16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析

1、WORD整理版分享专四新题型写作自2016年起，专四考试写作部分改革，要求根据所给的题目、 图表或阅读材料等，写一篇 200词左右的作文。出现的新题型命题+ 材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。考生可以采取“简短概述材料一评论一总结”的写作模式。值得注意的是，在 写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。例题1PART VI WRITINGReadcarefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NOLESSTHAN200 WORDS, which you should:1)Summa

2、rize the main message of the excerpt, and then2)Commenon whether students learn more from classes than from other resourcesYou can support yourself with information from the excerpt.Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow

3、 the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.Do students learn more from classes than from other resources?With the advent of the Internet and other telecommunications technologies, there is a vastly growing wealth of resources available from an immense range of media outlets. Students have

4、 the ability to absorb information in a quicker and more efficient way when researching on their own through reading publications or browsing webpages online. As a result, some people argue that students nowlearn more from other resources than from classes.Conducting research with online materials i

5、s an active process, which allows youngsters to focus in greater detail rather than passively listening to a lecture in a large classroom.The Internet and TV are also easily accessible platforms for students in the remote places where teaching resources are not as abundant as those in more developed

6、 regions.However, teachers have the capability ofexplaining the knowledge in a deeper way and not only provide theoretical explanation but also practical experience about life. They have accumulated a large body of intelligence that is profoundly more precise than other sources. Teachers not only fu

7、nction as initiators who impart knowledge but also serve as supervisors or guardians. The conventional role of instructors, in this day and age, has evolved to become evaluators and facilitators, guiding students in their academic and personal efforts.范文1In the information age, the traditionalstuden

8、t-teacher relationship has been affected deeply and people begin to doubt whether students can learn more from classes than from other resources. （介绍 背景） According to the conventional view, teachers are still the primary source from which students obtain professional knowledge, timely class interact

9、ion , and effective supervision from teachers. （总结第一 种观点）On the contrary, nowadays, many people believe that students can learn more from other resources such as Internet and TV since they are more accessible and engage students more actively in research.（总结第二种观点）For me, I am in favor of the first v

10、iew.（表明立场） Teachers play an irreplaceable role in education, whether it ' s in the past or at present, since they not only impart knowledge, but also educate people. （总论据） For one thing , what students learn from their classes is more precise than from other resources which provide an enormous a

11、mount of data needed to be sifted through to determine which information is accurate.（理由一）For another , teachers in school put the shaping of personality in a place as important as the teaching of knowledge, which is hard for students to obtain from other resource.（理由二）In conclusion , the developmen

12、t of cutting-edge technology exert s a big impact on modern education. However, it can never eliminate the need for high-quality professionals in classroom.（重申论点） （213 words）例题2PART VI WRITINGReadcarefully the following excerpt and then write your response in NOLESSTHAN200 WORDSn which you should:1）

13、 Summarizethe main messageof the excerpt, and then2） Comment on whether people should choose to become indoorsyYou can support yourself with information from the excerpt.Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above i

14、nstructions may result in a loss of marks.Should people choose to becomeindoorsy in modern world?In modern times whenwe can buy everything we need on the Internet, and communicate and even work through the Internet, becoming indoorsy men or womens simply a choice of different lifestyle. In the past,

15、 if you want to buy something, you need to go out of your house, go to the store, and spend an hour or two choosing the product you want to buy. But now you can just sit in front of a computer and click your mouse, and the product can be delivered to you. Being indoorsy can save people a lot of time

16、.Being indoorsy can allow people to think and work in a peaceful environment. For example, writers can be quite creative whenthey are alone at home without being interrupted.Some sociologists warn that the indoorsy lifestyle will make people become self-centered and naive. If people stay at homefor

17、a long time, they will have little interpersonal contact with others. They do not know how to have face-to-face communication with others, and they may become shy, uncomfortable, or self-centered when they are involved in real-life communication. This indoorsy lifestyle will have a bad effect on the

18、ir normal interpersonal relationship and their normal work.Indoorsy menor womenspend most of their time sitting in front of a computer, and they seldom attend outdoor activities. Watching the computer screen for a long time will do great harm to their eyes. Also, many indoorsy people do not like to

19、attend sports activities, and in the 10ng run, their health will get worse.范文2 审题思路本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。在具体行文方面，考生应首先简 要概述正方观点：“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。然后概述反方 观点：“宅”有种种弊端。接下来给出自己的观点：现代科技是把双 刃剑，我们要把握好，适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利，但过度依 赖则会对身体有害。最后总结全文，重申观点。Should We Embrace Indoorsy Lifestyle?With the globalization of modern tech

20、nology, especially the world-wide access to Internet service, people ' s lifestyle has been greatly influenced. （介绍 背景）Some enjoy indoorsy lifestyle. They hold that indoorsy lifestyle is time-saving and peaceful. In contrast , those against the idea claim that keep an indoorsy lifestyle will do

21、harm to people both范文范例参考指导（总结材料）psychologically and physically.As far as I am concerned, modern technologyis a double-edged sword. （,/明观；） If we consider it as a useful tool to improve our life, it will certainly bring unprecedented convenience to us. With the assistance of theInternet, one can save his time through working, shopping, or communicating with others at home.（正方理由一）Also, solitude isn ' t always equal to loneliness. Free from outside interruption, one can be creative and keep his