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1、容易用错的词：on the contrary、by doing this、in this way、furthermore、however、on the other hand、while、reach .to、a fluctuation、ratio proportion、describe show、maintain、remain、slightly change逻辑错误（不够university.）：he studied hard, thereby going to Columbia作业讲解：In many countries today, people in cities either live

2、alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?题目变形：many university students today live alone because they think that they are more likely to succeed by doing this. do you agree or disagree?确定 ABC：A A A居住C居住 B 节省时间在学习上 C居住B需要交房租C生活不

3、够的观点：人们独自或在小群体居住，减少大环境下交流，缺乏很好的能力独居或小家庭生活长辈的观念独居或小家庭家都轻松B很少见到长辈C年轻人容易形成不孝敬B家务、一日三餐等方便解决C 节省时间，大改写题目：In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?词伙替换：In many parts of the world

4、, Inhabitants of cities, People in urban areasLive independently, live on their own Family sizes have become smaller Nuclear familiesLive with relatives.改写：Itseemsthatalargerproportionofcity dwellerstodayliveindependentlyand thatthefamilysizehasbeenshrinkingwithfewerpeoplelivingwiththeirrelatives.开头

5、段：It seems that a larger proportion of city dwellers today live independently and that the family size has been shrinking with fewer people living with their relatives. This can bring about some problems, even though people can enjoy privacy and freedom.段落练习：A独居或者生活在三口之家的城市居民B往往在家里有着更加独立的生活空间 ，C他们更，

6、对事业发展更有帮助举例 1： 专注工作和学习，被家庭活动打扰举例 2： 聚会，邀请朋友拓展结果：实现人生的目标，收入更高学生作业：People who live alone or with few relatives get more freedom since they have much self space which can boot the development of the career。For example，they can concentrate on working or studying instead of disturbing by family members.

7、Furthermore，young people can invite friends or let the home become the place where can do social activities。5.56 分举例 1： 专注工作和学习，被家庭活动打扰Solo dwellers or small families may enjoy more autonomy in their daily lives and engage in different activities which can help advance their careers.词伙：Privatespace、

8、enjoy designatedspaceautonomy、careeradvancement、They have space at home designated for working or self-study, without being disturbed by family members.拓展：They have space at home designated for checking works,communicating with clients, writing reports or self-study, without being disturbed by famil

9、y members.TELCCS：taskresponse, Extension；Linkingdevices 构）taskoriented；topicoriented；Consistency；Collocations；syntax（结举例 2： 聚会，邀请朋友Apart from this, they can also invite their colleagues, friends or clients to eat a meal at home or hold a party, which can help form strong working relationships.This w

10、ould be less likely to happen in large families, in which people have to consider the impact of their social life on their relatives.全文：Solo dwellers or small families may enjoy more autonomy in their daily lives and engage in different activities which can help advance theircareers. They have space

11、 at home designated for checking works,communicating with clients, writing reports or self-study, without being disturbed by family members. Apart from this, they can also invite their colleagues, friends or clients to eat a meal at home or hold a party, which can help form strong working relationsh

12、ips. This would be less likely to happen in large families, in which people have to consider the impact of their social life on their relatives.段落练习：独居或者生活在三口之家 B 很多事情要解决 C 对事业有影响举例：不能分担家庭费用举例：一些问题需要处理具体化：分心，花钱学生作业：What is more, people may feel isolated living in a small family unit and the most app

13、ealing reason is that they have little connection with other relatives. For instance, they cannot be well cared when they feel sick. And they cannot be comforted in time when they come across problems. Sometimes they will feel frustrated because of that.6 分提升：However, one drawback is that people wou

14、ld feel isolated as a result of limited contact with their relations. For instance, they cannot be well cared for when they fall sick, and it is also difficult for them to gain emotional support from their family in cases where they come across problems in their working life. The sense of loneliness

15、 or frustration can have a detrimental effect on their health.Another problem associated with solitude is that they communicate less with their family members, which makes them feel isolated. For instance, when they fall sick, they cannot be well cared. And when they come across problems in work and

16、 studies, they are unlikely to receive comfort quickly. This may also affect their attitude towards family life.词伙：Maintain contact with keep in touch with a tight bond withhave a detrimental effect on well-being harmful to their healthcause health problems take a tollpose health risks.举例：On the con

17、trary, living in small family unites means people need to face everything by themselves, which may affect their career. They are not able to share family costs with other family members, since they do not live together. Also, they need to solve problems by themselves. In this situation, they have to

18、 spend a lot of energy and money in their daily lives.拓展：They cannot share living expenses, such as rent, electricity bills and the expenditure on food, with their parents, and it is also true that managing finances can be time-consuming.举例：Another problem is that people have to tackle many problems

19、 on their own, and this can interfere with their performance in the workplace. Another problem is that people can get distracted by some matters in their daily lives, and this can interfere with their performance in the workplace.拓展：Some other issues, including cooking a meal, fixing household equipment and ha