英语人教版八年级下册写作课

1、全椒三中全椒三中 王宏霞王宏霞 how to better a piece of writing how to better a piece of writing 部分部分201620152014 作文作文 writing 25分分25分分20分分 better the better the layout layout (布局布局) better the better the grammar grammar （语法语法） better the better the vocabulary vocabulary (词汇词汇) better the better the sentences sent

2、ences （句子句子） better thebetter the logic logic (逻辑逻辑) how can we make the writing better ? how can we make the writing better ? better the layout (布局布局) step 1 a better layout can make the writing more clear. basic layout 基本结构基本结构 paragraph 1 paragraph 2 paragraph 3 introduction 引入引入 details 细节细节 con

3、clusion 总结总结 为了更好地开展全民阅读活动，有关部门就为了更好地开展全民阅读活动，有关部门就 如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见， 你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。 请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。 要点提示要点提示: 1. 阅读的重要性。阅读的重要性。 2. 你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地 介绍好书等）介绍好书等） 要求：要求： 1. 词数：词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。词左

4、右，开头已给出，不计入总数。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 书面表达书面表达 a piece of writing from a student(学生作文）学生作文） hello, my dear friends. as we all know, reading is very important to us. it can makes us understand the world, and it can makes us feel relaxing. i want to make more people like reading,

5、so i have some good suggestion. we can build lots of small libraries in the city. if there are more new books, people will be more interested in reading. we should keep the reading room quietly and clean. it is a public place. you cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. i hope my advices could

6、 be good . more people will like reading. do you think it is a good piece of writing? why or why not? para. 3 conclusion para. 2 details put the writing into put the writing into a better layouta better layout. . para. 1 introduction hello, my dear friends. as we all know, reading is very hello, my

7、dear friends. as we all know, reading is very important to us. it can makes us understand the world, and it important to us. it can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing.can make us feel relaxing. i want to make more people like reading, so i have some i want to make more p

8、eople like reading, so i have some good suggestion. we can build lots of small libraries in the city. good suggestion. we can build lots of small libraries in the city. if there are more new books, people are more interested in if there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. we s

9、hould keep the reading room quiet and clean. it is reading. we should keep the reading room quiet and clean. it is public place. you cant make sound or put rubbish on the public place. you cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground.ground. i wish my advices could be good . more people will like i

10、wish my advices could be good . more people will like reading.reading. better the grammar step 2 grammar plays a very important role in english writing! common mistakes in grammar 常见语法错误常见语法错误 parts of speech 词性词性 forms of words 词的形式词的形式 tenses of verbs 动词时态动词时态 exampleexample xiao ming is a middle

11、school student. he doesnt learn english careful at all. at home, he enjoys watch tv. he always forgot to go over his english lessons. carefully watching forgets parts of speech 词性词性 forms of words 词的形式词的形式 tenses of verbs 动词时态动词时态 hello, my dear friends. as we all know, reading is very important to

12、us. it can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. i want to make more people like reading, so i have some good suggestion. we can build lots of small libraries in the city. if there are more new books, people will be more interested in reading. we should keep the reading ro

13、om quietly and clean. it is a public place. you cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. i hope my advices could be good. more people will like reading. find the grammatical mistakes make relaxed suggestions advice quiet better the vocabulary (词汇词汇) step 3 better vocabulary can make the writing

14、 more vivid (生动的生动的) and meaningful. 1. 我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。 a. i hope you can help me. b. i look forward to your help. 2. 他们冲出教室去吃饭。他们冲出教室去吃饭。 a. they rushed out of the classroom for lunch. b. they walked out of the classroom for lunch. how can we better the vocabulary ? wonderful phrases ( 短语短语) can

15、 be used instead of common words. more suitable words can also be used according to the context (上下文上下文). 1. we should keep the reading room quiet and clean. 2. you cant make sound or put rubbish on the ground. 3. i hope my advice can be good. more people will like reading. noise throw / drop are su

16、pposed to useful enjoy turn the underlined words into better ones. turn the underlined words into better ones. better the sentences step 4 better sentences can make the writing more attractive (有吸引力的有吸引力的). 1. 他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。 he won the first place. he was surprised. b. he was surprised t

17、o win the first place. a. i find it really interesting to learn english . b. learning english is interesting, i think. how can we better the sentences? simple sentences can be put into complex sentences (复合句复合句) for better. better sentence patterns （句型（句型) can be used to improve the writing. 1. i wa

18、nt to make more people like reading. i have some good suggestions. _ _ _ make more people like reading, i have some good suggestions. we can build lots of small libraries in the city. lots of small libraries can _ _ in the city. 3. you cant make noise, and you cant throw rubbish on the ground. you a

19、re not _ _ make any noise _ throw rubbish on the ground. in order to be built allowed to turn the sentences below into better ones. turn the sentences below into better ones. or better the logic (逻辑逻辑) step 5 a better logic can make readers have a better understanding of the writing. 表并列：表并列：and, bo

20、th and; as well as 表转折：表转折：but, yet, however, though 表因果表因果：because, so, as a result 表递进：表递进：not onlybut also; besides 表结果：表结果：so that ; such that ; 表先后表先后：first, second, third, finally 表时间表时间：when, after, before, as soon as linking words (连接词连接词) how can we better the logic ? i like liu qian. he is

21、 a creative magician. i like liu qian _ he is a creative magician. because make sentences with linking words. make sentences with linking words. he did magic shows _ well _everyone was surprised. so that cctv spring festival gala _ he is very young, he has won many prizes. although hello, my dear fr

22、iends. as we all know, reading is very important for us. it can _ _make us understand the world, _ _ make us feel relaxed. in order to make more people like reading, i have some good suggestions. _, lots of small libraries can be built in the city. _, if there are more new books, people will be more

23、 interested in reading. _, we are supposed to keep the reading room quiet and clean. it is a public place, _ you are not allowed to make noise or throw rubbish on the ground. i hope my advice could be useful, _more people will enjoy reading. not only but also firstly secondly thirdly/ finally / last

24、ly so and fill in the blanks with suitable linking words.fill in the blanks with suitable linking words. layout layout (布局布局) 2. 2.grammargrammar （语法语法） 3.vocabulary 3.vocabulary (词汇词汇) 4.sentences 4.sentences （句子句子） 5.logic5.logic (逻辑逻辑) what is a good piece of writing ?what is a good piece of writ

25、ing ? three paragraphs few or no mistakes suitable(phrases) complex sentences suitable linking words according to relations writing task writing task 英语课堂上，老师要求学生就英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处与人相处”的话的话 题展开讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以题展开讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以“how to get on well with others” 为题，写一篇英语短为题，写一篇英语短 文。文。 要点提示：要点提示： 1. 与人友好相处的重要性。与人友好相处的重要性。 2. 如何与人友好相处的建议。如何与人友好相处的建议。 要求：要求： 1. 词数：词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出。词左右，开头和结尾已经给出。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在