【最新】广东省级英语下册 写作教程 Unit 7 writing课件 （新版）人教新目标版-（新版）人教新目标级下册英语课件

1、Protect animals (保护动物) 1. 熟悉说明文的结构特点，提高写作微技能。2. 学习读写结合型作文的写作策略。3. 激发热爱大自然的情怀，培养保护动物及环境的意识。Writing guidelines( (写写作方法指作方法指导导) )说明文的写作线索：说明文的写作线索： 说明文是以说明为主要表达方式，介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等特征的文章。它是一种应用性很强的文体，说明的目的是让读者有所知，给读者提供知识，使之了解客观世界，掌握解决问题的方法。 写说明文必须注意事实正确，表达清晰，条理清楚，层次分明，语言简练和用词准确。2.读写结合型的写作

2、 读写相结合类型的写作，阅读部分是为写作任务服务的，阅读的篇章与写作的任务通常有许多的相关性。因此，要学会从以下的途径分析：(1)首先要分析阅读的主题。(2)分析文章的篇章结构，包括整篇文章的中心句/段、 支撑句/段，总结句/段，同时明晰作者使用的写作 方法。(3)分析文本的语言特征，思考有哪些语言可以灵活迁 移至自己的写作中，包括适切的词块、漂亮的句式 等。（ ）.的数量， （ ）一个.的象征， （ ）好运the number of, a symbol of , good luck名词词块名词词块: : Language boxLanguage box（语语言工具箱）言工具箱）be frie

3、ndly to be friendly to take action, take action, keep our world colorful, keep our world colorful, lose their home, lose their home, hunt them for.,hunt them for.,forbid killing animals, forbid killing animals, pass some lows, pass some lows,raise peoples awareness , raise peoples awareness , think

4、of ways to , think of ways to , share a comfortable earth with pandasshare a comfortable earth with pandas动词词块动词词块：Language boxLanguage box（语语言工具箱）言工具箱）（ ）采取行动， （ ）对.友好， （ ）提高人们的认识， （ ）想办法，（ ）禁止杀害动物， （ ）与熊猫共享舒适地球， （ ）通过法律，（ ）失去他们的家园， （ ）保持世界多彩， （ ）为.猎杀他们（ ）处于极大的危险中，（ ）为了（ ）一方面，.另一方面，.，（ ）依我看来in grea

5、t danger, in order to,on the one hand,.on the other hand,.In my opinion介介词词块词词块：（2 2）PatternsPatterns（句型）（句型）As far as I know;As far as I know;Unfortunately,; Unfortunately,; For one thing,for another,.;For one thing,for another,.;In my opinion,.; In my opinion,.; Wd better; Wd better; Whats more,;W

6、hats more,; On the one hand,.on the other hand,. On the one hand,.on the other hand,.2. Extensive languages（拓展性（拓展性语语言）言）(1) A nations moral is great, can from the animal s attitude to see.India Mahatma Gandhi 一个国家的道德是否伟大，可以从其对动物的态度看出。印度圣雄甘地(2) A pair of animal cruelty, also will become the human cr

7、uelty.Thomas, equinox. 一个对动物残忍的人，也会变得对人类残忍。 汤玛斯艾奎纳 (3) No trading, no killing. 没有买卖就没有杀戮。(4) Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。What kind of animals do you like?Task 1 Read and finish the mind map.Wild animals in dangerThe kinds of animals in danger_Tibetan antelopes_ _ _ What do they look like

8、?_ _ _ _Golden monkeysGolden monkeysElephantsWolvesThey are medium-sized animals.Elephants are very big and strong. They are grey and have long trunks and tusks.Wolves are not very big. They have grey fur.They have golden-orange fur.Why are they in danger?Why are they in danger?Because their living

9、areas are used for farming. Also, people hunt them for their tusks7.Because they are killed for their wool.8.Because people are destroying the environment where they live.9.They are losing their living areas because people cut down forests.How many kinds of animals are mentioned in the passage?1. _T

10、ibetan antelopes usually live in groups of about2. _Golden monkeys feed on3. _The biggest animals on land are4. _Why are wolves losing their home?5. _ Task 2: Fill in the information. 4 20fruits and young leaves of bamboos. Elephants Because people cut down forests. .Task 1 审题 动物是人类的朋友，然而有些野生动物的处境却非

11、常危险，请你请以“Animals need your help”为题写一篇文章呼应人类保护野生动物。不少于80词。 提示：1. 介绍一种你喜欢的野生动物（喜欢的原因，它们的处境等 )。2.针对如何保护野生动物提出建议（至少写出两条）。一般现在时一般现在时说明文说明文第一人称第一人称 体裁体裁:_ 人人称称:_ 时态时态:_以以“ “Animals need your help”Animals need your help”为题为题1. 1. 介绍一种你喜欢的野生动物介绍一种你喜欢的野生动物2. 2. 分析他们处境的原因分析他们处境的原因3.3.提出保护野生动物的建议提出保护野生动物的建议beg

12、inningbeginningEndingEndingTask2 Structurize （列一列（列一列 ）BodyBodyTask 3 写写一写写: 写写初稿。_ Task 1: Self-check篇章方面：布局是否完整？逻辑是否合理？要点是否 齐全/丰富？ 句子方面：主谓是否一致？时态、语态是否正确？连 词使用是否正确？句式是否多样？是否用 到好词、好句？ 词语方面：代词的主格、宾格等形式使用是否正确？ 名词单复数是否准确？动词搭配、动词的 形式等是否正确？形容词、副词的使用是 否达意，与修饰的对象是否相符？ 细节方面：单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等是否正确？Task 2: Peer-c

13、heck (同伴互改)注意使用修改字符注意使用修改字符： 优优美句子；漏美句子；漏词词；错处错处：；去掉；去掉；语语法法错错 误误 G ,G ,人人称错误称错误 P P，时态错误时态错误 T T 项目项目标准标准自我评价自我评价 同伴评价同伴评价 教师评价教师评价结构结构（3分）分）段落合理段落合理 （2 分）分）衔接自然衔接自然 (1分分)内容内容（8分）分）介绍你喜欢的野生动物（介绍你喜欢的野生动物（1分）分）分析他们的处境（分析他们的处境（2分）分）保护野生动物的建议（保护野生动物的建议（3分）分）拓展合理拓展合理 (1分分)语言语言（3分）分）词汇丰富词汇丰富 (1分分)句法正确句法正

14、确 ，语言优美，语言优美( 2分分)卷面卷面（1分）分）书写工整（书写工整（ 1分）分）Task 3 参参考范文 Animals need your help I like elephants best. Although they are big and strong, they are friendly to human. As far as I know ,they are very smart and they are symbols of good luck. Unfortunately, they are in great danger now. On the one hand,

15、they are losing their home because of farming, on the other hand, people hunt them for their ivory. The number of them is getting smaller and smaller. In my opinion, it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. Firstly, the government should pass some lows to forbid killing animals.

16、Secondly, we dont buy anything made of the ivory. Because just as Yao Ming said, “No trading, no killing.” Whats more, we should raise peoples awareness to protect animals and our environment. Animals are our friends and part a of our environment. Help animals, help ourselves.全文还巧妙地使用时In my opinion, on the one hand,on the other hand,Whats more等句式和短语。本文结构完整，层次清晰。分段简明扼要地了自己喜欢的动物以本文结构完整，层次清晰。分段简明扼要地了自己喜欢的动物以及喜欢的原