高中英语基础写作-人物篇ppt课件

1、Usain BoltBorn 8,21, 1986 Jamaica,1.96 meters ,hard-working, love ,determined,In 2021, at the Olympic Games, broke In 2021, in the World Championship ,Now,Usain Bolt Usain Bolt was born on August 21st, 1986 in Jamaica. He is 1.96 meters tall and he is hard-working, full of love and determined.In 202

2、1, at the Olympic Games he broke the 100-meter and 200-meter world records. In 2021, in the World Championship he broke his own world records for the 100-meter and 200-meter races again. Now he is working hard to realize his dream to break more world records.审题的步骤审题的步骤、文体文体主体时态主体时态人称人称信息点整合信息点整合不要打草

3、稿，但应有提纲不要打草稿，但应有提纲人物引见人物引见 三段论1.主题段主题段 -开头段开头段Birthday , birthplace and family background2.拓展段拓展段-中间段中间段Appearance, qualities, interest /hobbies, education ,big events in ones life3.总结段总结段-结尾段结尾段 evaluation对人物做出综合性的评价。对人物做出综合性的评价。人物简介的普通步骤：人物简介的普通步骤：Give the right order( )教育：教育：education ( )外貌性格外貌性格

4、appearance ,character( )生平生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )( )评价评价evaluation( )概略概略age, sex, birth-place, background概略概略,外貌外貌,教育教育,生平生平,评价评价 A. 概略概略 :译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一医生之一.1) Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and he is one of the greatest docto

5、rs in China.1) Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips可以用分词短语可以用分词短语,同位语构造同位语构造,使文章简约使文章简约,照射照射1.A. 概略概略 :语法，句法高分语法，句法高分tips可以用分词短语可以用分词短语,同位语构造同位语构造,使文章简

6、约使文章简约,照射照射 译：费孝通，我国著名的社会学家和社会活动译：费孝通，我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家，年月日生于一富有家家，年月日生于一富有家庭年月日因病逝于北京庭年月日因病逝于北京Born in a well-off family on November 2,1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese Sociologist and active social worker, passed away for illness in on April 24, 2005 .B.外貌外貌,性格性格:译：我的历史教师是个美丽女人，她长着译：我的历史教师是个美丽女人，

7、她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发两只大眼睛，留着长发.My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair.My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.巧用巧用with做定语做定语C. 教育阅历：教育阅历：可以用非谓语动词可以用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼使文章精炼After she had graduated from the English department of Zhongshan Universit

8、y, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.Having graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.1.在中山大学英语系毕业后在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习她继续学习,获得了博士学位获得了博士学位.D生平：生平：可以用复合句倒装可以用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句非限定定语从句等，润色文章等，润色文章Not on

9、ly is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.1.他对科学极有兴趣他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋也有音乐天赋.2. 他创了一个新的游泳记录他创了一个新的游泳记录,为中国队博得了一为中国队博得了一 块金牌块金牌.E评价：评价：留意运用一些动词、描画词等短语、词组留意运用一些动词、描画词等短语、词组Lishizhen made great contribution

10、s to Medical literature.Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people speak highly of him and all respect him .1. 雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的典范雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的典范,我们都我们都很敬重他很敬重他.2. 李时珍为医学做出了宏大的奉献李时珍为医学做出了宏大的奉献.话题词汇，词组，句型：话题词汇，词组，句型： 外貌：外貌： good-looking容颜英俊的，容颜英俊的，funning-looking外表可笑的，外表可笑的， ugly-looking丑陋的，丑陋的， or

11、dinary-looking外貌平平的，外貌平平的， white-haired白头发的，白头发的，near/far-sighted 近近/远视的，远视的， charming有魅力的有魅力的, 时髦的时髦的fashionable, 苗条苗条slim 性格气质：性格气质： kind-hearted好心的，好心的， warm-hearted 热心的，热心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的，心不在焉的，bad-tempered 坏脾气的，坏脾气的，a strong will很强的意志力，很强的意志力，naughty 调皮的，调皮的， smart/bright 聪明的，聪明的， wise睿智的

12、，睿智的，diligent 勤劳的，勤劳的， humorous 幽默的，幽默的， attractive 有魅力的，有魅力的， talkative能说会道的，能说会道的，confident 有自信心的，有自信心的， independent 独立的，独立的，patient 有耐心的有耐心的 生日、出生地、年龄生日、出生地、年龄 , (who was) born in , is a , a , is a with a height of and a weight of 家庭背景：家庭背景： was born in/ into a poor/rich family 出生在贫穷的出生在贫穷的/富有的家庭

13、富有的家庭 as a child of years old, he 还是个还是个岁的孩子时岁的孩子时 spend his childhood in 在在度过了他的童年度过了他的童年 live a happy/hard life 生活很幸福生活很幸福/艰苦艰苦 教育背景：教育背景： be admitted to university考取考取大学大学 graduate from department of university从某大学某系毕业从某大学某系毕业 receive/get a doctors degree 获取博士学位获取博士学位 主要事迹：主要事迹： serve as做某种任务做某种任

14、务 devote oneself /ones effort to/ be devoted to 终身努力于终身努力于 concentrate /apply oneself to 专注于专注于 make up ones mind to do/be determined to do决心做决心做 have a gift for / be gifted in 有有的天赋的天赋成就：成就：one of the best/most important 最好的最好的/重要的重要的之一之一2. set a example to为为树立典范树立典范3. be honoured as被授予被授予； win the

15、 prize 获得获得荣誉荣誉4. make great contribution to 为为作出宏大奉献作出宏大奉献根据下表内容写一篇根据下表内容写一篇120词左右的英语短词左右的英语短文引见美国总统奥巴马。文引见美国总统奥巴马。提示：提示：文体文体分段分段时态时态人称人称信息点整合信息点整合姓名姓名Barack Obama出生时间出生时间 1961年年8月月4日日出生地点出生地点 Honolulu, Hawaii家庭家庭父亲是肯尼亚黑人，父亲是肯尼亚黑人， 母亲是美国白人母亲是美国白人梦想梦想当总统当总统教育教育1988年考入（年考入（ Harvard Law School), 1991年

16、博士学院年博士学院职业职业毕业后当律师，毕业后当律师， 大学讲师，后来一直从大学讲师，后来一直从政。政。 2008年年11月月4日，日， 在大选（在大选（ 他（他（the general election)中击败（中击败（ John McCain), 成为首位黑人总统成为首位黑人总统评价评价Obama的成功极大地激励了非裔美国人的成功极大地激励了非裔美国人。 subject 主语主语 predicate 谓语谓语 object 宾语宾语 attribute 定语定语 adverbial 状语状语 complement 补语补语 predicative 表语表语 appositive 同位语同位

17、语C clause 从句从句Short forms 缩略语缩略语P. S. Att Advcom pre Barack Obama , the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4th, 1961. S. P.AdvWhen he was only a small a boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States.= In his childhood,

18、/ As a small boy, he had a great dream that he would become the President of the United States. S. P.Adv.cIn 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School , where he gained his doctors degree in 1991.=In 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School and he gained his doctors degree in 1991 there. S.

19、 P.AdvAtt cAfter graduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics.=After he graduated from Harvard, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics. S. P.P.AdvOn November 4, 2021, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election and became the first African- A

20、merican President of the United States.=On November 4, 2021, Barack Obama won the general election defeating John McCain and became the first African- American President of the United States.P. S. P.AdvAdvThe success of Obama inspires African-American greatly. His achievements show that anyone can s

21、ucceed as long as he works hard. S. P. S. P.Adv.cStudent times No 6 B3著名歌手丛飞的爱心事迹传遍全国，深化到每个人的心著名歌手丛飞的爱心事迹传遍全国，深化到每个人的心中。如今请他根据下面的写作内容和写作要求，写一篇中。如今请他根据下面的写作内容和写作要求，写一篇短文，引见丛飞的感人事迹。短文，引见丛飞的感人事迹。写作内容写作内容生平生平1. 1969年生于辽宁省盘锦市年生于辽宁省盘锦市. 1992年毕业于沈阳音年毕业于沈阳音乐学院。乐学院。 2、2006年年4月月20日病逝于深圳。日病逝于深圳。 主要事迹主要事迹 1、从、从

22、1994年年8月开场资助贫困儿童，坚持月开场资助贫困儿童，坚持11年之久，共年之久，共捐赠捐赠300 多万，多达多万，多达178名贫困儿童受助。名贫困儿童受助。2、生前立下遗言、生前立下遗言捐赠眼角膜。捐赠眼角膜。荣誉荣誉 终身获得许多荣誉，其中包括获得终身获得许多荣誉，其中包括获得“2005打动中国打动中国年度人物的称号年度人物的称号写作要求写作要求 必需运用必需运用5个句子引见全部所给的内容个句子引见全部所给的内容.参考词汇：捐赠眼角膜参考词汇：捐赠眼角膜donate cornea沈阳音乐学院沈阳音乐学院Shenyang Conservatory of Music2005打动中国年度人物打

23、动中国年度人物2005CCTV Moving China Award Cong Feis spirit lives on Cong Fei, born in Panjin, Liaoning Province in 1969, graduated from Shenyang Conservatory of Music in 1992. From August 1994, he began his 11-year cause of aiding poor children in mountainous areas, donated more than 8 million yuan and aid

24、ed up to 178 poor children. In his life, he got many honors, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award. Before his death, he made a will - to donate his corneas. Cong Fei passed away on April 20, 2006, but his spirit will live on.主要问题人名表达法地名表达法Choose-chose-chosen时态ArticleIn order to his count

25、ryHis many novels假设他叫李明，他的美国朋友布鲁斯开场学习中假设他叫李明，他的美国朋友布鲁斯开场学习中国文学，来信讯问鲁迅其人及作品。他回信引见国文学，来信讯问鲁迅其人及作品。他回信引见鲁迅，内容如下鲁迅，内容如下:1鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人2为了国家，弃医从文。为了国家，弃医从文。3著名的作家著名的作家,思想家思想家,而且还是中国现代文学而且还是中国现代文学的开创者的开创者.4小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如小说被译成多种文字，并被制成电影，如、这两部影片。这两部影片。5一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。参

26、考词汇参考词汇:The True Story of AH Q ：The New Years Sacrifice留意留意:引见必需包括一切内容要点引见必需包括一切内容要点,但不要逐条译成但不要逐条译成英语英语.写作要求写作要求只能运用只能运用5个句子表达全部内容。文章个句子表达全部内容。文章首尾已给出，不算字数。首尾已给出，不算字数。评分规范评分规范句子构造的准确性，信息内容的完好性句子构造的准确性，信息内容的完好性.Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you

27、something about Luxun. _. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li MingDear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing. Not only was Lu Xun a well-known Chinese writer, thinker, and translator, but a