牛津上海版八年级初二下册英语 第17讲-写作指导

1、.教育1对3辅导讲义学员姓名： 学科老师：年 级：八年级 辅导科目：英语授课日期时 间A / B / C / D / E / F段主 题写作指导学习目的1.掌握议论文写作的三要素；2. 纯熟运用写作常用句型；3. 可以灵敏运用连词。教学内容1、 上次课后稳固作业复习； 2、 互动探究conclusion议论文写作之三要素和基此题型【知识梳理1】一、议论文三要素论点，论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段应有主题句topic sentence来确定论点。文章结尾往往重申自己

2、的看法、意见或建议。论证有立论和驳论两种，作者证明自己的论点正确，是立论；反之，证明别人的论点错误，是驳论。二、基此题型【例题精讲】例1.94. Write at least 60 words with the topic “Heavy Haze .以“茫茫雾霾为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。提示：去年12月上旬，申城覆盖在茫茫的雾霾was shrouded in heavy haze中，陷于重度污染severe pollution。人们戴口罩wear masks出行，雾霾天给人们的安康带来危害，给生活和工作带来不便inconvenience。请你谈谈雾霾的成因及可行的解决方

3、法。2019杨浦/黄浦一模Heavy Haze The winter in 2019 impressed people not for its extreme coldness but the heavy haze hanging over 25 provinces. It caused great disturbance to our daily life.Obviously, haze comes from pollution. Many factories let the smoke into the air without any filtering process. Day by d

4、ay, it is no wonder that smoke, dirt, and dust accumulate in the air and finally turn into dense haze. How can we curb haze then? Levying heavy penalty on those irresponsible factories is definitely a must-do. Before the air is once again purified, we should also take some actions to protect ourselv

5、es such as wearing a mask and reducing exposure outdoors. We should all try our best to contribute to a cleaner environment for mutual survival and easier life. 126 words【稳固练习】1. 94. Write at least 60 words about the topic “A good way to _在生活中，在学习技能等各方面，每个人都会有做某件事独特的非常有效的好方法，请以“一个_的好方法为题写一篇不少于60个词的短

6、文，标点符号不占格。2019徐汇一模A good way to shop          19.5分When people say they want to go shopping, they usually think of going to a shopping mall. However, shopping in a mall can be extremely tiring. You must walk on your feet for hours and hours. I think a goo

7、d way to shop is to shop online. With the help of modern technology, we can browse through hundreds and thousands of items without having to leave our home. Shopping online can give you a chance to compare the prices easily. Once you have decided on what you want, all you have to do is click a butto

8、n and your item will arrive at your doorstep within a few days. From my point of view, shopping online is a good way to shop. It is not only a comfortable way to shop, but also a convenient way to shop. 138 wordsBeginningTS _Main BodySupporting Detail1 _; SD2 _Conclusion _【知识梳理2】议论文写作之遣词造句词汇1 同义词法:

9、My school is in the west of the city.My school lies in the west of the school.My school is located in the west of the city.2 反义词法: You can easily remember these words if you use them every day.Youll have no trouble/difficulty remembering these words if you use them every day.3 构词法: The party is very

10、 successful. The party is a great success.The party is of great success.4 同义构造交换法:If the weather is fine, well go hill climbing tomorrow. Weather permitting, well go hill climbing tomorrow.练习：Health is very important to us._We work hard to pass the exam._句子² There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问的The

11、re is no doubt that our educational system is far from satisfaction.There is no doubt that money cant buy everything in our daily life.² An advantage of is that + 句子的优点是An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create/produce any pollution.An advantage of taking exercises is t

12、hat it can make us keep healthy.² The reason why + 句子is that + 句子 的原因是The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.The reason why I prefer music is that it gives me a sense of satisfaction.² The morethe more 愈愈The harder you work, the more progress you ma

13、ke.The more books we read, the more learned we become.Sentence Making_² It is +adj. of/for sb. to do sth.做是怎么样It is wise of you to book the tickets in advance or we may miss the show.It is necessary for us to take actions to protect the water from various pollution.² spare no effort to do

14、=do one's utmost to do = try one's best to do尽全力去We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.We should try our best to achieve our goal in life.We should do our utmost to help others.² have a great influence on 对有很大的影响Smoking has a great influence on our health.Parental educat

15、ion has a great influence on our general development.² It is said that+ 句子 据说It is thought that+ 句子一般认为It is known that + 句子大家都知道It is reported that + 句子据报导It is expected that + 句子一般意料It is estimated that + 句子据估计 It is believed that + 句子一般相信 It's known that Hangzhou is a beautiful city.Its

16、believed that more physical exercises will do good to our health.Sentence Making_段落-关联词² 并列与递进: and, also, as well as, besides, moreover, in addition, whats more, etc.² 转折: but, however, although, though, etc.² 对比: or, while, instead of, on the other hand, on the contrary, etc.²

17、因果: because, as, for, since, so, thus, therefore, as a result, because of, etc.² 总结: in brief, in a (one) word, in general, in short, on the whole, generally speaking, etc.² 顺序: and then, next, after that, firstly, secondly, and finally, lastly, etc.【例题精讲】例1.范文赏析My View on E-booksNowadays&

18、#160;E-books become more and more popular but the attitude towards to E-books differs. As far as I am concerned, e-books are helpful because of the following reasons. Firstly, e-books are very convenient. With the little body size, we can put it in the pocket and go any

19、where with them. In this way, we have much time to read books and enlarge our knowledge. Besides, e-books can combine study and entertainment perfectly. With its various function, we can use it not only for learning but also for fun. Furthermore, e-book can play the rol

20、e of friends. It gives us books to read, it plays games with us, what is more, we can put many things we like into it and so on. To sum up, we can draw a conclusion that e-books are very important for us, especially, our young. 【知识梳理3】议论文写作之复查2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺

21、、连接等PART I. Write a passage of at least 80 words on the topic “A suggestion to my dear school! 以“给学校的一个建议！为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。 2019静安一模注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。Questions for reference only以下问题仅供参考What arent you satisfied with in your school? Your reasons?What is your suggestion?Would yo

22、u give your possible solutions?_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 70_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _91议论文写作的亮点句型（列举5个）：据说: it is said that + 句子愈愈： the +比较级，the+比较级一般相信 ：it is believed that对有很大的影响 : have a gre

23、at influence on做是怎么样 : it is adj. to do的原因是: the reason whyis that议论文写作的好词替换（列举2个）：同义词法：如失败做某事（fail to do = be unable to do）不同词性：成功做某事( be successful in = succeed in) 根底题Choose the best answer 选择最恰当的答案共20分26. Which of the following words matches the sound /feil/?A fill B fall C feel D fail 27. A lot

24、 of people were in _ hospital because of SARS in Beijing in 2019.A) a B an C the D /28. -Have you got everything ready for the concert? - Not yet. We need _four chairs.A) other B another C more D else29. During her stay in England , she got much _ of local customs and cultures.A) article B idea C kn

25、owledge D message30. We will start our journey to Tibet _ the morning of December 15.A) in B by C on D at31. The naughty boy broke the window and his mother was rather angry _ him.A) about B at C with D for 32. The beef tastes_ the pork. Please make yourself at home.A) as better as B much better tha

26、n C the best than D as well as33. Dont you see that warning sign? You _ ride a bicycle in our school.A mustnt B may not C neednt D shouldnt34. A:_ do you go swimming in summer?B: Once a week.A) How far B How often C How much D How long35. Start right now,_ we will be late for the lecture.A) so B or

27、C and D but 36. Many people still want to go to the 2019 Car Exhibition _ it is crowded every day.A) because B unless C if D but37. By the end of last month, the students _ all the subjects they learned.A) have reviewed B had reviewed C if D although38. Jenny will stay with a Canadian family when sh

28、e _ for a further study.A) goes B will go C went D has gone39. For most of the Grade Nine students ,the most important thing now is _ hard for the exam.A) work B to work C working D works40. Mrs. Gaines _ in that housing estate for a long time when she taught in Shanghai.A) is living B had lived C l

29、ived D has lived 41. Emotional support _ for people with health problems in this area recently.A) is provided B was provided C has been provided D will be provided 42. Dont allow other thoughts _ your mind when trying to memorize something.A) enter B to enter C entering D entered43. There is little

30、time left for us to work out a solution, _?A) isnt it B isnt there C is it D is there 44. A: Im going to Sanya for a holiday with my parents after the entrance examination. B:_A) Well done B I hope so. C Enjoy your time D The same to you 45. - Would you like me to bring you a cup of coffee? -_.A) Ye

31、s, Id like to. B Its a pleasure. C It doesnt matter. D Yes ,please Complete the sentence with the given words in their proper forms 用括号中所给单词的适当形式完成以下句子。每空格限填一词 共8分54. The police caught two_ when they were stealing on the bus. thief55. The _boy from the left in the photo comes from Britain. four56. T

32、ony and his twin brother are only five years old, but they can take care of _. they57. It is parents _ to protect their children from danger. responsible58. We overcome the difficulty and _ drove back to the city center. successful59. The internet _ people to keep in touch with their friends and rel

33、atives easily. able60. Though the film star has been _ for over ten years , people still remember him. die61. Mary has to do all the housework and she feels it is _. Complete the following sentences as required 根据所给要求，改写以下句子。62. The boy eats many vegetables every day to keep healthy . 改为一般疑问句_ the b

34、oy _ many vegetables every day to keep healthy?63. Mr. Smith will come to teach in our school in three months. 对划线部分提问_ _ will Mr. Smith come to teach in our school?64. I hope you will look after yourself during your stay in Hong Kong. 保持句意不变I hope you will_ _ yourself during your stay in Hong Kong.

35、65. People in the neighborhood will hold a meeting in the community center next Sunday.改为被动语态A meeting will _ _ in the community center next Sunday.66. The doctors spent ten hours operating on the patient and saved his life. 保持句意不变It _ the doctors ten hours to _on the patient and saved his life.67.

36、“ Do you agree with me? Amy asked her friends. 改为宾语从句Amy asked her friends _ they _ with her.68. is ,not, get a job, easy, nowadays, to, in London ,it ,for , a graduateRead he passage and fill in the banks with proper words.Molly Boylan is one of the most successful business women in Canada after se

37、tting up her cosmetic 化装品 company Blazes in 1992. Though she is very successful, she says that she finds it harder every year in b_67_ her business with her family life. She sometimes feels that her two children know more about their baby-sitter than they do about her.Molly employs 雇佣 around eighty

38、people in her factory and warehouse, and ten others in her two new fashion stores, but her newest employee is the most important  one for her. After years of worrying about her business more than her family, she has decided to make Sally Pamonte new general manager in her company. Molly will s_

39、68_ be involved in decision- making, and shes going to stay in touch with the people who work for her, but Sally is going to look after day-to-day r_69_ of the business so that Molly can spend more time with the kids.The new arrangement 安排 is going to start on Monday, and both of them are already ex

40、cited about it. Sally says, “Im very nervous, a_70_ but Im sure Molly will help me a lot in the early days, even though I hope she feels she can trust me not to make too many mistakes.Molly, on the other hand, seems quite relaxed about the whole thing. I know that Sallys going to be a very nice mana

41、ger. she says, “Shes only been here a couple of days and shes already s_71_ me how to work out a few problems we were having. The best thing though is that I feel a hundred t_72_ happier than Ive been in years. I mean, I honestly cant remember the last time I felt as relaxed as this, and my kids are

42、 really excited about my being at home m_73_. To be honest, I wish I had made this decision years ago.IV. Writing 作文 Write an article of at least 80 words about the topic “_ makes me happy以“_让我快乐为题写一篇不少于80个词的短文，标点符号不占格。Use the following points as a reference.1. What/Who makes you happy?2. Why do you

43、 think so? List at least two reasons_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _60字_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Getting on well with friends". 以“与朋友处好关系为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否那么不予评分。短文需包含以下要点：1. Do you have good friends?2. Do you sometimes have problems with them?3. How do you deal with the problems?2019学年 长宁一模_ _ _ _