2012届高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评一课件

1、下图叙述了你和父亲散步时所发生的事情。请根据下面6幅图，用英语写一篇题为An Accident的短文。短文必须包括以下内容：1.图中讲述了一个什么故事？2.女孩的言行说明了什么问题？3.你对此事有什么感想？注意：1.对于图中所发生的事情可以适 当发挥想象，增加有关细节， 但必须合理；2.词数：150左右（标题已经给出不计入总词数）。 An Accident 第一部分 描述漫画一、提炼要点第一幅图第一幅图有一天，我和父亲在湖边散步；有一天，我和父亲在湖边散步；一个女孩骑自行车路过（结合后面的图中一个女孩骑自行车路过（结合后面的图中 所反映的内容可以推断女孩骑车的速度很快）。所反映的内容可以推断女

2、孩骑车的速度很快）。第二幅图第二幅图我们要将第二、三两幅图连起来看，才容易提炼要点。根据我们要将第二、三两幅图连起来看，才容易提炼要点。根据第三幅图可以看出是有人掉到湖里了。根据第一幅图可以推第三幅图可以看出是有人掉到湖里了。根据第一幅图可以推测是骑自行车的女孩。结合常识提炼出下列要点：测是骑自行车的女孩。结合常识提炼出下列要点：听到人可怕的尖叫声和有什么掉到水里的声音；听到人可怕的尖叫声和有什么掉到水里的声音；转过头看到女孩在水里挣扎，在喊转过头看到女孩在水里挣扎，在喊“救命啊！救命啊！”。第三幅图第三幅图第四幅图第四幅图我和父亲快步跑过去把女孩拉上岸。我和父亲快步跑过去把女孩拉上岸。第五幅

3、图第五幅图我和父亲把女孩掉湖里自行车也弄上了岸。我和父亲把女孩掉湖里自行车也弄上了岸。第六幅图第六幅图对这幅图我们要展开合理的想象。根据图中对这幅图我们要展开合理的想象。根据图中“我我”头脑头脑中的问号，中的问号，可以推断可以推断“我我”感到非常困惑。感到非常困惑。为什么？结合为什么？结合常识常识“得到了别人的帮助，理应表示感谢得到了别人的帮助，理应表示感谢”。再根据图中。再根据图中“女孩已经骑车离去女孩已经骑车离去”可以推断女孩连声可以推断女孩连声“谢谢谢谢”恐怕都恐怕都没有说没有说。这样推断才能为后面谈谈感想埋下伏笔。这样推断才能为后面谈谈感想埋下伏笔。遣词造句（注意多重表达） One d

4、ay Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake . A girl rode past at a very high speed. We heard a frightened scream. There was a big noise of something dropping into the water. Something dropped into the water, making a big noise.We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake.The girl was cryin

5、g for help. We heard the girl crying for help.Dad and I ran as possible as quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and saved her. We also managed to get her bike which fell into the lake. We were also able to pull her bike out of the

6、 water. The girl rode away even without sayingThanks. I had thought the girl would say Thank you to us before she left, but she said nothing and rode away. I felt quite puzzled at her behavior. I felt quite disappointed at her impoliteness.二、描述漫画 连贯成篇 One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the la

7、ke when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of t

8、he water. We also managed to get her bike. Almost immediately, the girl rode away even without sayingThanks. I felt quite puzzled at her impoliteness. 第二部分 发表感想 围绕女孩的无礼行为自拟感想 对自己：为什么要帮助别人？ 帮助别人是明德，不是图别人的感谢； 对女孩的无礼进行评论 许多年轻人不懂礼貌，这对建设和谐社会非常有害。 自我劝慰 比起帮了别人反成被告的人来说，我们还算幸运。 毕竟我们没有被人冤枉。遣词造句（注意多重表达）Helping

9、 others is the traditional virtue.We dont help others for“Thanks” .We dont help others because they thank us.Many young people dont know how to be polite .Many people dont know what being polite means.It does much harm to the construction of Harmonious Society .It is very harmful to constructing Har

10、monious Society .Compared to the people who offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents, How lucky we were! After all, we were not done wrong to by others. I remembered stories where people offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents. How lucky we were!

11、After all, we escaped being included in such stories. 连贯成篇 As far as Im concerned, helping others is the traditional virtue. We dont help others for“Thanks”, but nowadays, many young people dont know how to be polite, which does much harm to the construction of Harmonious Society. However, compared

12、to the people who offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents, I felt how lucky we were! After all, we were not done wrong to by others. 参考范文一One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scre

13、am, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Without hesitation,Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike. Almost mmediately,the girl rode away even wit

14、hout sayingThanks. I felt quite puzzled at her impoliteness.As far as I am concerned, helping others is the traditional virtue. We dont help others for“Thanks” , but nowadays, many young people dont know how to be polite, which does much harm to the construction of Harmonious Society. However, compa

15、red to the people who offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents, I felt how lucky we were! After all, we were not done wrong to by others. 参考范文二One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened

16、scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike. Almost immediately, the girl rode away even without sayingTh

17、anks. I felt quite disappointed at her behavior.We dont help others forThanks, but nowadays many young people dont know to be polite. What a pity it is for our society and for our civilization! At the same time, I remembered stories where people offered their hand but were later accused of causing t

18、he accidents. How lucky we were! After all, we escaped being included in such stories.同步练习【20122012届届四川省成都石室中学高三月考四川省成都石室中学高三月考】以下四辐图所反映的是你上周六在你家附近的公园里的一条湖里救起了一名落水儿童的经过。请根据图画所反映的内容，写一篇英文周记，叙述事情发生的全过程并简要谈谈你的感受（至少两点）。1.周记的开头已为写好 （ 不计入总词数）；2.词数：150左右。3.参考词汇： pavilion（公园、花园中的）亭子It was sunny last Saturda

19、y. I went to the park near my home to spend my weekend as usual. 参考范文It was sunny last Saturday. I went to the park near my home to spend my weekend as usual. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading in a pavilion near a lake when suddenly I heard someone crying for help. I jumped up to see what was happening and was shocked by the scene. In the dis