高考英语基础写作正反观点

1、基础写作评分标准基础写作评分标准 Criteria Marks Content（内容）（内容） (是否包括所有提示要点是否包括所有提示要点, 是否用是否用5句话表句话表 达全文）达全文） Language（语言）（语言） (观点表达是否清晰、明确，句子是否得观点表达是否清晰、明确，句子是否得 当当) Coherence（连贯）（连贯） （是否用恰当的连词，副词，短语来衔接（是否用恰当的连词，副词，短语来衔接 句子）句子） 第一种：第一种： 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己 的看法。的看法。 1 有一些人认为有一些人认为 2 另一些人认为另一些人认为 3 我的看法

2、我的看法 如何写好正反观点的文章？如何写好正反观点的文章？ Writing structure -How to write an essay (议论短文议论短文) ( In my opinion，I think-/ As for me, I think-/ Personally, I think -. ) ( There are different opinions about whether-.) ( Some people think that -. Whats more/Moreover-. However, other people hold the opposite opinion

3、that-. and worse still-. ) The theme of the essay (陈述议论的主题陈述议论的主题) Opinion 1 Opinion 2 Reasons 1,2 Reasons 1,2 Personal opinion 注意事项：注意事项： 条理要清晰，观点明确；条理要清晰，观点明确； 文章必须包括所有提示要点，同时切记用文章必须包括所有提示要点，同时切记用5句连篇；句连篇； 运用适当的连词，副词，短语等来衔接句子；运用适当的连词，副词，短语等来衔接句子； 注意时态，注意时态，议论文形式还是以现在时为主议论文形式还是以现在时为主. 对立观点式议论短文的基础对

4、立观点式议论短文的基础写作模板写作模板： There are different opinions about whether_. Some people think that _. Whats more/Moreover/Furthermore _. However, others hold the opposite opinion that_, and worse still， _.As for me/In my opinion / Personally, I think that_. 表示不同观点的套语表示不同观点的套语 总起总起: Different people hold diffe

5、rent opinions. People have taken different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. 1.学会使用恰当的过渡词 罗列观点时常用的过渡词罗列观点时常用的过渡词: 1.Firstly ; Secondly; Thirdly; 2.Besides; In addition; 3.Whats more; Moreover; Furthermore; 4.At last; Finally; Eventually; 表转折时常用过渡词表转折时常用过渡词句句 1.On the

6、other hand; 2.However; 3.On the contrary; 4.Every coin has two sides 二、学会使用正确的句型陈述观点: 1. Some people say students should 2. Some people are for the idea that 3. Some people hold the view that 1. Some people say students shouldnt 2. Some people are against the idea that 3. Some people dont agree, the

7、y think 正方观点陈述常用句型正方观点陈述常用句型: 反方反方正方观点陈述常用句型正方观点陈述常用句型 : 不同观点之间的衔接不同观点之间的衔接: On the contrary, others hold a different view. On the other hand, people object to the reason that . 对比观点题型常用句型：对比观点题型常用句型： (综合综合) There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people think that while others think that The

8、y hold their view for the reason of /that while others think in the following reason. First, ,Secondly(besides),Thirdly(finally). From my point of view, / In my opinion, / As for me, (我的观点) 第二种：第二种： 给出一个观点，要求考生给出一个观点，要求考生 反对这一观点反对这一观点 Some people believe that -（观（观 点一）点一）. For example, they think -

9、-（举例说明）（举例说明）And it will bring them - -(为他们带来的好处为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,-(我不同意我不同意 该看法的理由一该看法的理由一). For another thing, - (反对的理由之二反对的理由之二) From what I have said, I agree to the thought that -(我对文章所讨论主题的看法我对文章所讨论主题的看法) Task Writing ?人们对网上购物持有

10、不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于网上人们对网上购物持有不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于网上 购物的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达你的看法。购物的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达你的看法。 赞成的理由赞成的理由反对的理由反对的理由自己的看法自己的看法 1 1网上购物更方便，省时网上购物更方便，省时 2 2人们可以在网上买到各人们可以在网上买到各 种各样的东西，而且价格种各样的东西，而且价格 也较便宜也较便宜. 3 3是一种时尚而新潮的购是一种时尚而新潮的购 物方式物方式 1 1无法预先体验商品无法预先体验商品 2 2人们容易上当受骗，因人们容易上当受骗，因 为很难确保商品的质量为很难确保商品的质量

11、 写作内容写作内容 1文章必须包括所有提示要点文章必须包括所有提示要点, 但不要逐条译成英语但不要逐条译成英语; 2请根据以上提示，请根据以上提示， 最后谈谈你的观点；最后谈谈你的观点； 写作要求写作要求 只能用只能用5个句子表达全部的内容。个句子表达全部的内容。 词汇词汇: 商品商品: goodsgoods 体验体验: : experienceexperience 预先：预先： in advancein advance 上当受骗上当受骗: be cheated: be cheated 1 1 网上购物更方便，省时网上购物更方便，省时. . 2 2 人们可以在网上买到各种各样的东西，而且价格也

12、较便宜人们可以在网上买到各种各样的东西，而且价格也较便宜. . 3 3 是一种时尚而新潮的购物方式是一种时尚而新潮的购物方式. . 4 4 无法预先体验商品无法预先体验商品. . 5 5 人们容易上当受骗人们容易上当受骗, ,因为很难确保商品的质量因为很难确保商品的质量. . 1.句子翻译：句子翻译： Shopping online is more convenient and it can help people to save much time. People can buy all kinds of things at a lower price on the Internet. It

13、 is a fashionable and new way of shopping. People cant experience the goods in advance. People are easy to be cheated, because it is difficult to make sure of / guarantee the quality of goods. 参考范文：参考范文： There are different opinions about whether people should go shopping online. Some people think t

14、hat shopping online is more convenient and it can help people to save much time and that people can shop for a variety of things at a lower price on the Internet. Whats more, It is a fashionable and new way of shopping. However, others hold the opposite opinion that people cant experience the goods

15、in advance，and worse still they are easy to be cheated, because it is difficult to make sure of / guarantee the quality of the goods. As for me, I think that people could be more enjoyable when shopping online carefully. 写作训练： 写作内容写作内容 根据以上内容，写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文。根据以上内容，写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文。 介绍正反两方观点；介绍正反两方观点；

16、表达自己的看法。表达自己的看法。 写作要求写作要求 只能使用只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；个句子表达全部的内容； 已给出的句子不包括在五句话中；已给出的句子不包括在五句话中； 不要逐字逐句翻译所给信息。不要逐字逐句翻译所给信息。 评分标准评分标准 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 赞成的理由：赞成的理由：反对的理由：反对的理由：你的看法你的看法 广交朋友，可自广交朋友，可自 由表达思想，利由表达思想，利 于外语学习于外语学习 浪费时间，影响浪费时间，影响 学习，可能上当学习，可能上当 受骗受骗 ？ 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。以下是正反

17、两方所人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。以下是正反两方所 持观点。持观点。 Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps us make friends by chatting on line so that students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, think s

18、tudents should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study; besides, some students get cheated on line. It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. 近几年，近几年，“考生该不该复读？考生该不该复读？”这一话题一直为社会这一话

19、题一直为社会 各界所关注。下表是某班同学就此问题的讨论结果，各界所关注。下表是某班同学就此问题的讨论结果， 请你给某英文报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的请你给某英文报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的 情况情况,并写出你的观点并写出你的观点 多数同学认为多数同学认为少数同学认为少数同学认为 1.不该复读不该复读 2.对于应届生不公平对于应届生不公平 3.增加家庭经济负担增加家庭经济负担 4.精神压力大，易出精神压力大，易出 问题问题 1.应该复读应该复读 2.可以考上理想的大可以考上理想的大 学学 3.上何种大学是人生上何种大学是人生 重要的转折点，直接重要的转折点，直接 影响将来的就业影响将来的就业

20、 Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether students should retake classes after failing the entrance examination. Most of the students are against the idea of retaking classes. They think it is unfair for the students who take the exam for the first time. Beside

21、s, it also adds to the family burden. Whats more, they are different from those taking the exam for the first time, for they have failed once. So, they have much more mental pressure and there is often something wrong with many of them. On the other hand, some think that it can be done because throu

22、gh one-year hard work, they can get a chance to enter their satisfactory university. Above all, what kind of the university to enter will directly affects their future employment. In my opinion, everyone can be successful in life so long as he tries his best, whether or not he can go to college. You

23、rs truly, Li Hua 据报道，一位岁的少年救起了一名落水儿童，据报道，一位岁的少年救起了一名落水儿童， 此事在当地引起了强烈反响你班同学就此事在当地引起了强烈反响你班同学就“少年见少年见 义勇为行为是否应该提倡义勇为行为是否应该提倡”为主题展开了讨论请为主题展开了讨论请 你根据下表提供的信息写一篇短文，客观的介绍讨你根据下表提供的信息写一篇短文，客观的介绍讨 论情况并说明你的观点论情况并说明你的观点 有些同学赞成有些同学赞成有些同学反对有些同学反对 .见义勇为是中华民族的见义勇为是中华民族的 传统美德，应给予鼓励；传统美德，应给予鼓励； .会鼓励更多的英雄出现；会鼓励更多的英雄出现

24、； .促使社会变得更美好促使社会变得更美好 .少年的行为不理智；少年的行为不理智； .少年很有可能牺牲自少年很有可能牺牲自 己的生命；己的生命； .用其他方法来救这个用其他方法来救这个 儿童，如丢块木头给落儿童，如丢块木头给落 水儿童，喊大人帮忙水儿童，喊大人帮忙 写前热身：写前热身： 翻译下列短语和句子：翻译下列短语和句子： .见义勇为见义勇为 .中华民族的传统美德中华民族的传统美德 .使变得更美好使变得更美好 鼓励某人做某事鼓励某人做某事 .某人做某事不理智某人做某事不理智 .少年很有可能牺牲自己的生命少年很有可能牺牲自己的生命 .我们可以用其他方法来做这件事我们可以用其他方法来做这件事 fight for a just cause the traditional virtues of the Chinese people It is unwise for sb to do sth It is likely/possible that We can do it in other ways . ma