18-19Unit3SectionⅤWriting——回复建议信

1、Section V Writing回复建议信写作技法指导文体指导回复建议信是针对对方提出的问题或困惑,有针对性地提出自己的建议的一 种书信文体.一、根本结构首先,要分析问题,说明自己的观点；其次,针对问题提出建议,并说明原因；最后,提出期望,希望收信者积极行动,改良现状,并礼貌地结束全文.二、考前须知提出个人的建议时,应注意以下两点：i .信件要素齐全建议信的回信和建议信一样,通常由六局部构成：信头 发信人的地址和发 信日期、信内地址收信人姓名、职位、地址等、称呼、正文、结束语和签名. 有时信头和信内地址可省略.2 .态度谦恭理智不管对方提出的问题有无实际价值,态度是否中肯,都要认真对待,理智

2、分析,并对对方提出的问题给出合理的解释以及实际有效的解决方法.3 .简明扼要,以理服人针对问题提出解决方法时,一定要语气柔和,态度明确,逻辑清楚,重点突 出,让对方感到“纳而有因,拒而有理.亮点句式1 .首段：引出问题 I am sorry you have had so much trouble in. You have asked for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions. I feel greatly honored to be trusted.2 .主体：提出提议In my opinion , you would

3、be wise to take the following action.First of all, .; Meanwhile, .; In addition. It's important for you to.3 .结尾：提出期望CD Don't lose heart, whatever happens. I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. Please let me know if I can help further.Cheer up! Your troubles will soon be ove

4、r.Where there is a will, there is a way.总分值佳作构建写作任务假设你是李华.你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他由于沉迷于电脑游戏, 健康受到很大影响.他十分焦虑.请你根据以下要点提示,给他写一封回信,建 议他养成良好的生活习惯.要点：1 .限制玩游戏的时间,把精力逐渐转移到其他事情上；2 .规定起床和睡觉的时间,形成良好的作息习惯；3 .每天锻炼半小时,增强体质.注意：1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；4 .可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.Dear John,Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua审题谋篇体裁回复建议信时态以一

5、现在时为主主题建议养成良 好的生活习 惯人称以第一、二人称为主结构第一段：引出问题 第二段：提出提议 第三段：提出期望遣词造句I.对接单元词汇增强；使坚强对有瘾习惯于停止做某事对作出决定想要做某事陷入；染上习惯对有很坏的影响1. strengthenvt.2. addicted to3. accustomed to4. quit doing.5. decide on6. feel like doing.7. get into8. have a bad effect on葭巧用单元句式、语法9. 完成句子1 .听说你沉迷于电脑游戏,我很难过.I'm sorry to hear that

6、you're addicted to computer games.2 .电脑游戏对你的健康有不良影响.Computer games have a bad effect on your health.3 .作为朋友,我想给你一些建议来帮助你.As a friend, I would like to give you some advice to help you.4 .首先,你应该决定限制你玩电脑游戏的时间.Firstly, you should decide on limiting the time that you play computer games.5 .放学后你应该参加各种

7、各样的活动.You should attend all kinds of activities after school.6 .你应该在特定的时间起床睡觉.You should get up and go to bed at a specific tim e7 .你可以养成定期起床和睡觉的习惯.You can get into the habit of getting up and going to bed regularly.8 .最后但并非最不重要的是,你应该习惯于每天锻炼半小时,以增强你的 健康.Last but not least, you should be accustomed t

8、o doing some exercise for about half an hour to strengthen your health every day.9 .为了过健康的生活,我希望你能停止玩电脑游戏.I hope that you can quit playing computer games to live a healthy life.【导学号：98892025】二句式升级10 .用定语从句合并句子1、2I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to computer gameswhich have a bad effect

9、on your health.11 .用feel like改写句子3As a friend, I feel like giving you some advice to help you.12 .用and连接句子4、5Firstly, you should decide on limiting the time that you play computer games and attend all kinds of activities after school.13 .用so that.连接句子6、7You should get up and go to bed at a specific

10、time so that you can get into the habit of getting up and going to bed regularly.14 .用do强调谓语动词改写句子9I do hope that you can quit playing computer games to live a healthy life.妙笔成篇【参考范文】Dear John,I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to computer gameswhich have a bad effect on your health.As a

11、 friend, I feel like giving you some advice to help you.Firstly, you should decide on limiting the time that you play computer games and attend all kinds of activities after school.Secondly you should get up and go to bed at a specific time so that you can get into the habit of getting up and going to bed regularly.Last but not least, you should be accustomed to