2020年6月浙江名校联盟高三模拟联考英语作文读后续写写作指导(含范文)

1、2020年6月浙江名校联盟高三模拟联考英语作文读后续写写作指导一、续写原题"Missy," I cried to mywife, "did you put the banana skin on mydesk?" "No, honey, Meghan probably did, "As I'd feared, she had missed my real purpose of the question which was to makeit clear to her that she hadn't done her jo

2、b: defend my desk against the invader-our naughty girl. I abandoned the conversation.I sat here at the desk, and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to cometo me, examquestions for a test I would give myEnglish students. My wife was off to a reunion somewhere, but I was not alone. Meg

3、han, our 22-month-old daughter, kept me company. Yet her plans that day seemed to go against mine.She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the carpet in her room, climbing up and down her bed.At first I co

4、uld concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked( 分心的).I had not counted on the arrival of the"bib-bibs"("Bib-bibs" were birds). "Bib-bibs, bib-bibs!" Meghan screamed excitedly , her eyes alive with expectation . She insisted that I go with her to

5、the window."In a second. Just let me finish this question," I said.She pulled meby the hand (two fingers, actually) toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the bib-bibs. And wedid watch them. They chattered and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartm

6、ent window. Meghanwas absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work.Suddenly she rushed out from the room, and I heard her naked feet slapping against the wooden floor outside. Shereturned with herdoll, Dumpty She held him up to the window, stretching him out by his two arms and whi

7、spering into his nonexistent ear. "Bib-bibs, Dumpty, bib-bibs!" Then I left them in conversation and returned to my desk.胤读下面矩文，根据所蛤情节迸行续写.使之构成 个完整的施事.KMihsy,'11 trifid to my wife, "did you pin the hunmi t 4 in on mv d八k：" "Yj/khk, Metha口 probably did, BAs I'd Icdicd

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12、、And we did watch Ihem. J hoy ihjl eK-d 41 id icapcd atxl !unh 011 die luwn ju$L cuhide our up；irunent window. Meghiin nbborlx'd. but ts I w«tchcJ them, I st I hi 噌ht 3如用 nij “u国Sudd2iiiy 出c rushed oui from the rw>m. ind heard her naked feci stappinc the wooden tl<wr 讣ul.iJd- She ”“r

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14、nir nitin /nr】n, v* itli htTi n hanth and prrpMrin； 1k« hhnutin 日Panraph 重 Out of the torr er of my tjr I(<Htld 0 Ike Liltlc girl Mihhinjt heravsc I didn't have tinr for Mr.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使5个以上短文中标有下 划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完 成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: Unfortuna

15、tely, she came again soon, with her shoes in hands and preparing for an outing.Paragraph 2: Out of the corner of my eye I could see the little girl sobbing because I didn't have time for her.二、下水思路1 .确定主题：大主题是家长应该多陪伴孩子，理解孩子。短文以第一人 称进行叙述。讲的是妻子外出聚会，将孩子留给我照顾，但我忙于工作，觉得 孩子时刻在打扰自己。续写部分应该是通过与孩子的接触，感悟到作

16、为家长除 了工作，应该留出时间多陪伴孩子。2 .时空变化：没有大的时空转换，但随着情节的发展，会用到 then, shortly after等时间状语。时间状语的有效使用能使行文连贯，逻辑紧密。3 .续写难点：情节比较简单，但想象的空间很大。一般的处理方法是侧 重细节描写，这就需要掌握一定量的能表现人物情绪的具体动作词汇，平时需有一定的积累。三、下水续写“7+7'模式Paragraph 1: Unfortunately, she cameagain soon, with her shoes in hands and preparing for an outing.1. She stoo

17、d at the desk, and gazed up at me, waiting for me to nod my head.2. " Dumpty is crying. Go play with him!" I coaxed, pretending not to know what she wanted to do.3. Hearing this, she reluctantly laid her shoes down and toddled towards the window.4. Like a mother caring for her baby, she st

18、roked her doll tenderly as she hummed softly to him.5. Then I turned around and set to work again, pleased that my girl could concentrate on her doll.6. However, not long after that, she returned , saying excitedly "He's sleeping!"7. " Meghan" I snapped, "Daddy is busy n

19、ow!"Paragraph 2: Out of the corner of my eye I could see the little girl sobbing because I didn't have time for her.1. I shook my head helplessly, unsure of what to do.2. How I wished mywife would comeback homeand keep her company3. After a few silent minutes, I stood up from the seat and s

20、lowly walked over to her, trying to comfort her, but she just wiped her eyes and looked away.4. "I'm sorry, sweetie!" I said gently, reaching out my hands.5. Out of my expectation , my girl threw herself in my arms and easily forgave my rudeness.6. Overjoyed, I decided to take a break

21、fromwork, and went foran outing.7. Suddenly it dawned on me that the best way to be a good parent is to spend time with your kids.ParagraphsUnfortunately, she came again soon, with her shoes inhands and preparing for an outing. She stood at the desk, and gazed up at me, waiting for me to nod my head

22、. " Dumpty is crying. Go play with him!" I coaxed, pretending not to know what she wanted to do. Hearing this, she reluctantly laid her shoes down and toddled towards the window. Like a mother caring for her baby, she stroked her doll tenderly as she hummed softly to him. Then I turned around and set to work again, pleased that my girl could concentrate on her doll. However, not long after that, shereturned , sayingexdtedly , "He's sleeping!" " Meghan