

6、ld them a lot about China. During my stay in London, the family were very hospitable and got out of their way to help me. We went into schools to learn more about England when I benefited a lot from the teachers lectures. The teacher gave us a vivid and interesting introduction and we learned a lot

7、about W college. Meanwhile, we went sightseeing to Big Ben and London Eye, which were splendid and left me breathless, As the guide was introducing these places of interests, we took photos and some of us bought souvenirs. Soon the trip was ending, and the school in which we learned for these days h

8、eld a farewell party for us. We all participated in and did performances. Some sang a song, others danced to express out appreciation to the English students and teachers. 无结尾12-14分作文 吴雨晴 侯依宁 张嘉言 张卓雅 李畅 何媛 张涵清 刘邵阳 王鸣 崔延 王倩 刘若曦 樊世奇 金程程 10-11分作文 邢君 王晓霜 郭嘉雯 孔钰淇 尹春雨 张天维 胡江川 张英哲 描图： 站着，手拉手 形成一个“心” 型 笑容描图

9、-解图 站着，手拉手 形成一个“心” 型 笑容 团结、协作 共同传递爱心 团结合作带来的喜悦unite and work as one） 爱心传递带来的幸福 (pass their own love to others ) 爱将我们凝结在一起 As the picture vividly showed, there are many people standing together in a shape of heart, hand in hand. The expressions on there faces are delighted and happy. This picture rem

10、inds me of a famous lyrics, “Love makes us together.” In the picture, people love each other and they stand in the shape of heart, which shows great power and courage. In our life, it is love that calls on us to unite. No matter where we are, we should show love and respect to others, as no man is t

11、he whole of himself. Without love, the world would be like a hell. Only when we realize this, can we enjoy a happy life and a bright future.12 From the picture, we can see that a lot of people are holding each others hands and standing in the shape of a heart with bright smiles on their faces. It is

12、 safe to draw the conclusion that these people are happy because they are not alonetheir friends and peers are the rest of them. They can get help from others. When people hold their hands tightly, they can pass their power to each other to overcome any difficulties, esp. when people are faced with

13、disasters. Help is to others what sunshine is to flowers. We can also get help and kindness while we give them away. In a society filled with love and kindness, everyone will live a very happy life. To enlarge the happiness of everyone, give away your love and help others. From the picture, we can s

14、ee that a lot of people are holding each others hands and standing in the shape of a heart with bright smiles on their faces. It is safe to draw the conclusion that these people are happy because they are not alonetheir friends and peers are the rest of them. They can get help from others. When people hold their hands tightly, they can pass their power to each other to overcome any difficulties, esp. when people are faced with disasters. Help is to others what sunshine is to flowers. We can also get help and kindne