书面表达申请信

1、2017 届高三书面表达专项训练四：申请信书面表达解题步骤：1 、审：审定体裁、题材、人 称、时态、结构等；2 、编：编写要点，按顺序列出；3 、写：连词成句，连句成文；4 、查：查内容，查格式， 查语法，查书写等。 申请信审题提示：1 、审定体裁、题材：书信、申请2 、审定人称：第一和第二人称3 、审定时态：现在时，将来时4 、审定要点：认识，优势，计划5 、审定结构：可分为三或四段 申请信篇章结构设计：第一段：自我介绍，信息来源，写作目的 第二、（三）段：申请理由及自身所具备的长处与优点 结束段：期望（要表达出真诚与委婉）常用表达法：第一段：自我介绍，信息来源，写作目的I read wit

2、h interest your advertisement and would like to take up thechallenge as I am very interested in your advertisement forI am writing to apply forI wish to apply for the position ofI am writing to express my interest inI am very interested in the possibilities of working with your club as a teacher ass

3、istant.第二、（三）段：申请理由及自身所具备的长处与优点（ Main body ： How to show your advantages ability, good qualities, experience, personality, motivation, etc.）1. I have a good command of 很好地掌握了2. I have an intimate knowledge of非常熟悉3. I am a very diligent studentwith a nice character and I am used to workingas part of

4、ateam.4. I have two years experience as 5. I have more than years of practical experience.6. I obtained practical training in all aspects of7. I am outgoing and open-minded, which makes me.8. I am highly competent and self-motivated towork in 9. I have received quite a number of honours.10. I believ

5、e I have the qualifications and experience for the position.11. I think I am competent to meet your requirements.12. With good academic performance and sufficient practical experience, I feel I am the rightperson you are looking for.结束段：期望（要表达出真诚与委婉）1. I should be glad to have a personal interview.2

6、. I am looking forward to your reply.3. I will appreciate it if you give me an interview.4. I should be grateful if I can get this opportunity.5. I wonder if it is possible for you to6. Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to meeting you in the nearFuture. 高考真题范例： （ 1） 2006

7、 年全国卷 II 英语作文假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办， 现正在招募志愿者， 你希望 成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括： 1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历2. 个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况3. 承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数 100左右，开头语已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； Dear Sir / Madam:My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I was quite excited

8、when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good int

9、erpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（ 2） 2010 年天津卷假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。 你校拟选拔一些优秀学生， 利用暑期到晨曦希望 小学为学生辅导英语。 你希望参加此活动。 请根据以下提示， 用英语给校评选组写一封申 请信：对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等） 个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等） 注意：

10、 1. 词数不少于 100； 2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 参考词汇：晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope SchoolDear Sir or Madam,I m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and the high-sc

11、hool student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.I think I am qualified for being the pupils English coach, because I havegood character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That s why I apply for the position. I hope I can join the instructive activity.My p

12、lan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What s more important is to stimulate their interestsinlearning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.Yours sincerely,Li Hua （ 3） 2012 年全国卷 I假

13、定你是李华，从互联网 （the Internet） 上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡 （Singapore） 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括 :1. 自我介绍 （ 包括英语能力 ） 2. 参加意图 （ 介绍中国、 了解其他国家 ） 3. 希望获准。 注意 : 1. 词数 100 左右 ; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ;3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好 Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the su

14、mmer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries abou

15、t China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply! Best regardsYours,Li Hua( 4) 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报暑假招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘， 请按下列要点给报社写一封申请信。1. 表示感兴趣 2. 说明优势：知识能力、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历3. 希望得到回复注意： 1.词数： 100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Dea

16、r Sir or Madam,I m a student from Xinhua Middle School. I m glad to learn that you want a few part- time English reporters. I m quite interested in it.I think I m fit for the job. As a student, I ve read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields. I m fond of English and do well in both speaking a

17、ndwriti ng. Besides, I m easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. So I m sure I can do the job well if I get the position.I m looking forward to your reply.YoursfaithfullyLi Hua 高分书面表达自带哪些特征？(资深阅卷老师建议) 1

18、. 内容充实，要点全面考生可尝试下面几个步骤来避免审题偏差或遗漏要点：(1) 通读提示要求，明确体裁、人称和时态三大要素。(2) 圈划出内容要点，按一定顺序用数字编好号。同时，要注意内容要点不一定全在内容 提示中，可能会散布在书面表达要求及注意事项中。(3) 完成草稿后，再次核对所有内容要点，查漏补缺。2. 单词书写要正确，避免犯低级错误 首先考生在平时学习中要重视词的拼写，要养成边读、边记忆、边写的“手、脑、眼” 并用的好习惯。其次学会归纳整理单词，通过比较，强化记忆。最后务必把考试说明中的重要单词 背诵出和默写出，并做到灵活运用。3. 注重句型积累，打好语法基础 考生应该把简单句的五种句型

19、结构熟记，另外，根据书面表达评分标准，语法结构的 丰富性是决定一篇优秀文章的关键。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、 名词性从句、非谓语动词、虚拟语气等交替使用，可使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好 地体现出考生语言运用能力。4. 注意衔接紧凑，加强文章连贯性要想写出一篇好文章，提高文章档次，应增强文章逻辑性、可读性。考生在平时要注 意连接词的积累， 并尽量多地训练把简单句连成复杂句， 把不相关的几个句子用连词连接 ; 在平时的写作中，要随时提醒自己用连接词连接句子与句子、段落与段落 ; 多阅读一些范 文，看文中如何把连接词用得恰到好处。5. 尽量使用高级词汇高级词汇的使用是得高分必

20、备条件之一， 能显示出考生深厚的语言功底。 何为高级词汇 呢?就是多使用一些生动、具体、形象的词语，具体原则如下：(1) 尽量用短语代替单词。这可反映出考生有较强的语言运用能力，避免词语单调乏味。如：Can you bear his rudeness? 可改为：Can you put up with/ live with his rudeness?(2) 用新学的词汇代替以前学的词汇，换句话说，尽量用别人少用的词汇。这样可做到张 扬个性，标新立异。如： There is a mistake in your homework. 可改为： There exists a mistake in you

21、r homework.(3) 多用情感方面的词语。 如：luckily ，fortunately ， really ， obviously ， to be honest ， wholeheartedly 等。这类词语的使用可增强文章的醒目性和感染力，易引起阅卷老师 的共鸣。假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构MidSenior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员， 负责学员课间服务事项。 请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求 职信。ASSISITANTS WANTEDValuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English Their work is to tend the senior students during the breakRequirements attached： 1 Good at English 2Experienced priorityContact us by e-m