公开课定语从句在作文里的使用实用教案

1、 He who is content is always happy. 知足者常乐知足者常乐2. Everything is ready, and all that we need is an east wind. 万事俱备，只欠东风万事俱备，只欠东风3. All that glitters is not gold . 并非所有发光的都是金子并非所有发光的都是金子(jn zi)4. He who laughs last laughs best . 谁笑到最后，谁笑的最好谁笑到最后，谁笑的最好5. Nothing in the world is difficult for one who set

2、s his mind to it. 世上无难事，只怕有心人世上无难事，只怕有心人第1页/共31页第一页，共32页。Attributive clauses in writing第2页/共31页第二页，共32页。1. I will organize some campus activities, like “English Evening”, a platform _ students can show their English （2013年天津(tin jn)卷）2. My physics teacher is my role model, _ influence on me had a lo

3、t to do with my decision.（2012安徽卷）wherewhose第3页/共31页第三页，共32页。3.But Id like to attend the English lectures, _ I can get more information on British and American culture. (湖南)4. In the English corner, I meet many friends, _ share the same interest with me.5. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung canc

4、er _brought you great pain. （重庆(zhn qn)）from whichwhowhich第4页/共31页第四页，共32页。They showed us around the farm. we saw many beautiful flowers on the farm.They showed us around the farm _ we saw many beautiful flowers.where第5页/共31页第五页，共32页。 The elderly always feel lonely. We sent the elderly some fruits,

5、cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.We sent the elderly _ always feel lonely some fruits, _ the rooms and had a good chat with them.whocleaned第6页/共31页第六页，共32页。 Id like to attend the English lecture. I can get more information on British and American culture from the English lecture.Id li

6、ke to attend the English lecture, _ I can get more information on British and American culture.from which第7页/共31页第七页，共32页。 He refused the invitation for the reason. The reason is not clear. The reason _ he refused the invitation is not clear. why第8页/共31页第八页，共32页。 Ive always longed for the days. I wi

7、ll be able to go out to enjoy the beauty of nature then.Ive always longed for the days _ I will be able to go out to enjoy the beauty of nature.when第9页/共31页第九页，共32页。1.Children eat a lot of sugar often get bad teeth.2.David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village. (全国(q

8、un u)卷)3. The weather turned out to be very good, that was more than we had expected.4. Anyone who want to go to the film tonight writes down your name here.who_which_wants第10页/共31页第十页，共32页。1. Born in a poor family in South Africa, Nelson Mandela, the son of the black people, grew up in a society wh

9、ich the white people looked down upon him, is one of the most famous people in the world. wheregrowingAppreciate and correct the students writing第11页/共31页第十一页，共32页。 2. Lang lang, a brilliant pianist, who expressed a keen interest in music at the age of two when he was attracted by a piece of music f

10、rom cartoon.3. As a teacher, who often helps those who have difficulty in doing their homework , is kind, helpful and patient.he第12页/共31页第十二页，共32页。Common mistakes1. 误用关系词：thatwhichwhere 2. 只有从句，无主句3. 定语(dngy)从句的主谓一致问题4. 从句中多了代词5.乱用关系词：多用或少用第13页/共31页第十三页，共32页。2013新课标新课标I假定你是李华。请你给笔友假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写

11、封信，告诉他写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否，同时询问他是否(sh fu)可以接机。可以接机。1.我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。 My uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.2. 我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Ch

12、inese painting you have asked for before.第14页/共31页第十四页，共32页。2012年【全国卷I新课标卷】 假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个(y )国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 1. I have learnt the news on the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp in Singapore, which I am fond of for a long time.2. Ive learned on th

13、e Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held in Singapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.3. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.多样化表达(biod)第15页/共31页第十五页，共32页。（2013年高考山东卷）描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职(jin zh)，旅游

14、，志愿者等）（用定语从句（用定语从句(cn j)增添做这些事情的增添做这些事情的原因）原因）which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.which will enrich my life and broaden my horizons.I plan to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to the society.I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my c

15、hoices,第16页/共31页第十六页，共32页。2016 合肥三模作文近年，青少年学生的体质问题越来越受到关注，假如你是李华，请你给某学生英语报写一封信，谈谈你的看法并提出(t ch)建议，倡议同学们积极锻炼，强身健体。建议内容包括：1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动兴趣的培养 1. make a plan . keep us on the right track./ live a regular life./stick to it. 2. take part in both in and after-class activities. make our school lif

16、e colorful ./ improve our learning/relax ourselves. 3. develop our interest. motivate us to do more sports. enhance our academic performances/achievements.第17页/共31页第十七页，共32页。2016 合肥三模作文近年，青少年学生的体质问题越来越受到关注，假如你是李华，请你给某学生英语报写一封信，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，倡议同学们积极锻炼，强身健体。建议内容包括：1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动兴趣(xngq)的培养 It

17、is a good idea to make a practical exercise plan and stick to it, which can keep us on the right track. We need to take an active part in both in and after-class activities , which will not only make our school life colorful , but also improve our learning. where we can relax ourselves both physical

18、ly and mentally.第18页/共31页第十八页，共32页。1. 健身计划的制定 2 校内外结合 3. 运动(yndng)兴趣的培养 The most important thing ( that) we should keep in mind is to develop our interest in sports. As the saying goes, interest is the best teacher. Our love for sports will motivate us to do more activities , which in turn can enhan

19、ce our academic achievements.第19页/共31页第十九页，共32页。 _, it is a good idea to make a practical exercise plan and stick to it, which can keep us on the right track. _, We need to take an active part in both in and after-class activities , which will not only make our school life colorful , but also improv

20、e our learning. where we can relax ourselves both physically and mentally. The most important thing ( that) we should keep in mind is to develop our interest in sports. As the saying goes, interest is the best teacher. Our love for sports will motivate us to do more activities , which in turn can en

21、hance our academic achievements.First and foremostIn addition第20页/共31页第二十页，共32页。向一位外国朋友介绍中国的基本情况：面积：960960万平方公里，是世界第三大国民族：5656个民族，其中(qzhng)(qzhng)汉族(the Han Ethnic Group)(the Han Ethnic Group)是最大的一个，占94%94%河流：许多大河流，其中(qzhng)(qzhng)最重要的河流有长江、黄河经济状况：曾经落后于世界许多国家，但随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返，所有中国人都为此感到自豪。 第2

22、1页/共31页第二十一页，共32页。Thank you! 第22页/共31页第二十二页，共32页。1. 众所周知，中国有960万平方公里的土地， 是世界第三大国。2. 中国有56个民族，其中汉族(the Han Ethnic Group)是最大的一个，占94%。3. 中国有许多大河流，其中长江、黄河是最重要 的河流。4. 曾有一段时间，中国的经济落后于世界许多 国家。5. 随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去 不复返，所有中国人都为此感到(gndo)自豪。【5个句子(j zi)】* Group work: 根据写作内容，构思根据写作内容，构思(u s)正确的定语从句。正确的定语从句。第23页

23、/共31页第二十三页，共32页。1. 1. 众所周知(zhng su(zhng su zhu zh) zhu zh)，中国有960960万平方公里的土地，是世界第三大国. .As is known As is known toto all, China, with an all, China, with an area of 9.6 million square area of 9.6 million square kilometers, is the third largest kilometers, is the third largest country in the world.cou

24、ntry in the world.第24页/共31页第二十四页，共32页。3.3.中国有许多大河流(hli)(hli)，其中长江、黄河是最重要的河流(hli)(hli)。 There are many big rivers in China, There are many big rivers in China, the most important of which are the the most important of which are the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.Yangtze River and the Yellow River

25、.第25页/共31页第二十五页，共32页。2. 2. 中国有5656个民族，其中(qzhng)(qzhng)汉族(the (the Han Ethnic Group) Han Ethnic Group) 是最大的一个，占94%94%。China has 56 peoples , among which China has 56 peoples , among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, accounting for 94% of the whole.account

26、ing for 94% of the whole.第26页/共31页第二十六页，共32页。4. 4. 曾有一段时间，中国的经济落后于世界许多(x(xdu)du)国家。 There was a time when Chinas There was a time when Chinas economy was far behind many other economy was far behind many other countries in the world.countries in the world.第27页/共31页第二十七页，共32页。5.5.随着经济的增长，中国人被歧视的日子一去不复返，所有中国人都为此(wi c(wi c) )感到自豪. .With the development of economy, the With the development of economy, the days are gone when the Chinese people days are gone when the Chinese people were looked down upon, which all were looked down upon, which all Chinese are proud of.Chinese are proud of.第2