高中英语写作课研讨ppt课件

1、高中英语写作课研讨高中英语写作课研讨 .课标对高中英语“言语技艺的要求l在交际中得体地运用英语的才干；l用英语获取和处置信息的才干；l用英语分析问题和处理问题的才干以及批判性思想才干。.1.1.课标六级对课标六级对“写的描画写的描画l能用恰当的格式写便条和简单的信函；l能简单地描画人或事物，并简单地表达本人的意见；l能用恰当的言语书写问候卡；l能给朋友、笔友写信，交流信息和情感；l能对所写内容进展修正。.1.1.课标七级对课标七级对“写的描画写的描画l能用文字及图表提供信息并进展简单描画；l能写出常见体裁的运用文，例如：信函和普通通知等；l能描画义务或事件，并进展简单的评论；l能填写有关个人情

2、况的表格，例如：恳求表等；l能以小组方式根据课文改编短剧。.1.1.课标八级对课标八级对“写的描画写的描画l能根据所读文章进展转述或写摘要；l能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；l能写出语意衔接且构造完好的短文，表达事情或表达观念和态度；l能在写作中做到文体规范、语句照射。.2.2.高考高考 “ “写写 的考点的考点考生应能：根据不同文体，运用恰当的言语方式完成书面交际义务；运用恰当的句式、词汇和语法表达、描画、表达观念和态度；做到文章扣题、内容充实、构造完好、逻辑性强、语意衔接。.3.3.当前写作课现状当前写作课现状l大多数学校没有安排系统的英语写作课；l在教学中时有写的义务但没有就书

3、面表达才干的详细指点和明确目的要求；l随意性强，不系统，跟进练习不够；l写作教学中只注重结果，不注重学生的写作过程和修正正程；l不少教师以为教材提供的“写的义务太难，超出本校学生的才干实施有困难；l平常根本没有训练，高三再说。.必修1： 必修2：A personal letter An Internet pageA story A concert reviewDescribing an event Describing your dream house必修3： 必修4： A report An advertisement for a gadgetA brochure A formal lett

4、er to a newspaperA report An informal letter北师大版教材中写作教学内容北师大版教材中写作教学内容.必修5：选修6：Describing a person Events in my lifeA letter of applicationA personal anecdoteA personal essayA film review选修7：选修8：A formal letterA reportAn article A letter of complaintA discursive essay A discursive essay北师大版教材北师大版教材.

5、5.过程式写作教学的根本思绪l阅读范文；l了解文章构造；l了解该文体的言语特征；l提供言语支持；l讨论、构思；l写作；l评价。.6.课例1.A personal letter Unit 1 2.A story Unit 2.6. 几点建议高一、高二l过程式写作教学的根本思绪；l以写作为目的的阅读要目的、过程明确，重点突出；l以教材为根本根据，根据学情调整难度读、写内容；l学生根底较差的学校应从根本句型练起；l教材以外的写作义务要留意跟进练习；l写作才干的根本和源头是阅读。.6. 几点建议(高三复习l学生应该明确考试要求和规范；l关注写作过程和修正正程；l在实际中体验各种句子构造的内在关系，提高

6、写作技巧，到达运用自若。. 书面表达写作书面表达写作技巧技巧.第五档21分25分完全完成了完全完成了试题规定的试题规定的义务。义务。覆盖了一切内容要点；运用了较多的语法构造和词汇 语法或用词方面有个别错误，但为尽能够表达丰富的内容所致；表达了较强的言语运用才干；有效地运用有效地运用了语句间的了语句间的衔接成分，衔接成分，所写内容衔所写内容衔接、构造紧接、构造紧凑凑 完全到达 了预期的 写作目的第四档16分20分完成了试题规定的义务虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖一切主要内容 运用的语法和词汇能满足义务要求 语法构造或词汇方面运用根本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法构造或词汇所致 运用了简单的语句

7、间衔接成分，使全文构造紧凑 到达了预期的写作目的高考书面表达评分规范高考书面表达评分规范.1 准确审题： 义务、人称、时态写前.情景作文： 国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参与的“和平、友谊夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设他是王姗，请根据以下信息写一篇个人简介。留意：1、词数不少于60。 2、可根据内容要点适当添加细节，以使行文衔接。. Hi everyone, my name is Wang Shan. Im a 16- year old girl and now Im studying in Sunshine Middle School. Im a girl with lo

8、ts of hobbies. I enjoy listening to music after class. And I like taking photos, as I love the beauty of the nature. As for my personalities, I think Im quite out-going and Im always willing to help others when they have some problems. Im good at communicating with others. Im also a peace lover beca

9、use I think wars just bring sufferings and sadness to people. Entering this summer camp, I want to make friends with you and learn about foreign cultures. I hope we could become good friends and have a good time . 义务.1 准确审题： 义务、人称、时态2 构思：3 整理内容要点，写作时做到心中有数，思绪清楚，内容充实而又有重点。.情景作文： 国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参与的

10、“和平、友谊夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设他是王姗，请根据以下信息写一篇个人简介。留意：1、词数不少于60。 2、可根据内容要点适当添加细节，以使行文衔接。 (请将情景作文写在答题卡II指定区域内).内容要点： 1个人根本信息 王珊、女、16岁、北京阳光中学 2喜好、性格、态度 喜好音乐、摄影； 擅长与人交流，乐于助人； 热爱自然，热爱和平 3参与夏令营的目的 结交朋友，了解外国文化.Im Wangshan. Im a girl. Im at age of 16. Im in Yangguang Middle School. Im very glad to attend the

11、Summer Camp. I like music and natural. Im good at talking with other people. During the Camp, I want to make a lot of friends, and I want to learn more about other countrys culture. So I really want to take part in the camp.写作技巧写作技巧.一、词汇的多样性运用了较多的语法构造和词汇；有效地运用了语句间的衔接成分，所写内容衔接、构造紧凑.challengedshoutedi

12、nterruptedwhisperedrepliedaskedsaid.vastmassivegreatlargeenormousbig.由于 his help, I finished the task at last.由于Because of/For/WithThanks toOwing toAs a result of.*结合本身情况，学会用不同的从句和短语表达同样的语义我会尽我所能协助他I will try my best to help him.I will do everything I can to help him.I will do whatever I can to help

13、 him.I will do all that I can to help him.二、句子衔接技巧运用了较多的语法构造和词汇；有效地运用了语句间的衔接成分，所写内容衔接、构造紧凑. 从句从句 非谓语动词非谓语动词 主主+ +谓主句谓主句 介词介词 名词名词 描画词描画词 .The house has been turned into apartments.I was born in the house.You will have a room in my house. The room is very comfortable. In this room, you will find many

14、 things which are quite necessary for daily life.从句.You will have a comfortable room in my house, where all the necessary things for daily life are provided.You will have a comfortable room in my house, where you can find all the necessary things for daily life.Yesterday I bought a pen which is red.

15、 He met a man who is his father.Use clauses when necessary.The cat crept slowly through the grass.The cat was watching the mouse the whole time.The gold was hidden under the ground.It was safe for many years.非谓语非谓语.Watching the mouse the whole time, the cat crept slowly through the grass. Hidden und

16、er the ground the gold was safe for many years.Not raining for a long time, the land was very dry. (逻辑逻辑After finished the lecture, we held a discussion. (谓语、非谓语混淆谓语、非谓语混淆Warning: Use ing, -ed correctly.Sending the leaflets, we stood at the gate of the community.(主次颠倒主次颠倒.The fire is burning, so I f

17、eel warm.I lost my bike, so I had to walk home.With the fire burning, I feel warm.With my bike lost, I had to walk home.介词短语介词短语.Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room is waiting for you. Inside, there is a separate bathroom and all necessary furniture.Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room with

18、 a separate bathroom and all necessary furniture is waiting for you. 1个人根本信息 王珊、女、16岁、北京阳光中学 Im Wangshan. Im a girl. Im at age of 16. Im in Yangguang Middle School.Im Wang Shan, a 16-year-old girl student from Yang Guang middle school. .三、行文逻辑运用了较多的语法构造和词汇；有效地运用了语句间的衔接成分，所写内容衔接、构造紧凑.1.时间，空间的顺序Firstl

19、ast, after that, then, from, later, ago2. 衔接词.but, however, neverthelessand, also, in addition, moreoverso, therefore, thus, consequently.1. It is not easy to pronounce like a native speaker if learning begins in adulthood.However, . Consequently, .a. most adult learners have a foreign accent when s

20、peaking the language.b. it is certainly possible for young children to reach this standard.ba.2. People do not usually find it easy to learn to write in a foreign language.In contrast, . Nevertheless, .a. they can normally learn to write well if enough time and effort are given.b. writing in their f

21、irst language may present them with no problems at all.ba.四、文章的加工.I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. There I found four chairs. They were in good shape. They were reasonably priced.Can you make it better?.I followed your advice and went to the supermarket. There I found four reasonab

22、ly-priced chairs in good shape.I followed your advice and went to the supermarket, where I found four reasonably-priced chairs which were in good shape.Following your advice, I went to the supermarket where I found four reasonably priced chairs in good shape.well-connected.My writings include a nove

23、l, which was published and which is about a mystery, and a number of poems that were left in the desk that belongs to my brother Tom and that have not been published.Can you make it better?.My writings include a published mystery novel and a number of unpublished poems that were left in my brother T

24、oms desk.clear& economical.I walked through the city for days, but I couldnt find any place to rent, and then I found this apartment, and it is large, so I feel comfortable.Can you make it better?.After walking through the city unsuccessfully for days, I rented this large and comfortable apartme

25、nt.tight I walked through the city for days, but I couldnt find any place to rent. Finally, I found this large and comfortable apartment.A good paragraph should be: economical:cleartight: graceful:Use fewest words to say the most;Dont use masses of “ands, “buts, “ors, etc. Be pleasant to read. well-

26、connected.Im Wangshan. Im a girl. Im at age of 16. Im in Yangguang Middle School. Im very glad to attend the Summer Camp. I like music and natural. Im good at talking with other people. During the Camp, I want to make a lot of friends, and I want to learn more about other countrys culture. So I real

27、ly want to take part in the camp. Im Wang Shan, a 16-year-old girl student from Sunshine Middle School. I have a great variety of interests, ranging from sports to music and photography, among which you can certainly find something in common. My friends say Im easy-going and warm-hearted-always ready to help whoever is in trouble. Whats more, Im strongly for the spirit of this sum