山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错 写作（66）

1、山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（66）短文改错假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Sir or Madam,I'm written to make the complaint about the poor qu

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