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5、acular mountains, i stood atop new hampshires presidential range awestruck by natures beauty. immediately, i realized that i must dedicate my life to understanding the causes of the universes beauty. in addition, the hike taught me several valuable lessons that will allow me to increase my understan

6、ding through scientific research. although the first few miles of the hike up mt. madison did not offer fantastic views, the vistas became spectacular once i climbed above tree line. immediately, i sensed that understanding the natural world parallels climbing a mountain. to reach my goal of total c

7、omprehension of natural phenomena, i realized that i must begin with knowledge that may be uninteresting by itself. however, this knowledge will form the foundation of an accurate view of the universe. much like every step while hiking leads the hiker nearer the mountain peak, all knowledge leads th

8、e scientist nearer total understanding. above tree line, the barrenness and silence of the hike taught me that individuals must have their own direction. all hikers know that they must carry complete maps to reach their destinations; they do not allow others to hold their maps for them. similarly, s

9、urrounded only by mountaintops, sky, and silence, i recognized the need to remain individually focused on my lifes goal of understanding the physical universe. at the summit, the view of the surrounding mountain range is spectacular. the panorama offers a view of hills and smaller mountains. some pe

10、ople during their lives climb many small hills. however, to have the most accurate view of the world, i must be dedicated to climbing the biggest mountains i can find. too often people simply hike across a flat valley without ascending because they content themselves with the scenery. the mountain s

11、howed me that i cannot content myself with the scenery. when night fell upon the summit, i stared at the slowly appearing stars until they completely filled the night sky. despite the windy conditions and below freezing temperatures, i could not tear myself away from the awe-inspiring beauty of the

12、cosmos. similarly, despite the frustration and difficulties inherent in scientific study, i cannot retreat from my goal of universal understanding. when observing saturns rising, the milky way cloud, and the perseid meteor shower, i simultaneously felt a great sense of insignificance and purpose. ob

13、viously, earthly concerns are insignificant to the rest of the universe. however, i experienced the overriding need to understand the origins and causes of these phenomena. the hike also strengthened my resolve to climb the mountain of knowledge while still taking time to gaze at the wondrous scener

14、y. only then can the beauty of the universe and the study of science be purposefully united. attaining this union is my lifelong goal. (business school applicant) 2 subject: succesful nyu stern applicant think about the decisions you have made in your life. describe the following:past: what choices

15、have you made that led you to your current position?present: why is a stern mba necessary at this point in your life?future: what is your desired position upon graduation from the stern school?i like options, i like security, and i like power. with these wants, i knew at a very early age that i woul

16、d enter business and thus i attended a college that specializes in the subject. in my first position out of school, i was hired by dunhill equities as a cold-caller电话营业员. after several weeks of being hung up on by angry prospects, i decided that this career path would not lead me to success. i then

17、moved within the firm to a position as sales assistant. while this was by no means my dream job, i learned a tremendous amount about business, and i gained useful exposure to the world of finance. unfortunately, the company hit a period of instability, and after ten months i transferred with my boss

18、 to coleman & company. thirteen months later, that company also began to fail, and i began to search for another path to advancement. with two strikes against me, i hit a home run and was hired by sanford bernstein into a challenging job with limitless opportunity for growth.after almost three years

19、 at bernstein, i am once again seeking career advancement. my education and work experience have provided me with an excellent introduction to business, and they have sparked my interest in finance. taking into consideration my foundation and my interests, graduate business school is the next logica

20、l step. at this point in my life, i consider a stern mba to be necessary since i need to gain a broader understanding of finance and to sharpen my analytical skills in order to be successful in corporate finance. sterns mba program will allow me to concentrate in finance, strengthen my global busine

21、ss perspective, and provide me with the opportunity to study with and learn from people with varied backgrounds. the schools location in the financial capital of the world and in one of the most diverse cities in the world also suits me perfectly.aside from advancing my career, i would also like to

22、develop personally. in college i did not join many clubs or organizations, and i did not participate in sports. instead, i spent all my time studying, working, or dealing with family issues. having been away from home and living in new york city for four years, i feel the need to make a name for mys

23、elf and to develop a meaningful social life. i want to take advantage of the many benefits that extracurricular activities offer, and i want to be involved in the stern community.upon graduation from the stern school, i will seek a position as an associate within the corporate finance department of

24、a large, wall street, investment-banking firm. in three to five years, once i have become adept in financial analyses, drafting prospectuses, preparing business presentations and other financial advisory work, i will move into a senior associate position. here i will develop my abilities to anticipa

25、te client needs and to engineer solutions that address these needs. in approximately 10 years, i will have the experience necessary to take on upper-level management responsibilities.3. describe yourself to your mba classmates. (you may use any method to convey your message: words, illustrations, et

26、c.)i grew up in a small fishing village in maine, surrounded by family. expectations and aspirations are limited in such an environment. i could have made a living exploiting the sea, but chose to do similar work as a corporate executive. although i have no siblings, my hometown contains over fifty

27、family members, and our agenda of family activities is always packed. most of my family is employed in the commercial fishing industry, which instilled in me at a very young age, the concept of work. at age eleven, i started babysitting and mowing lawns, and at the age of fifteen i applied for my lo

28、bster license. the first summer with my license, i took a job as a sternperson with a fellow female. we were the only two females out there, which was definitely an experience. when the lobstering season ended that year, i took a job at a grocery store bagging groceries. i saved enough money to buil

29、d a boat and to buy fifty lobster traps; i was on my way. the following summer i continued to work as a sternperson, and i also fished my own traps. i continued lobstering throughout the rest of high school and college, and it helped me finance my college education.in addition to being ambitious and

30、 motivated enough to put my heart into even mundane, low-level tasks, i am also extremely organized. this is one characteristic that has always received praise. i pay particular attention to detail, which i believe has contributed to my success thus far. i take pride in my work, and i look at it as

31、a representation of myself. in my position at sanford bernstein as a consultant liaison, i market my firm to the financial consulting community. maintaining the integrity of the firm is vital and errors are disastrous. when training new group members, i stress this point most thoroughly.i work in a

32、group that currently has six members. the group serves as a central source of information for the firm, and its success relies on an extraordinary amount of cooperation from each of us. as a senior member, i am able to contribute to the group in several ways including: training group members, contro

33、lling the quality of the groups output, managing and accurately completing multiple requests with short turnaround times, gathering and conveying information from senior investment professionals, collecting and calculating data, maintaining databases, overseeing projects aimed at making long-term im

34、provements to the groups processes, and strengthening my own foundation of knowledge to be used as a resource. recently, as the result of a manager leaving the firm, i have also taken on some of the managerial responsibilities for the group including prioritizing and delegating assignments.though i

35、am an excellent team player, in business school i would like to sharpen my managerial skills. i have found that i need to overcompensate for my “soft” appearance in order to get my point across. i hope to improve my negotiating skills and to gain more experience in getting group members to carry the

36、ir own weight. at the same time, i do not want to become a tyrant. to be effective, it is important for a manager to maintain the proper balance of power and compassion. only in this way, will i be able to lead a team of people to realizing the goals of a firm.4. (optional) please provide any additi

37、onal information that you would like to bring to the attention of the admission committee. if you are unable to submit a recommendation from a current employer, please give your reason here.to satisfy my desire for success, i must continue my education. of the six business schools to which i am appl

38、ying, the stern school is my first choice. i am very excited about entering an mba program that will allow me to focus on my interest in finance as well as provide me with the career possibilities and exposure to resources, such as networks and learning tools, which i do not currently have. at stern

39、, i know that my investment of time, energy, and money will be well rewarded. at this point in my life, i believe i have great potential to gain much from a business degree since i have been exposed to the business environment for the past eight and a half years. i now posses a strong foundation to

40、build upon, and i am ready to assume the rigors and challenges of the stern schools mba program.in addition to its academic program, the stern community is itself very appealing. the three undergraduate schools that i applied to were babson, bentley and bryant. babson college became my first choice

41、as soon as i visited its quaint campus and fell in love with the friendly atmosphere and cultural diversity. from someone coming from a small fishing village in maine, it was refreshing to be surrounded by family. living in new york city has broadened my exposure to include a fast-paced, career-mind

42、ed atmosphere. the combination of these characteristics at the stern school will provide me with an excellent learning environment, and i hope to attend stern for many of the same reasons i selected babson.i have provided three recommendations. one is from my former employer, andrew tzanides, with w

43、hom i worked closely for two years. another is from my current manager, gail landis, who joined my department in january of 1998. at that time, i also had a direct manager, catherine acosta. i had worked with cathy on a daily basis since i joined bernstein in may of 1996, and she is providing my thi

44、rd recommendation. due to the lack of growth opportunities in my position at the beginning of 1998, i was seeking employment elsewhere. the discrepancy between my goals and my education and work experience resulted in a very frustrating job search. i wanted to redirect my career from rfp writing to investment banking, but given my background, it was difficult. at this point, i