中考英语写作讲评（一）

1、长郡双语长郡双语长郡双语长郡双语晕轮效应又称“光环效应”，属于心理学范畴，是指当认知者对一个人的某种特征形成好或坏的印象后，他还倾向于据此推论该人其他方面的特征。本质上是一种以偏概全的认知上的偏误。长郡双语cleandirtymessyneatovermoderate长郡双语123书写书写 handwriting字数字数 number of words格式格式 formatstandard and cleanneat and clear not too many or too few长郡双语1书写书写 handwriting长郡双语字母书写规范字母大小合适卷面布白均匀留白倾斜度一致长郡双语2格

2、式格式 format长郡双语长郡双语长郡双语假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室（dormitory）规定，如不整理床铺，休息时间大声拨打电话，未经许可（permission）动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友，你决定写一封电子邮件给他。要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；（2）字数：60-80词（信得开头和结尾已给出，不介入总词数）；（3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。参考词汇：respect each other 互相尊重therefore 因此obey the rules 遵守规定without p

3、ermission 未经允许3字数字数 number of words长郡双语Dear Wang Ming,Im writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. Whats more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read th

4、e following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Dont make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Dont use others things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rul

5、es and make our room more and more comfortable.Best wishes,LiHua长郡双语长郡双语85长郡双语113长郡双语长郡双语Im writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. Whats more, we should make our room clean and tidy

6、. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Dont make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Dont use others things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.1010行每行1010个字；8 8行每行1212个字长郡双语123书写书写 handwriting字数字数 number of words格式格式 format书写规范大小合适布白均匀不宜太多不宜太少10*10/ 8*12结构清楚三段式总分总长郡双语“Outer beauty” comes first!If a