高中英语作文讲解

1、高中英语作文讲解1 书面表达（满分书面表达（满分25resume）。给外教）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（附材料的文字和格式（format）。）。 注意：注意：1. 词数词数100; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。Dear MS Jenkins, Im Li Hua from English writing class. Im writing to ask for your help. Im applying for a part-time job in a foreign company in

2、 my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary chang

3、es. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment（附件（附件 ）. Thank you for your kindness! ( 102 Words) Yours, Li HUa佳作欣赏佳作欣赏-2016I卷作文范文卷作文范文高中英语作文讲解22016高考全国高考全国I卷作文范文卷作文范文鉴赏。鉴赏。=用词的地道用词的地道=句式的高级句式的高级=句句之间的衔接句句之间的衔接经典累积经典累积我知道你很忙，但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们并我知道你很忙，但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们并作出必要的改变我会很感激

4、。作出必要的改变我会很感激。然而，并且，但是然而，并且，但是ask for your help; apply for; make changesI know you have a very busy schedule , but I d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes.however- and-; but;高中英语作文讲解3Writing 写出优质句子，写出优质句子，突破作文高分突破作文高分高中英语作文讲解4 学习目标学习目标 1. 能够鉴赏范文

5、，掌握文中有用能够鉴赏范文，掌握文中有用 的句型和好的表达形式。的句型和好的表达形式。 2. 通通过过合作合作讲讲解：解： 能能够写够写出正确的出正确的简单简单句句 能能够创够创作出精彩高作出精彩高档档句句3. 掌握如何掌握如何评评价一价一份份作文。作文。高中英语作文讲解5 第二步：找出修饰成分，第二步：找出修饰成分， 添加修饰成分。添加修饰成分。 第一步：找出句子主干，第一步：找出句子主干， 翻译句子主干。翻译句子主干。高中英语作文讲解6例句：例句：为了逃避挨骂，那个淘气的男为了逃避挨骂，那个淘气的男孩没关水龙头就跑了。孩没关水龙头就跑了。 第一步：找出句子主干，第一步：找出句子主干， 翻译

6、句子主干。翻译句子主干。 男男孩孩 跑了跑了 注意：时态和语态注意：时态和语态The boy ran away.高中英语作文讲解7=That naughty boy ran away.=That naughty boy ran away without turning off the water.=In order to escape being scolded, the naughty boy ran away without turning off the water.为了逃避挨骂，那个淘气的为了逃避挨骂，那个淘气的男孩男孩 没关水龙头就没关水龙头就跑了跑了。 第二步：找出修饰成分，第二步

7、：找出修饰成分， 添加修饰成分添加修饰成分高中英语作文讲解8 技技 巧巧1. 使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇可以衡量英语水平词汇可以衡量英语水平丰富的句式可以使文章增丰富的句式可以使文章增色生辉色生辉 。恰当的连接词，恰当的连接词， 使文章有使文章有“英语味英语味” ，上下衔接自，上下衔接自然。然。2. 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式高中英语作文讲解91. 短语优先：短语优先：我们想要和平。我们想要和平。她决定好好学习。她决定好好学习。We look forward to /call on peace.一、怎样使用较高级词汇一、怎样使用较高级词汇W

8、e want peace.She decided to study hard.She was determined to devote herself to studying.高中英语作文讲解102. 弃旧取新弃旧取新: There is a temple on top of the mountain. There is a clean river in the city一、怎样使用较高级词汇一、怎样使用较高级词汇A clean river winds through the city.On top of the mountain stands a temple.高中英语作文讲解111. Su

9、ddenly I thought of a good idea. 2. You can find my house easily.3. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 4. What we can do is to study hard. 5. The teacher suggested that we should pay attention to grammar. 一、怎样使用较高级的词汇一、怎样使用较高级的词汇A good idea suddenly occurred to me. Youll have no trouble f

10、inding my house. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.What we can do is to devote ourselves to study. The teacher gave us a suggestion that we should attach great importance to grammar. 高中英语作文讲解121. 感叹句感叹句 How happy I was when I received your letter!2. 倒装句倒装句 Not only can it help you to form

11、the good habit of studying English but also it can improve your writing ability and skills.3. 省略句省略句 While walking the dog, I witnessed a car accident. 二二. .如何使用较丰富的句式如何使用较丰富的句式 高中英语作文讲解134. it做形式主语或宾语做形式主语或宾语 It is of great benefit to keep diaries every day.5. 定语从句定语从句In my spare time, I regularly

12、take part in the English corner, where I can express myself freely. 6. 名词性从句名词性从句What is the most important is that I often surf onan English website -Enjoy Reading. 高中英语作文讲解146. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much. （使用名词性从句）（使用名词性从句）7. He didnt realize the truth until he came back. (使用强调

13、句型使用强调句型) 8. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词使用过去分词)9. When you realize the importance of foreign languages, you can learn them well. (使用倒装句使用倒装句)10. He lay on the ground and his eyes were fixed on the ceiling. （使用（使用with复合结构）复合结构） What surprises him is that the litt

14、le girl knows so much.二、二、怎样使用较丰富的句式怎样使用较丰富的句式 It was not until he came back that he realized the truth.She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.Only when you realize the importance of foreign languages can you learn them well.He lay on the ground with his eyes fixed on the ceiling.高中英语作

15、文讲解15 11. His mother lost work and his father was put into prison. 三、怎样巧妙使用关联词三、怎样巧妙使用关联词His mother lost work, and to make things worse, his father was put into prison.高中英语作文讲解16 可以使文章衔接紧凑，有可以使文章衔接紧凑，有“英语味英语味”的一些关联的一些关联词词(1) 表示对比的连接词表示对比的连接词 : on the contrary(2) 表示时间的连接词表示时间的连接词: in the meanwhile，af

16、terwards, eventually，in the end， (3) 表示顺序的连接词表示顺序的连接词: first of all， to begin with， last but not the least (4) 表示递进的连接词表示递进的连接词 : what is more， in addition(5) 表示原因的连接词表示原因的连接词: due to， thanks to， owing to(6) 用于总结的连接词用于总结的连接词 : on the whole， in a word， in brief， (7) 表达个人观点的短语表达个人观点的短语: As far as Im concerned, in ones opinion/ view三、怎样巧妙使用关联词三、怎样巧妙使用关联词高中英语作文讲解17可以使文章衔接紧凑，有可以使文章衔接紧凑，有“英语味英语味”的一些关联的一些关联词词(1) 正相反正相反(2) 在此期间在此期间 (3)后来后来(4)起初，首先起初，首先(5)另外，还有另外，还有(6)因为，由于，多亏因为，由于，多亏 (7)从整体上来说从整体上来说 (8) 以我之见以我之见 on the