专题十七 书面表达

1、专题十七 书面表达考点一提纲类Writing 1(2015课标)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter,I􀆳d like to ask you to write an article for our school􀆳s English newspaper       &

2、#160;     写作提示本文为书信体提纲式作文。写作时以一般现在时为基本时态,以第一人称为主体人称;注意要点要齐全,包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期;写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词,以使文章行文连贯、流畅,这一点是高考英语高分作文所必须具备的要素。One possible version:Dear Peter, I􀆳d like to ask you to write an article for our school􀆳s English newspaper. The“Foreign Cultures

3、”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spen

4、d their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it􀆳s interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?I􀆳m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua Writing 1(

5、2015课标)假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结语已为你写好。            Looking forward to your reply.答案写作提示1.本文为应用文电子邮件的写作,属于提纲类作文。在写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.内容要点:

6、(1)出发及返回时间;(2)在敬老院的活动:包饺子、表演节目等。One possible version:Dear Lucy,I􀆳d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We􀆳ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly pe

7、ople there.We􀆳ll also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o􀆳clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us,please let us know and we􀆳ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in

8、the morning.Looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Hua Writing 1(2015天津)1.假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。(1)自我介绍;(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;(3)询问对方的其他需求。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇:学生会the Student UnionDear Chris,    &#

9、160;           Yours,Li Jin答案1.写作提示1.书信格式,用第一人称和第二人称,主要用一般现在时和一般将来时;2.要点齐全:自我介绍;捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;询问对方的其他需求;告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。3.注意上下文的连贯性和书信语言的得体性。One possible version:Dear Chris, I􀆳m Li Jin,chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High School.I􀆳m

10、 writing to tell you something about donating books to your class.To enhance communication with your school,we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature.With them,you may have a better understanding of China and its culture.We􀆳ll take the books when participating i

11、n the summer camp this July to your school. Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needs.I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendship.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin  Writing 1(2015安徽)某英文杂志正在举办以“Fa

12、ncy yourself as an interviewer”为主题的征文活动,请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”为题,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:1.采访的对象;2.采访的原因;3.想提的问题。注意:1.词数120左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview            答案写作提示1.本文为提纲类作文,写作时主要

13、采用第一人称,时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,同时还要恰当使用虚拟语气。 2.内容要点:(1)表明采访的对象;(2)阐明采访的原因;(3)说明想提的问题。One possible version:A Famous Chinese I Would Like to InterviewThe person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one o

14、f the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it. If I could interview him,I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained.I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether sp

15、ace travel is such great fun as I have read.Finally,I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life,which must be very interesting. Writing 1(2015陕西)假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival,which will be held on June 1517,20

16、15,is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English Debate.If you are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi.写作要点:1.表达写信意图:2.陈述应征目的;3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;

17、3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear Ms Chen,I􀆳m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.  Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua答案写作提示1.本题为提纲类作文,在写作时主要使用第一人称,时态主要包括一般现在时和一般将来时。2.内容要点:(1)表达写信意图;(2)陈述应征目的;(3)说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。One possible version:Dear Ms Chen, I􀆳m L

18、i Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.I􀆳m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer. I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speak

19、ing English in public.As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by bot

20、h teachers and my classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua Writing 1(2015四川)假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据

21、以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意:1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。Hi,Sharon,This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. Li Xia答案写作提示1.本文为提纲类作文,在写作时使用第一人称,时态主要包括一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。2.内容要点:(1)向Sharon表达

22、帮助她学习普通话的意愿;(2)说明自己能胜任的理由;(3)给出讲好普通话的两点建议;(4)提出自己学习英语的具体需求。One possible version:Hi,Sharon,This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am more than willing to lend a helping hand to you. I am convinced I can perfectly live up to your expectation.I have such a

23、 good command of Mandarin that not only was I elected the broadcaster of the radio station of our school,but I also won the second prize in the Mandarin Contest held in our city last year.When it comes to improving Mandarin,my advice is that you should listen to Mandarin every day and practice speak

24、ing it whenever possible.Just as the saying goes,practice makes perfect.By the way,I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability,especially the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar.Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Xia  考点二图表类Correction 1(2015北京,书面一)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括:1.介绍训练营的相关内容(例如:时间、地点、参加者等);2.说明你打算参加的原因;3.询问对方的意向。注意: 1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。提示词:龙舟训练营Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim, Yours,Li Hua答案写作提示本文为提纲类作文,在写作时应主要使用第一人称和第二人称,时态包括一般将来时、一般现在时和现在进行时。参考词汇:summer holiday暑假One possible vers