外研八下Module 3 Journey to space写作导引

1、【写作任务】英语课上，老师布置了探究性作业：让大家利用课余时间，通过书籍或网 络查阅有关火星的资料。假如你是王飞，周末你看了一本介绍火星的书。请你 写一篇英语短文向同学们介绍一下你所了解的火星。要求：语言准确，语法正确，80 词左右。提示词语： distance 距离【思路点拨】该写作任务要求同学们写一篇介绍火星的文章，体裁属于说明文。说明文 是以说明为主要表达方式来解说事物、阐明事理而给人知识的文章体裁。因此 同学们在写作过程中要注意文章的科学性和条理性。开头i have just read a new book about mars. .讲述火星的特征 . one of the plane

2、ts . four seasons . in the fourth . very cold .表达探究火星的决心mars is interesting, isnt it? .【学生习作】i have just read a new book about mars. do you want to know something about it?mars is one of the planets in the solar system. there are four seasons on mars. according to the distance from the sun, it is th

3、e fourth. the air on it is rather thin, so its very cold there. people still dont know whether there is life on mars.mars is interesting, isnt it? lets study mars together.【习作点评】1. 说明内容翔实、具体，连贯自然。2. 对火星特征的描述不是很完整、条理，将相关内容整合一下会更好。【习作改进】i have just read a new book about mars. do you want to learn some

4、thing about it?mars is one of the eight planets in the solar system. according to the distance from the sun (from near to far), it is the fourth. there are four seasons on mars. it is similar to the earth. the temperature on mars is about 30 lower than that on the earth. and the air is rather thin, so its very cold there. people still dont know whether there is li