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1、八、高级句式写作导练八、高级句式写作导练写作要领写作要领名师指导名师指导即时演练即时演练写作要领写作要领高考评分标准中的高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”就是指句就是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。不论是复杂结构的运用子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。不论是复杂结构的运用, ,如强调句、如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句, ,还是还是较多的语法结构较多的语法结构, ,如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转如分词和不定式等非谓语动词的运用都指向句式的转换问题

2、。不容置疑换问题。不容置疑, ,这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次。的表达力度、提升文章的档次。1.1.恰当地使用复合句恰当地使用复合句在书面表达中在书面表达中, ,运用简单句固然可以减少表达过程中的失误运用简单句固然可以减少表达过程中的失误, ,但是但是, ,书面书面表达中不尝试使用复杂句表达中不尝试使用复杂句, ,写作水平永远上不了档次。写作水平永远上不了档次。王亚平在太空做实验王亚平在太空做实验, ,吸引了地球上的所有学生。吸引了地球上的所有学生。Wang Yaping made some experimen

3、ts in space.It attracted all Wang Yaping made some experiments in space.It attracted all the pupils on earth.the pupils on earth.根据这两个简单句之间的逻辑关系根据这两个简单句之间的逻辑关系, ,我们可以将这两个句子用复合句表我们可以将这两个句子用复合句表达出来。达出来。It attracted all the pupils on earth that Wang Yaping made It attracted all the pupils on earth that

4、 Wang Yaping made some experiments in space.(some experiments in space.(含有主语从句含有主语从句) )Wang Yaping made some experiments in space,which attracted Wang Yaping made some experiments in space,which attracted all the pupils on earth.(all the pupils on earth.(含有定语从句含有定语从句) )我不会相信你。我不会相信你。I wont believe y

5、ou.I wont believe you.No matter what you say,I wont believe.(No matter what you say,I wont believe.(含有状语从句含有状语从句) )I wont believe what you say.(I wont believe what you say.(含有宾语从句含有宾语从句) )2.2.合理使用特殊句型合理使用特殊句型为提高书面表达的档次为提高书面表达的档次, ,可根据文章中的信息要点合理使用特殊句型可根据文章中的信息要点合理使用特殊句型, ,如如: :强调句、强调句、itit的用法、倒装句等。的用

6、法、倒装句等。他看到报纸后才知道发生了什么事。他看到报纸后才知道发生了什么事。He knew what had happened after he read the newspaper.He knew what had happened after he read the newspaper.He did not know what had happened until he read the He did not know what had happened until he read the newspaper.newspaper.It was not until he read the

7、newspaper that he knew what had It was not until he read the newspaper that he knew what had happened.happened.用不了多久所有这些森林都会被毁掉。用不了多久所有这些森林都会被毁掉。All the forests will be destroyed soon.All the forests will be destroyed soon.It wont be/take long before all the forests are destroyed.It wont be/take lon

8、g before all the forests are destroyed.只有以这种方式只有以这种方式, ,我们学生才能愉快、有效地学习。我们学生才能愉快、有效地学习。We students can study happily and effectively only in this We students can study happily and effectively only in this way.way.Only in this way can we students study happily and Only in this way can we students stud

9、y happily and effectively.effectively.3.3.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气虚拟语气是语言表达中常用的一种形式虚拟语气是语言表达中常用的一种形式, ,能蕴藏更多含义能蕴藏更多含义, ,使文章表达使文章表达更委婉、含蓄更委婉、含蓄, ,从而提高文字的信息含量。从而提高文字的信息含量。你没有听我的建议你没有听我的建议, ,因此你这次没通过考试。因此你这次没通过考试。You didnYou didnt take my advice,so you failed in the exam this t take my advice,so you failed in the

10、exam this time.time.If you had taken my advice,you wouldnIf you had taken my advice,you wouldnt have failed in t have failed in the exam this time.the exam this time.You should have taken my advice otherwise you would not You should have taken my advice otherwise you would not fail in the exam this

11、time.fail in the exam this time.You might not have failed in the exam this time but you You might not have failed in the exam this time but you didndidnt take my advice.t take my advice.名师指导名师指导 在实际写作中在实际写作中, ,要想提高文章档次要想提高文章档次, ,就必须在文章中灵活使用复杂句就必须在文章中灵活使用复杂句式和高级表达方式。只有这样式和高级表达方式。只有这样, ,才能从整体上提升文章的档次。

12、例才能从整体上提升文章的档次。例如如:2015:2015年福建卷写作范文中年福建卷写作范文中In the picture,we can see a boy in In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of with a pile of books on it.books on it. 2015 2015年湖南卷写作范文中年湖南卷写作范文中He said be

13、fore the whole He said before the whole class that class that only if we put our heart into our lessons could weonly if we put our heart into our lessons could we make great progress.make great progress.以及以及20162016上海卷范文中上海卷范文中 From what has been From what has been mentioned above,it is fierce compe

14、tition and lack of mentioned above,it is fierce competition and lack of communication communication thatthat give rise to the phenomenon. give rise to the phenomenon. Only by mutual Only by mutual trust and understanding can childrentrust and understanding can children feel the importance and feel t

15、he importance and pride attached to them.pride attached to them.即时演练即时演练按照要求改变句式按照要求改变句式1.The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in 1.The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.( this way.(改为倒装句改为倒装句) ) 2.I suggest that you (should) make friends

16、with people having different2.I suggest that you (should) make friends with people having different characteristics or backgrounds.( characteristics or backgrounds.(改为改为itit作形式主语的复合句作形式主语的复合句) ) 3.Time is so precious that we cant afford to waste it.(3.Time is so precious that we cant afford to waste

17、 it.(改为改为soso开头开头的的 倒装句倒装句) ) 答案答案: :1.Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and 1.Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.physically healthy.2.It is suggested that you (should) make friends with people 2.It is suggested that you (should) make friends w

18、ith people having different characteristics or backgrounds.having different characteristics or backgrounds.3.So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.3.So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.4.The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(4.The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(合并合并 为带定语从句的复合句为带定语从句的复合句) ) 5.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high 5.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.( scho