2020-2021年英语中考英语书面表达及答案

1、2020-2021年英语中考英语书面表达及答案一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1 .假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给 David写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及 你自己本人的计划及原因。比例计划原因50%去国内外旅游1.放松;2.欣赏美景30%多读一些书1.增长知识；2.培养兴趣20%参加社会实践1.锻炼自己；2.结识朋友你的计划?（至少一个）?（请你补充）汪思：（1）邮件应包含所有要点（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分注： 社会实

2、践 social practice activitiesDear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the

3、students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social pra

4、ctice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 how to do, spend a meaningf

5、ul summer vacation , half of, plan to do , travel at home and abroad , enjoy the beautiful scenery , take part in , social practice activities , make new friends 等。而斗£谓语动 词结构 The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart

6、and develop interests.和宾语从句 They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。 在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻 辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。2.书面表达在本周班会课上，同

7、学们对 初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after school at 5 o ' clock at 4:45 at 5 o ' clock .exercise to keep healthy and read books do what we want, such as listening to music take a part-time job.注意：(1)短文必须包括

8、表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：80-100;(4)短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。This week we haveThis week we have held a短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.【答案】"What time should junior high school students

9、leave school? class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, becau

10、se they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock

11、. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】 【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如 hold a class meeting , talk about, the result of , keep healthy, after school , have more time to do , want to do , such as, listen to music , in favor of, clean the room , play tennis 等。而

12、复杂并歹U结构They canexercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school. 和 Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening

13、to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时 Most students think/Some think /A few thnk述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总 结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有 条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。3.世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少

14、年近视率居世界第一。2019年全国两会当中 小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近 视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack,请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。我校学生的近视问题调查情况60%的本校学生戴眼镜。原因1 .不良的看书习惯，如在床上或阳光下看书2 .长时间玩手机、看电视、玩电脑3 .学习时间长，作业多建议1 .认真做眼保健操2 .多吃胡萝卜等对眼睛有益的食物3.参考词汇： 近视nearsighted注意：1.内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；2 .文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；3 .词

15、数：80-100,开头已经给出，不计入总词数。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest inChina.【答案】 According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for

16、us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight ? First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don&#

17、39;t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight fro

18、m becoming nearsighted.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举 了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文 中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用 我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配 及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具 有条理性。【高分句型一】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以

19、保持良好的视力对每个人都很重 要。本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot.当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。when you read 是由 when 引导的时间状语从句。4 （题文） 书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1.定时做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打 120 ）假

20、如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数80 词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时emergency 紧急情况ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d likme ytonienwtroindvuecnetion to all of you.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our

21、 robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do somewashing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What s mo

22、re, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习

23、作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing ， I d like to d，ointroduce sb. to ， all of you ， at home ， do some washing ，at a fixed time ， have a chat ， play chess， do exercise ， deal with ， a great help ， in the future等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainl

24、y to help theelderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots. 等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5 假如你是李华 ,

25、 你的美国笔友Bill 给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China. Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?What is

26、 your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求：1.参考提示语，可适当发挥；2 .语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3 .文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4 .词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。Dea

27、r Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job.Yours, Li Hua【答案】 例文 Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and he

28、lpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making f

29、or your dream?Tell me about your ideal job! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向 Bill 提出问 题，结束全文。【点睛】本文首先开篇功能句 Thank you for your letter. 然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如 because， Besides， To realize my dream, 等使文章

30、连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上 口，不失为一篇佳作。6 “ inspire 一词的汉语解释是” “激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以 “ Theperson who inspired me 为题写一篇不少于 ”80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she ？2. How did he/ she inspire you ？要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。【答案】 The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep i

31、mpressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I

32、 need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such

33、as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们以 The person who inspired me 为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题

34、目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时

35、语句之间使用恰当的连接成 分使文意连贯、自然。 【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如 But the person

36、 who inspired me most,I think, is my friend Wang Peng. 、 Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. 、 He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. 、 If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. 、 He also does well in many spo

37、rts, such as badminton and ping-pang. 、 He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is. 等等。7 书面表达初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以 “ Less Pressure Makes Life Better 为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求 ”写一份发言稿，内容包括：1 .普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试2 . 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习3 .我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校

38、名；2. 词数80 左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today s world. Most students in our class are under too muchpressure. 【答案】 Hello, my classmates!Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too mu

39、ch pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.I had a talk with my paren

40、ts and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以 Less Pressure Makes Life Better 为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要包括以

41、下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目

42、要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如 Some students can't get on well withtheir classmates, while others may worry about their exams

43、too much. 、 My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class 、 In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies 等等。8 书面表达假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徽一游，请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。1 位置 : 中国东部 , 安做省南部:2 .气候 :春暖花开 ,秋季凉爽3 .景点 : 山和古村落:4 .文化 :茶、黄梅戏5 .建议

44、提示词 :黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera注意 :1.词数 80-1002 .可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。3 .文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名4 .开头和结展己给出 ,不计入总词数 Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? 【答案】 Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese

45、 culture and I m glad you are planning a trip to China. Whynot come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come he re is in autumn, because it sreally cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For exa

46、mple, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What s more,and watch Huangmei Oper

47、a. It s easy to understand and won t let you down!Welcome to Anhui! I m lofokrwinagrd to seeing you here! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】 这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave 写信，邀请他来你的家乡 安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位 置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应 使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并 注意上下文的连贯。

48、另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思 维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌 握，不容易出错。但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些 复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。 【点睛】 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内 容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分 明。第二

49、，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合 英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。 句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的 句型，如 The best time to come here is in autumn, because it s really cool and you can just takesome light coats 、 Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun

50、and so on. 、 What s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It s easy to understand and won t let youdown!、I ' m looking forward to seeing you here等。9 .请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋 友 Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some q

51、uestionsQuarrel (争吵)with her classmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play computer games for more than an hour要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。3、词数不少于60个英语单词。4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。【答案】 One possible version Dear Mary,I ' m v

52、ery glad to introduce介绍) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time ) . After supper she helps her parents with hou

53、sework. (She is really a good girl. ) But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn ' t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. (This makes her parents unhappy. ) I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do