河北省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+书面表达（3）

1、河北省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（3）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。 增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。The world is not only hungry, but also thirst. This may sounds strange, since nearly seventy percent of the earth

2、s surface is covered with water. But about ninety percent of this is sea water. Man and most of the animals can only drink and use the remained ten percent of water - fresh water. The need for water is increased day by day. Only when steps are taken to deal with this problem immediate can we avoid a

3、 severe worldwide water shortage later on. One of the first steps are to develop ways to reuse them. Experiments have already carried out in this field. The used water has been pumped to a water purifying plant that it can be separated from waste matters and treated with chemicals so that it can be

4、reused again.书面表达留意一下我们的周边，可以发现陪读现象已然成风。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应包括：1 简要描述陪读现象； 2分析父母陪读的原因（2至3个）； 3发表你对此的看法。 注意：词数100120词。改错：1.thirst-thirsty 2.sounds-sound 3.remained-remaining 4.increased-increasing 5.immediate-immediately 6.are-is 7.them-it 8.already carried 中间加入been 9.that-where 10.again去掉书面表达Should Our

5、 Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School?In recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.These parents are willing to leave their hometown, even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus. Most of them rent an apartment

6、nearby so as to take good care of their children. Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids. Meanwhile, it can allow them to keep track of the kids academic performance.Nevertheless, what theyve ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent. Thus, they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future.Trust leads to independence. So it seems to me that parents sho