福建省2012届高考英语二轮总复习 专题6 第4讲 (半)开放类学案

1、第4讲 (半)开放类 (半)开放作文是一种比传统的“书面表达”限制更少，留给考生自由发挥空间更多的书面表达题型。这样的考试模式注重突出语言的应用、突出在语境中对学生语言能力的考查。与传统的“书面表达”相比，这种“开放作文”对学生构思、表达、写作以及语句的组织应用能力有了更高的要求。它要求考生在写开放作文时，要注意审题，尽可能做到内容充实、逻辑清晰、表达得体、语言准确。这样的考试模式能让考生发挥出自己的特长，有利于高校选拔优秀学生。对于(半)开放作文，同学们写作时要注意以下事项：1. 认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时态；2. 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应；3. 注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读

2、者意识；4. 要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑；5. 要有主次之分，详略得当；6. 要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑；7. 要做到思想健康，积极向上。一、提供建议型 I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to 书信主题. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to第一件应该做的事情， as you'll be able to 手段. Then, it also helps to第二件应该做的事情. Besides, it should be

3、a good idea to第三件应该做的事情. You can also第四件要做的事情. 这样做的好处 Best wishes.二、释疑解惑型 As a 作者身份， I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers/students. However, 作者的基本看法或观点. Here are a few suggestions. First, 第一个建议. 这样做的理由 Second, 第二个建议. 这样做的理由 Hope you get better soon an

4、d make great progress. 三、主题演讲型 Ladies and gentlemen， Today I will talk about 演讲主题. As you know, there are many advantages of 演讲主题 First of all, 分要点一. 展开一句或两句. Besides, 分要点二. 展开一句或两句. Last but not least, 分要点三. 展开一句或两句 In a word (In my opinion/Personally), 重申主题/总结主题. 四、阐述谚语/名言型 A famous saying goes th

5、at名言或谚语， which reminds us that释义. Indeed, we can learn many things from it. First of all, 理由一. For example, 举例说明. Secondly, 理由二. Another case is that 举例说明. Furthermore, 理由三 In my opinion, 我的观点本题要求根据博客内容给这位家长回复，具有相当大的开放性，属于开放性作文。博客内容包括：要求14岁的女儿必须考入前五名，否则就要受到惩罚；女儿表现不错，但一些朋友认为她给孩子的压力过重。根据要求，针对以上两点表明自己的

6、看法，并举例陈述理由(高分固然重要，但并不代表一切；压力不利于孩子健康成长；惩罚孩子会产生负面影响等)，这是文章的核心部分；最后提出自己的建议(采纳朋友的建议；让孩子有更多的朋友并参加一些社会活动等)。考生首先要认真审题， 文章以一般现在时为主。在组织内容时，可恰当使用连接词和过渡词。为了提升文章的档次，可使用一些高级词汇和句式。另外，注意续写内容与所给内容要紧密衔接。Hi，TigerMom，What_puzzles_you_is_actually_a_puzzle_for_many_parents_in_China._My_idea_is that it is not quite right

7、 for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all­A students in school have turned out not to

8、 be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.【作文点评】 本文定为五档，得分24分。文章很好地完成了试题规定的任务：首先