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1、城区公开课如何写议论文的summary1task-writing how to write the summary of an arguementation如何写议论文的概括段如何写议论文的概括段城区公开课如何写议论文的summary2step 1读写任务概括段的读写任务概括段的命题特点与要求命题特点与要求 即即概括概括给出材料给出材料文章的主旨文章的主旨, 要要用自己的话用自己的话用用30个字左右个字左右 (26-38) “改写改写”给出文章的给出文章的主要内容，主要内容，不能直接照抄原文不能直接照抄原文中的句子，中的句子，也也不能增加与原文无关的信息不能增加与原文无关的信息.城区公开课如何

2、写议论文的summary3概括段的评分标准 概括概括( 满分满分5分分 ) 1. 完全不理解，照抄原文完全不理解，照抄原文(0分分) 2. 死板机械地抄，不改变原文顺序死板机械地抄，不改变原文顺序(1分分) 3. 改变主语或宾语的抄为主改变主语或宾语的抄为主(2分分) (灵活地抄灵活地抄) 4. 稍为改动总体的抄稍为改动总体的抄(3分分) 5. 改变句子、用词，重新排列组织改变句子、用词，重新排列组织(45分分) (字数字数30左右左右)城区公开课如何写议论文的summary4 getting up early has been regard as a good habit since anc

3、ient times. many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. so, getting up early is of great importance to us all. in fact, morning is the best time of a day. in the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best

4、 conditions. many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. if we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. also we will have enoug

5、h time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. however, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. if we stick to getting up early every day, we wi

6、ll certainly benefit a lot from it.城区公开课如何写议论文的summary51. 论点论点 (the topic sentence):getting up early /a good habit /of great importance 2. 论据论据 (supporting sentences) 1)1) a a better memory better memory 2) a healthier body 2) a healthier body 3) a better preparation for the day 3) a better preparat

7、ion for the day3.结论结论 (conclusion).a good habit / benefit a lot/ benefit a lot 城区公开课如何写议论文的summary6 in the passage, the author holds the view that getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot, including a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.

8、 (37 words) 这类文章概括段常用的开头用语这类文章概括段常用的开头用语a: in the passage, the author holds the view that + 从句从句.b: the passage gives the view that + 从句从句城区公开课如何写议论文的summary71. 如何找论点、论据、（结论）如何找论点、论据、（结论） ？1）论点论点（首段或尾段的首句或尾句，首段或尾段的首句或尾句， 若若 在在 文中或段落文中或段落中中, 常有提示词：常有提示词：however, but） 2）论据论据 （中间各段落首句，常有提示词：中间各段落首句，常有提

9、示词： firstly/secondly/besides/whats more/finally） 3）结论结论 （尾段首句或尾句，常有提示词：尾段首句或尾句，常有提示词： in short/ in a word/ so / therefore ）城区公开课如何写议论文的summary8 1. 题材：议论文题材：议论文 2. 文章结构：文章结构： 论点论点+ 3+ 3个论据个论据 + + 结论结论 ( (总总-分分-总总) ) 3. 议论文概括段的要素：议论文概括段的要素： 三要素：三要素：论点、论据和结论论点、论据和结论 城区公开课如何写议论文的summary9 2. 如何改写如何改写 ski

10、ll 1: 用同义词，词性变化或不同句式替换用同义词，词性变化或不同句式替换 skill 2: 避免重复避免重复, 删掉细节删掉细节 skill 3: 运用短而精的连词。运用短而精的连词。如如but, and, so, however, because, therefore, besides, including, such as , not only but等。等。a.1) driving a private car has a lot of disadvantages. 2) driving a private car has _ .b. 1) watching tv is educati

11、onal. it is a good way to help us relax by watching tv. 2) watching tv can not only _ us, _ make us _.c. getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot, _ a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day. many shortcomingsincluding/ such as educatebutrel

12、axed城区公开课如何写议论文的summary10passage 1城区公开课如何写议论文的summary11 although big cities provide people with many conveniences, they certainly have their own disadvantages. traffic is the first and often the most serious problem. the majority of people spend a great deal of time on their way to work or coming ba

13、ck from work. during the rush time, all the streets are jammed with packed buses and endless lines of bicycles and cars, and avoidable accidents occur, resulting in broken limbs and traffic deaths. air pollution comes second. factories and moving vehicles are constantly giving off smoke and harmful

14、gases. there is no way to get fresh air except to go out of the city on weekends or holidays. if the weather is bad, youll fine the whole city overcast with smog. as a result, pollution induces diseases are now a common occurrence. however, noise and violence are to be found in every big city and th

15、e situation seems to get worse year by year. in short, life in big cities is rather unnatural and unhealthy. they certainly have their own disadvantages. traffic is the first and often the most serious problemair pollution comes second however, noise and violence are to be found in everybig city and

16、 the situation seems to get worse year by yearin short, life in big cities is rather unnatural and unhealthy.城区公开课如何写议论文的summary12 用自己的话改写论点、论据用自己的话改写论点、论据 论点：论点： although big cities provide people with many conveniences, they certainly have their own disadvantages 论据论据1： traffic is the first and of

17、ten the most serious problem. 论据论据2： air pollution comes second. 论据论据3： however, noise and violence are to be found in every big city and the situation seems to get worse year by year. 结论：结论： in short, life in big cities is rather unnatural and unhealthy.城区公开课如何写议论文的summary13 nowadays many people pr

18、efer to travel by air. this is because air travel has some advantages. firstly, airplane, the miracle created by man, is the fastest means of transport. secondly, traveling by air is convenient and comfortable. friendly air hostesses are affectionate and considerate. they look after passengers all t

19、he way to their destinations. moreover, on long distance flights there are films and music for people to entertain themselves. but it has some disadvantages, too. for one thing, air travel costs a great deal of money. nowadays many people prefer to travel by air. because air travel has some advantag

20、es firstlysecondlymoreover but ithas some disadvantages, too. for one thing城区公开课如何写议论文的summary14 the average chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares. so they prefer to take trains, which save a lot of money. for another, although passengers are assured of their safety, they are sti

21、ll worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk. foranother,they are still worried about it城区公开课如何写议论文的summary151. 1. 文章材料结构文章材料结构: : 主题句主题句+两种对立观点和论据两种对立观点和论据(理由理由)2. 应该概括的内容应该概括的内容: 主题句主题句, 两种对立观点和各自的理由两种对立观点和各自的理由3. 3. 这类文章概括段这类文章概括段常用模板常用模板 the passage sho

22、ws us two kinds of different views of +主题主题. some think +(观点观点1.) +理由理由. but some think + (观点观点2) +理由理由审题审题城区公开课如何写议论文的summary16 主题主题: people travel by air 正面观点正面观点: air travel has some advantages 理由理由: fastest means of transport, convenient and comfortable 反面观点反面观点: air travel has some disadvantage

23、s 理由理由: costs a great deal of money, people worry about the safety 城区公开课如何写议论文的summary17 the passage shows us two kinds of different views of +主题主题. some think +(观点观点1.) +理由理由. but some think + (观点观点2) +理由理由 the passage shows us two kinds of different views of travelling by air. some think it is con

24、venient, comfortable and fast. but some think it is expensive and not so safe. (31words) the passage tells us that people choose to travel by air for its convenience ,comfort and fast speed. but there are also some disadvantages , for example it is expensive and not so safe. (33words)城区公开课如何写议论文的sum

25、mary18passage 3城区公开课如何写议论文的summary19 nowadays some middle school students are crazy about going to study abroad. actually when reading a newspaper, one can never fail to notice many ads recruiting students who need help to prepare for the interview to go abroad. studying abroad is the best way of se

26、lf-fulfillment, because these students think they can get valuable experience under a totally different environment. for example, the science students can work towards their degree in better-equipped labs and have easy access to larger amount of information. nowadays some middle school students are

27、crazy about going to study abroadthese students think they can get valuableexperience under a totally differentenvironment.城区公开课如何写议论文的summary20 however, also some students are not so keen on studying abroad. what they think is that the economic situation in china keeps on changing for better, there

28、 will surely be enough chances for anyone both competent and knowledgeable. and with so many colleges and universities in china which provide excellent education for their students, the strong-willed students can always realize their dreams while at the same time they do not have to spend as much money as their friends who study abroad. however, also some students ar