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1、How to do error correction in an essay I. Teaching goals ： By learning in this class,every student can grasp some ways of doing error correction in an essay and improve the ability to do error correction in an essay .II. Teaching design ： This content is divided into two periods . The first period第一

2、课时I. 短文改错的要求 ( 2014年新课标全国卷I )短文改错： （每小题1分,共计10分） (请按要求改错，否则不得分! ) 假定英语课上，老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出增加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。II. A master hand's first small disp

3、lay ： 牛刀小试：Dear editor, I am a active high school student. A few days ago , one of my good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he want to start his own business. I tried my best to get him change his mind, and failed. I realize it is difficult of me to change her mind. He i

4、s not doing good in his studies. The process is more important than the result. Now there are only 90 days leaving before the test. I am not sure that whether his decision is right or wrong. Im looking forward to your help. I need your advice. III. 短文改错考点归纳：一. 名词错误1.Within the next few minute, my gr

5、andfather also caught a fish. 2.I would appreciate it if you can give me some advices on how to keep healthy. 3.The teacher gave us lots of informations. Strike while the iron is hot ：趁热打铁：1. His many friend went travelling abroad. 2. We have funs at the seaside. 3.Jim has made great progresses in l

6、earning English. 二. 冠词错误1.(2013辽宁卷) Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. 2. (2013新课标全国卷)In a fact, he even scared (吓，恐吓）my classmates away when they came over to play with me.3. (2009四川)Three men were fishing when the angle appeared in the boat with them. Practise : 练一练1. In half a hour

7、 , we will leave for Zhengzhou. 2. Two years later , everyone here will be admitted to an university 3.To tell you a truth , a prisoner has escaped from this prison. 三 . 代词的错误（人称代词和反身代词）1.(2008全国II) I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievement

8、.2.(2012全国)Lucy decided to study abroad. Before her leaving ,I prepared a gift for him. Have a try : 试一试：1. Walking out of the classroom is necessary for we all. 2. When he woke up ,he found him lying in bed in a strange room .四 . 动词的错误(多考虑时态的转换）1.（2013陕西）My grandfather and I enjoy fishing . One Sun

9、day morning we go fishing at a lake. 2. When I first learned to write English, I come across many difficulties Knowledge consolidation : 知识巩固1. The teacher said that the Earth went around the Sun. 2. Last week , we know several foreigners and learnt to speak in English . 五.词组搭配的错误（多为介词的变换）1.(2013辽宁)

10、 Everyday, he spends too much time with his work. 2.(2012辽宁) There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six miles.Have a try : 试一试：1.(2012陕西 ) I also shared many photos for my friends taken in Beijing. 2. A guide showed us to th

11、e exhibition of the traditional buildings 3. Nowadays most people attach importance of the education of their children . 六.adj与adv的错误（多是形容词与副词的互相转换）1.(2014新课标全国卷）We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2.(2007浙江卷) I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of mysel

12、f.Practise : 练一练：1.The old man was high thought of by his neighbor. 2.The Capital Museum is very large and attractively . 3. I hope this plan suits you good. The second period 第二课时七. 连词错误（常常是and , but, or , so 等的用法）1.(2013四川卷)We were warned not to cheat again so we would be punished . 2.(2012陕西卷) It

13、 is in the downtown (商业中心）area, but it is easy to go anywhere from the hotel by public transport.Practise : 练一练 ：1. Im sorry, and I wont be able to come tonight . 2. My alarm clock didn't ring,since I woke up an hour late.八.从句引导词错误 :1. (2013新课标全国卷)Having tea in the afternoon provides a bridge be

14、tween lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8oclock at night. 2.(2007浙江卷)Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.3. He didnt believe that other people said . Practise : 练一练：1.With winter is approaching, it becomes cold. 2.We are busy preparing for the exam,when h

15、e is relaxing himself on the beach. 3. Gone were the days that teachers were looked down on .九：-ing与-ed 的错误1. I have also been longed to take you to the countryside. 2. The government is taken measures to help the students from poor families. 4. I am tiring , but I know I will never fall asleep. Pra

16、ctise : 练一练：1.Many children are interesting in playing computer games , which makes their parents worried . 2.While walked along the stree , he came about his teacher , Mr.Smith. 十：主谓一致的错误1. (2014新课标全国) My dream school look like a big garden. 2. (2014辽宁卷) The early morning barking have been disturbi

17、ng us as we are often up (be up 不睡觉的)all night with the baby. Practise :练一练：1. Jim is one of the students who has been admitted to our school. 2. My friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study and the findings will be use as materials for our research. 十一：多词与漏词1. (2014新课标全国) As result,

18、 the plants are growing somewhere. 2. (2014新课标全国) Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. Practise : 练一练：1. (2014新课标全国) There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. 2. As good friends , we should keep touch with each other .IV : 总结：短文改错顺口溜 名词单复数，可数不可数 a-an 相互换，冠词减与添（a, an, the ）人称分男女， 反身要明辨 现在与过去，动词时态变词组考搭配，介词来回换 形容词、副词常用颠 and , but 易用反 前因后果要用soor 与 and 会区分 名从、定从与状从 引导词必须要弄清 -ing , -ed 别忘记 主谓一致记心中加一减一是