河北省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错 书面表达（12）

1、河北省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（12）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday，and i

2、t has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school Early on the morning，we set outLi Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack，but in my there was a flashlight，a map，a knife，a first-aid kit，some match，candles，food，and clothing On the way to the campsite，we climbed a

3、hill，and then we swim across a river，pushed the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river As we got into a forest，we missed our wayLucky，we found the right direction with the compassBy the time we reached to the campsite，it was already darkLi Ming then put up the tent，and I made a

4、 fire and started cookingThen two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems It was quite an experience for me, which Ill never forget for the rest of my life. 书面表达假如你叫李华，是某市所中学的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，信须包括以下要点。问题建议 学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街

5、，高峰期交通繁忙；加之小孩小，家长接送，交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险等。政府应采取措施，如修天桥；社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育等。 要求：1信要包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译。2可适当发挥，词数100左右。3信的格式和开头已给出。参考词汇：小学 primary school；穿行 thread ones way；天桥 overpassDear Mayor,I am a student of No. 7 Middle School, 短文改错：Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday，and it

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8、掉darkLi Ming then put up the tent，and I made a fire and started cookingThentwo theof us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems It was quite an experience for me, which Ill never forget for the rest of my life. 作文：One possible version

9、:Dear Mayor,I am a student of No. 7 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.Beside my school is a primary school. The gates of the two schools both face the main road. In rush hours, there are many cars, buses and bikes. The students have to cross the road to school. Crowds of people often

10、thread their way through the moving cars and buses. Whats worse, some pupils are too young to go to school by themselves, so many parents have to go along with them to make sure that their children are safe, which makes the street more crowded.I think the government should do something about this. Maybe an overpass can be built over the road.