高考英语--建议信教学文稿

1、高考英语-建议信 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。如何才能学好中文。 注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。已给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese for my advice no how to learn Chinese

2、 well._ well._ _ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua 参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班； 看电视，报纸，杂志；看电视，报纸，杂志； 学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友；交中国朋友；Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be

3、 able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese wor

4、ds more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li HualStep4.典例典例l（2014.安徽高考）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某安徽高考）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART” 专栏专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑。假设你是该栏目的

5、编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，让正常的学习和生活受到困扰：近日容易发脾气，让正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要内容要点如下：点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说提出建议并说明理由。（参考词汇：明理由。（参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪）脾气，情绪）l注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；使行文连贯；l3. 开头

6、语已为你写出，不计入总词数。开头语已为你写出，不计入总词数。多与人交流；多与人交流； 参加课外活动；参加课外活动；积极面对生活；积极面对生活； lHi Worried, l I am sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The true is that everyone will have such a time when things seem to be going wrong , so there is no need to worry too much about it . The importa

7、nt thing for you is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything that youll regret later . Here are three useful tips:l First , If I were you , I would talk to someone I trust about how I feel . It is a good way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself . Sec

8、ond , join in outdoor sports or play team games with your friends ,which can help you to get rid of anger . Third , you might as well be optimistic about your future. A positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.l I hope you will get out of trouble soon .l Yours,l Jamie 1.

9、 给某人提建议给某人提建议 _ 2. 如下如下 _ 3. 在做某事时遇到困难在做某事时遇到困难 _ 4. 利用利用 _ 5. 向某人征求意见向某人征求意见_ask sb. for advice/turn to sb for advicegive sb. some advice (on)as followshave difficulty/trouble in doing sth.make use of/take advantage of 常用语块 6. 制订计划制订计划 _7. 认为认为有用有用 _8. 参加参加 _9. 听从某人的建议听从某人的建议 _10. 把把考虑在内考虑在内 _take

10、sth. into account/considerationmake a plan/schedulefindhelpful/useful/beneficialtake (an active )part in/participate infollow/take ones advice11. 得到改善得到改善 _12. 有所好转有所好转 _13. 依我看来依我看来 _14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你我已收到你的来信，得知你 _get improvedchange for the betterin my opinion/in my view/from my point of view/ as fa

11、r as Im concernedI have received your letter saying that you 1. 你就你就向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。设性的建议。 2. 我觉得如果能够我觉得如果能够将会很有帮助。将会很有帮助。1. You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.2. I feel that it would be beneficial if 套用句式 3. 我希望这些建议

12、会对你有所帮助。我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。我相信你会考虑我的建议的。5. 如能看到如能看到我会非常开心的。我会非常开心的。3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.5. I would be more than happy to see4. I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.常用套语常用套语A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头

13、常用句式 (照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)I am very glad to hear that you want to I know you have trouble inafter reading your letterI am writing to you for the purpose of I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.You have asked me for some advice with regard to and I will try to make some conductive su

14、ggestions. You have asked me for my advice about/on My suggestions are as follows.I think you can make it if you follow the advice belowB. 表达建议（表达建议（body）1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that3. If I were you, I would4. Why not ?/ How (What) abo

15、ut doing 5. is a good/great idea.6. You may consider doing 7. It would seem/seems to me that you could 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After that,/ In the

16、end,/ Finally, /Meanwhile, /Whats more,/ In addition,/ Besides,/ Furthermore, 1.Since you like it so much ,why not join the cartoon club?2.You might as well tell him the truth. It would be advisable to tell him the truth.3.In my opinion ,it doesnt make any sense to complain about it . I dont think i

17、t any good complaining about it.It would be a nice idea for you to read English every day. It would be beneficial if you could read English every day.5.It would be wise of you to have a face-to-face talk with him. I think it advisable for you to have a face-to -face talk with him.C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句

18、式 I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.5. I feel th

19、at it would be beneficial if you stick to it.In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。条理清楚。要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型 （高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道多样化（较复杂）语言地道连连接接词词lStep6 课堂小结课堂小结 l(1) 说明写信目的，涉及主题；说明写信目的，涉及主题； l(2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。望建议被采纳并期盼回复。 *温馨提示温馨提示*：无：无论哪种体裁我们都要记住一条黄金法则，四个写论哪种体裁我们都要记住一条黄金法则，四个写作步骤（作步骤（1审题，