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1、.1 writing .2.3how dou you describe ones fear 1. desperate and hopless, i had no choice but to sit in the darkness, hoping that someone would come to my rescue.2. hearing some strange sound, i stood still, trembling thith fear/ in terror.3 so nervous was i that i could clearly hear my heart pounding

2、/beating wildly.4. my hands began to sweat and my mouth dry. i wanted to scream at the top of my mouth. 5.my mind went blank and my knees were shaking.6.the terrifying scene me.4retell the storyask 6 basic questions:whowhenwherewhatwhyhow.5climax (the turning point)falling action (which helps probem

3、 solved)resolution(ending)story mapthemes setting(time / place / character)rising action（which makes problem worse）climax (the turning point)falling action (which helps probem solved)resolution(ending).6.7find clues1.the given passage: find sentences that describe the main character. tip 1: make ful

4、l use of the given information; pay attention to the vivid describtion which you can use in your own writing.i was frightened at the jungle while old mali was more experenced. therefore, i can count on him when i was in trouble.8find clues1. the given words:classify: tip 2:choose the key words cover

5、ing the most important information, such as the main characters and the main objects.jungle,old mali,night,learn,fast asleep,fire,scream,noises,imaginarynouns: jungle, old mali, night, fire, noisesverb: learn, fast asleeep, screamadjective: dark, imaginary.9find clues3. the given sentences:para 1: p

6、ara 2:i was going to see if there was a wild animal beside the fire.old malis quiet calm voice made me feel better.10infer the developmentpara 1: para 2:i was going to see if there was a wild animal beside the fire.old malis quiet calm voice made me feel better.tip 2:by raising questions on your own

7、 you can peoduce more details of the development of the story.what did mali say to me?is there a real wild animal?what was it like?how did i react?how did we solve the animal problem?what on earth was the animal?after i felt better, what would i do?.11version:para 2:tip : the last sentence of the pa

8、ra 1 should be naturally connected with para 2, otherwise it may looks trange .12version:para 2:tip : the last sentence of the para 1 should be naturally connected with para 2, otherwise it may looks trange .13first draft i thought i saw a scary animal. it was the uglest monster i had ever seen. i w

9、as nearly frightened to death. it was at that momet that old mali comforted me. the wild animal turned out to be the shade of the trees. old mali understood me and told me nothing to worry about. then i relaxed and fell asleep.14revise and polish1._i approached the burning fire _i might have seen a

10、fierce animal,with sharp teeth _(我刚一靠近火堆，我就好像看见了一只凶猛的野兽，长着尖锐的牙齿，似乎眨眼间就能吞掉一切）2.我从没见过这么恐怖的怪物。3._(如此恐惧）was i that i stood still/was frozen. 大脑一片空白，心跳加速。_.4.我正要尖叫，这时我听到温和的声音传来，“怎么了”。i turned around and found mali_(关切地看着我）5. _（即尴尬又紧张），i shared my absurd imagination with him. 6. after hearing/having heard

11、 my worry, mali gently comforted me,“ i assure you everything is ok.”hardly hadwhen as if it can swallow everything in a blink of an eye.never have i seen such a terrifying animal. i have never seen a more terrifying animalso frightenedmy mind went blank and my knees were shaking.i was about to scre

12、am at the top of my voice/with all my strength when i heard a soft voice,“are you ok?/whats the matter?”looking at me with concernembarassed and nervoustip : try to use various sentence structures to make your writing more vivid and less boring; advanced words and descriptions of mental state, envio

13、rnment and actions are necessary.15revise and polish1.we_(小心翼翼)to the fire，_(却发现除了树影什么都没有）2.i_(如释重负叹了口气）3.it was not until i returned to narmal that mali went to bed.not until i returned to normal did mali go to ded.4. relaxed and exhausted, i also fell asleep , dreaming that we had a great time exp

14、loring the fascinating jungle. .16the tipstip 1:choose the key words covering the most important information, such as the main characters and the main objects.tip 2: make full use of the given information; pay attention to the vivid describtion which you can use in your own writing.tip 3:by raising

15、questions on your own you can peoduce more details of the development of the story.tip 4: try to use various sentence structures to make your writing more vivid and less boring; advanced words and descriptions of mental state, enviornment and actions are necessary.tip 5 : the last sentence of the pa

16、ra 1 should be naturally connected with para 2, otherwise it may looks trange .17the major problems 软伤：1.情节不合理，思维跳跃过大，与所给上文不契合。2情节太简单，寥寥数语，缺乏环境动作描写和人物内心的描述3没有结局4.语言太简单，不够生动具体。a lack of accurate understanding of the given passage and reasonable imagination. .18the major problems 硬伤：1.字迹潦草，卷面不整洁2拼写错误，语法错误，句子结构混乱（时态，词汇）3. chinglish .19practice makes perfectmy first advice is that you great attention to your handwriting, which is of vital importance to your grade.besides, i recommend that you famous english novels in your spare time. only in this way can you improve your e