高考历改错真题

1、短文改错参考答案20162012年各省市高考题A卷全国卷Passage 1 （2016 全国 I ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My un cle is the owner of a restaura nt close to that I l

2、ive.Though not very big，but theRestaura nt is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his successis honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cook in g.M

3、y uncle says that he n ever dreams beco ming rich in the short period of time .In stead, he hopes that our bus in ess will grow steady.答案thatMy un cle is the owner of a restaura nt close to where 丨 live.Though not very big ，M theRestaura nt is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers

4、 at meal times.Some people hadhon esteven h to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honestyEvery day heorusi ngmakes sure that fresh vegetablesa nd high quality oil are used for cook in g.My uncle says thathe n ever dreamsbeco ming rich inof / abouttheashort period of time .

5、In stead, he hopes thatoursteadybus in ess will grow.hissteadily1. that where 考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾语从句从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。2. 去掉but 考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词but连用。3. had have 考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。4. hones0 honesty 考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词 形式。5. or and 考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之

6、间为并列关系而非选择关系。6. using used 考查固定短语的用法。be used for“用来做”，为固定短语。7. 在dreams之后加上of或about 考查短语动词。固定短语 dream of/about （doing） sth的 意思是“梦想做某事”。8. the a 考查代词的用法。in a short period of time为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。9. our his 考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了 my uncle诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our改为his。10. steady steadily 考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。Passage 2 （2016

7、全国 n ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The summer holiday is comin g.My classmates and I are talk ing about how to do duri ng the holiday.

8、We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world .If we go on a trip abroad, we can broade n your view and gain kno wledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates sugges

9、t we can go to places of in terest n earb ythought that it is a good idea .It does not cost many, yet we can still lear n a lot.答案howThe summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking aboutwhOt to do during thechosetakeholiday.We can between staying at home anda trip.If we stay at home, it

10、 ischoosetak ingbutAcomfortable - there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about andtheyourkno wledgesworld .If we go on a trip abroad, we can broade nview and gain kno wledge we can notcanget from books.Some classmates suggest we 0/或Should帕 Places of interest nearby.It

11、hought . manythat it is a good idea .It does not cost， yet we can still lear n a lot.thi nkmuch 71. how what 考查疑问词的用法。我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。固定表达what todo，如果用how结构为how to do sth.2. chosen choose 考查动词形式。根据语法知识可知，情态动词can后要用动词原形。3. take taking 考查非谓语动词的用法。此处为between.and.结构，根据前面的staying at home可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保

12、持一致。4. but a nd 考查连词的用法。如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。根据句意可知，此 处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。5. world前加the 考查定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。6. yourour 考查形容词性物主代词的用法。根据前面的主语we可知，此处要用our，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。7. knowledgepknowledge 考查不可数名词的用法。knowledge为不可数名词，没有复数形式。8. 去掉can或can should 考查虚拟语气。suggest表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用 should do形式，should可以省略，故答案有

13、两种改法。9. thought think 考查一般现在时的用法。我认为这是一个好主意。根据上下文可知，此处并不是过去的看法，而是现在的看法。10. many much 考查代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。cost much花费很多。此处也可理解为much money的省略。Passage 3 （2016 全国川）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写

14、出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 .只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However, my parents didnseem to think such.They alwa

15、ys tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time,I ever felt my parents couldn t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from the m.I showed them I was in depe ndent by wear stra nge clothes.Now I am leav ing home to college.At last, I will be on my own , but I still want to have my parents to

16、turn to whenever need help.答案yearThe teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the worsebest and 花石 years in my life.At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make yourself,such_tellfreelyhoped I could be freedecisions by myself .However, my parents did

17、n t seem to think so.They always me what to do and how to do it.At one time , I ever felt my parents couldn t understand me so I wearfrom themshowed them I was independent by wearing strangetoclothes.Now I am leaving home 石 college.At last, I will be on my own , but I still want to havemy pare nts t

18、o turn to whe nevern eed help.【语篇导读】本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。1. year years 此处指1319岁的年龄，故用复数。2. worse worst 与前面的best并列，此处应用最高级。3. 去掉the at first固定短语。4. yourself myself 根据句意，此处指“我自己”。5. such so so指已经提到的事。6. tell told 此处应用过去时态。7. freelyfree 此处应用形容词作表语。8. wear wearing 此处用动名词作介词的宾语。9. tofor 固定搭配 leave for 去。10.

19、 whenever后加I whenever引导状语从句，从句缺少主语 I。Passage 4 （2015新课标全国I ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（戊用。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。When I was a child， I hoped to live in the city.

20、I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city ， but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately， on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already beco

21、me a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so we ll live to regret it.答案When I was a child， I hoped to live in the city.Ithi nkthoughtI would be happy there.Now I am

22、living in a city， but I miss my home inAthecountryside.There the air is cleanorandthethe development of industrialization, the environmentonmountains are green.Unfortunately whas been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a live to regret it.veryseriouslyser

23、iousproblem.Theairs乔 we breathe in is getting diEer and diEer.MuchManyrare ani malsfou ndare dying out.We must 彳丽 ways to protectyourour/the environment.If we fail to do sowell1. th ink thought 考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故 用一般过去时态。2. countryside前加the 考查冠词的用法。in the countryside 在乡村）为固定短语。3. or and

24、考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间 显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。4. onwith 考查介词的用法。with the development of.为一固定短语，意思是“随着的发展”。5. 去掉been 考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。6. seriously serious 考查形容词的用法。修饰名词 problem应当用形容词。7. airs air 考查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。8. MuchMany 考查代词的用法。a

25、nimals为可数名词复数，故用 many。9. foundfind 考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。10. your our/the 考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为 our/the才能使句意通顺。Passage 5 （2015新课标全国n ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面

26、写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。One day， little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.lt was very crowded.Tonysaw a toy on a shop window.He liked it very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time, he tur ned around and found where hi

27、s pare nts were miss in g.T ony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said “ How nice to see you again Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.答案pare ntOne day,

28、little Tony went to a shopping center with his parentJt was very crowded.Tonyonsaw a toy a shop window.He liked it so much that he quickly walked into the shop.Afterlookswhere .at the toy for some time，he turned around and foundhis parents werelooki ngthat或 whereKmissing.Tony was scared andto cry.A

29、woman saw him crying and 覽閉 him to waita入“outside the shop.Five minutes late，Tony sawparents.Mom said,How nice to see youagain! Dad and I wereterribleterriblyworried.Tony promised her that this would n ever happe n aga in.1. pare nt pare nts 考查名词复数。由第五句中的his pare nts were missi ng.可知此处应当用复数形式。2. oni

30、n 考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。3. very so 考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so.that.为固定句型，意思是“如此以至于”4. looks looking 考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he, he与look at之间为逻辑 上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。5 .去掉where或where that 考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词 found之后为宾语从句， 从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将 where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。6. begur bega n 考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构

31、可知，beg in与was scared并列，因 此，要用一般过去时。7. telling told 考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw构成并列谓语。故改用told。8. athe 考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。9. saw后加his 考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents前加上 与主语相一致的物主代词。10. terribleterribly 考查副词的用法。形容词 worried之前要用副词来修饰。 Passage 6 （2014新课标全国I ）假定英语课上

32、老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father， my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in

33、our back garden.Since thenfor all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to seed by themselves where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our n eighbors.Although we allow tomato pla n

34、ts to grow in the same place year afteryear, but we have n ever had any disease or in sect attack problems.We are grow ing won derfully tomatoes at no cost!答案my sister and I pla nted someyear hadthese years webeenresult, the plants are growingbefore byNearly five years a o , and with the help 石 our

35、father, agoocherry tomatoes圣女果）in our back garden.Since then for allAallow ing tomatoes to seed by themselves where they please.As asomewheretaste.There are somuch.The fruits are small in size, but juicy and .There are sothat we ofteneverywheretastymanyshare them with our n eighbors.Although we allo

36、w tomato pla nts to grow in the same place yearbutafter year, b或we have n ever had any disease or in sect attack problems.We are grow ing won derfullytomatoes at no cost!won derful1. before ago ago常与一般过去时连用；before常与完成时连用，这里谓语是 planted,用的是过去式，故用ago。2. byof with the help of.在的帮助下。3. year years 由前面all

37、these可知应用year的复数形式。4. hac have 根据时间状语inee then”可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把had变为have。5. as后加a as a result为固定搭配，译为“结果”。6. somewhereeverywhere 因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这种植物长得到处都是。everywhere至U处；somewhere某处。7. taste tasty are后面应用形容词，and连接形容词juicy和tasty。8. much many 根据谓语are可知后面应用修饰可数名词的 many,而much修饰不可数 名词。9. 去掉but或改为yet a

38、lthough引导让步状语从句，不可与but连用，但可以与yet连用。10. wonderfully wonderful 因tomatoes为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词改为形容词。 Passage 7 （2014新课标全国n ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第

39、11处起）不计分My dream school starts at 8 30 a. m.and ends at 3 30 p. m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn t need to do so many homework.Therefore we have more time with after-school activities.For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for o

40、ne hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden with all kinds of flowers and trees around which.We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind andhelpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our frie nds.答案My dream school starts at 8

41、30 a. m.and ends at 3 30 p. mThey.Thereare three less ons in themorni ng and two in the after noon.Wedid ntdontn eed to do somanymuchhomework.Therefore, we havewithmore time fThour after-schoo| activities. For examp we can do reading for one and aand play sports for one hour every day.My dream schoo

42、llooklookslike a big garden with all kinds of flowers and trees aroundwhich.satAWe can lie on the grass for a rest, or 葆 by the lake listeningmusic.The teachers here arekind andhelpfullyhelpful .They are not only our teachers but also our friends.1. TheyThere 考查固定句型。There be句型，表示“有”。故把They改为There。2.

43、 didn tdon t 考查动词时态。此处叙述每天要做的事情。应该用一般现在时，故把didn t 改为 don t。3. many much homework是不可数名词，故用 much修饰。4. with for 考查介词词义辨析。此处句意是“为课外活动留出更多时间”。5. hour hours 考查名词单复数。one and a half hours为一个半小时。6. looklooks 考查主谓一致。school为单数名词，故谓语用looks。7. whichit非定语从句，此处应为代词。8. sat sit 考查动词时态。根据前句内容可知此处是接情态动词can,故用动词原形。9. l

44、istening后面加to 考查固定短语。listen to “听”。10. helpfully helpful 此处and连接并列的两个形容词 kind和helpful。Passage 8 （2013新课标全国I ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）

45、不计分。I hardly remember my gran dmother.She used to holdi ng me on her kn ees and sing oldsongswas only four whe n she passes away.She is just a dista nt memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much.He was tall，with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years.

46、He had a deep voice which set himself apart from others in our small town，he was strong and powerful.In a fact， he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me.Howeve，he was the gentlest man I have n ever known.答案I hardly remember my grandmother.She used to 理器。

47、me on her knees and sing oldpasses _ songswas only four whe n she passed away.She is just a dista nt memory for me now.muchshoulderI remember my gran dfather very well/clearly .He was tall，with broad shoulders a nd a towardhimselfbeard that turned from black 渔。gray over the years.He had a deep voiqe

48、which set hjmapart from others in our small town，he was strong and powerful.In -a fact, he even scaredandduri ngmy classmates away whenthe gen tlest man I havenevereverknown.they came over to play or do homework with me.However，he wasPassage 9 （2013新课标全国n ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语

49、言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The book Im read ing of talks about after noon tea in Brita in .It is said to have started in the early 1800 s.Have tea in the late after noon provides

50、 a bridge betwee n lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry.Tea in China was traditi on ally drank from cups without han dles.Whe n tea got popular in Brita i

51、n, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain in dustry.答案The book Im read ing of talks about after noon tea in Britai n.lt is said to have started in the, Havethatearly 1800 sqjig tea in the late after noon provides a bridge betw

52、ee n lunch and dinn ewhh porcela in in dustry.might not be served until 8 o clock at night.This custom soonbecomes花歸 another meal oftheIn terest ing day.| nteresti ngly，it had a conn ecti onby_with/tothe British porcela in（瓷器）in dustry.Tea in Chinawas traditi on allydrank drunkfrom cups without hand

53、les.When tea got popular in Britain, there was acrying n eed for goodcupcupswith han dles to suit British habits.This made for thegrowgrowth in theB卷地方卷Passage 1 （2016 四川）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错

54、的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。It is Mother Day today.Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother Day.We get up early i

55、n the mornin g.Dad clea ned the housea nd the n went on shopp in g.Whe n he came back found a bunch of flowers in her handasked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom favoritest. At dinner,we said to her, ” Happy Mothers Day! ” Mom was grateful and moving.答案It is Mother s Day today.Though its a western festival, its popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job,sobutshe has to do most of thehouseworks housework.She is a greatmother.Both DadorandI planned to do something on Mother s Day.Wegetgotup early in themorn